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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Marketing and promotion is the key to a successful business to what extent do you agree?

The businessman started spending a big fragment of company’s budget to advertise their product offline and online to boost their revenue, especially, in recent time. It is a key attribute in success of any commercial and I strongly agree with this approach and will demonstrate my stand in the following paragraphs.

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Marketing and promotion is the key to a successful business to what extent do you agree?

The businessman started spending a big fragment of the company’s budget to advertise their product offline and online to boost their revenue, especially, in recent times. It is a key attribute in the success of any commercial and I strongly agree with this tactic and will demonstrate my stance in the following subsections.

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Some people think that the main purpose of school is to turn children into good citizens and workers rather than to benefit them as individuals to which extent do you agree or disagree?

to a certain level I agree that the role of schools is to prepare children to be more productive. However, I also believe that schools have a positive impact on us as individuals.

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It seems that many companies today are becoming much more concerned with profit than with the happiness of workers. How could companies take better care of their workers in the future? Give reasons to your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Workers are considered the backbone of any company.Hence it is vital for the association to ensure the safety and happiness of their employees.However In this profit-motivating world, companies are more concerned with their profits rather than employee satisfaction. This essay will discuss the concerns and possible solutions to this Issue.

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some feel that cities should be designed to be beautiful while others feel their functionality is more important. discuss both sides and give your own opinion

In this modern era, cities have a better infrastructure and more job opporunities. Many people like to settle live in cities. However, some people think that cities should be decorated to be beautiful while other people agrue that infrastructure is paramount in form of education, hospital and many more. from my perspective, the latter statement appear to be rational.In this essay, I will elaborate on the beneficial and adverse aspects of this thread and thus lead to a logical conclusion.

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Science and technology have improved the standards of living in all over the world. Some people claim that the role of the arts has become insignificant. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

There are a lot of traditions at tet like making Chung cake, making the 5-fruit tray, visiting ancestor’s memorials, the first footer,… and today, I’m going to tell you some of the most special traditions at Tet.

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Nowadays, even though imprisonment is an efficient solution for preventing crime, education proved to be a more efficient one. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that nowadays education proved to be a more efficient solution for preventing crime than imprisonment. I strongly agree with the latter stance, and in the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall discuss points and reasons to support my view.

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Today, many people use the internet and smartphones to transfer money to friends, family, and businesses. Is this a positive or negative development?

These days, it appears that funds transfer through the internet is getting more popular. The phenomenon could be influenced by the easiness of virtual transactions which brings a positive impacts on the people's economy.

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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new realway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In numerous nations, a few sections of individuals consider that it is mandatory to utilize tremendous amounts of money on building new line lines in order to develop rapid trains between localities. However, few folk claim that cash must be spent on amelioration for the sake of public transportation. I agree with the latter statement. I shall be discussed both viewpoints in forthcoming fragments.

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It is important for all towns and cities to have large public spaces such as squares and parks. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, many buildings exist thanks to the construction industry that is constantly developing. Some people say that it is significant for all cities to have big public areas, whereas, others support that it is not necessary for societies. In my opinion, there are many reasons why public spaces in towns are an indispensable requirement for humanity.

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Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

It is clearly seen that technology has been affordable and available to human in the current era, which allows mature people to take remote working and enables pupils to study without the need to leave their home. Debatable as it is, I hold the point of view that this advancement of technology would have positive impact on professional and educational prospects despite some drawbacks.

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Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

They say “Youths of today are leaders of tomorrow”. To become a successful leader of a country in the future, one must possess not only the ability to lead a country but also to have sympathy in everyone around him or her, especially to the elderly. I am strongly agree to this idea and will explain why in this essay.

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In developing countries, children in rural communities have less access to education. Some people believe that the problem can be solved by providing more schools

Compared with the past, the importance of education has changed all over the world. These days, we have many ways to solve the problem. Some people believe that the problem can be solved by providing more schools. I want to give the main solution to this problem in this article.

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Sometimes spouses have to live far away from each other. Maintaining a long distance relationship is sometimes difficult and straining. What do you think are the main reasons of long distance relationships? What can be done to help couples feel closer?

The issue of living far away from each other has always been a matter of debate, especially after the world had become globalized, From time to time couples have to fall apart, and continuing this relationship may be hard and force both parties. Even though there are many reasons for it, only economic and political reasons will be discussed in the next paragraphs and viable solutions to this will be given.

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is often believed that in recent times we get so many options in our life. I am firmly in favour of this statement as having so many choices may provide us with several opportunities in various walks of life.

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The continued rise in the world’s population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?

Nowadays,growth in population has become to the crusial issue in entire world.In this essay I will represent the causes of this trouble, and I am incliend to believe that this phenomenon has been one of the most catastrophic enviromental issue that nations has faced by that.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

A group of people opine that music is a better to meet people of diverse society together with ages. I completely disagree with this proposition and will present relevant points along with precise examples and bac kup my view.

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Many countries invest money to prepare competitors to join top competitions, the Olympics or the World Cup. Therefore, it is necessary to offer money to encourage children to exercise more? To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that these days there is a vast investment done in athletes to participate in competitions in the Olympics and the World Cups. The question is, should countries apply financial incentives for children to promote sports activities? I completely agree that we should invest more money in students to encourage their physical health state. In this essay, I am going to elaborate more on my view.

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In some countries, it is illegal for companies to reject job applicants for their age. Is this a positive or negative development?

Some countries have a policy of not accepting potential workers due to their age, which can be either too young or too old. Although it might seem justifiable for a reason to reject job applicants for their age, I personally believe that it is a change for the better.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Currently, some countries have included a number of the young adult population rather than the older population in the situation I reckon that this is an advantageous position.

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