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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some people argued that history is of little or no use. Others believe that studying history give many benefits. Discuss those views and give your own opinion?

There are argumentative ideas heating up a debate over whether it is crucial to learn history. While some claim that it is useless, the opposite makes a statement that it plays a paramount integral role. While the former is valid to some extent, I consider myself an advocate of the latter.

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Some people prefer to spend their ;ives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, believed that change is always good thing. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reaons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own expierence.

Some people do just one thing during their whole life without another different kind of sector. Thus others prefer to try anything they want to do. Both have their own good sides. But I would say people should always make changes in their life.

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Tourism has emerged as one of the biggest industries of this decade, but its disadvantages cannot be overlooked. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Needless to say, the rising number of tourists over the past years is due to the low cost of flights. In many countries, tourism becomes the most significant source. However, nations need to pay attention to the potential threats brought by this trend. I strongly agree with this thread. In this essay, I will elaborate more detail on the positive aspects of this trend and thus lead to a logical conclusion.

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40分钟分钟完成项：有些。：有些有些每天天花几几个小时小时在智能手机上。。为什么为什么这样？？您认为是的的积极的，并包括你自己的知识或经验中的任何相关例子。至少写250个字。

，越来越如今人孩子花太时间在然而然而然而然而然而然而然而然而然而然而然而然而然而然而然而然而是否是否应该过度使用使用智能手机手机手机是是是一一个有有争议争议的的的的。我我同意同意同意同意同意同意同意同意，对于，智能说，智能智能可以朋友交流的。这这是因为技术的的发展发展让我们我们不不再再需要需要面对面交谈covid covid 19大期间期间比如，很多期间，很多都拿着手机手机课课，不课课课课课手机，不不不影响影响不影响影响影响影响学习学习学习。而学生们资料资料资料资料查找查找很长并不说说玩玩手机会更多例如例如例如例如例如例如，如果如果。。。。缺点缺点如果如果如果如果他们他们他们花很长长长时间时间看看看看电子电子设备设备会对对对他们的的。总之总之花时间智能手机有很多。认为有有积极积极和和和消极的结果需要。但是但是但是但是但是但是但是但是我我原因有我有积极消极消极。。。但是，我。。。。。仍然认为认为认为这这这是是积极的而而不不是是消极消极的。。许多年轻年轻人人人花使用使用智能手机手机手机手机需要考虑。但是，我仍然认为这是积极的而不是消耗的。孩子们花很多时间在他们的智能手机上。然而，儿童是否应该过度使用智能手机是一个有争议的问题。我主要同意前一种观点，理由如下。首先，很明显，对于大多数人来说，智能手机可以作为与朋友交流的工具。这是因为科技的进步让我们不再需要面对面的交谈。因此，有必要为孩子使用智能手机。此外，学生可以使用智能手机来帮助他们的学习。例如，在covid 19大流行期间，许多学生都有手机上网课，因此不影响学习。而学生们可以通过手机查找资料，学习到很多专业知识。所以孩子使用手机的时间会变得很长。这并不是说孩子玩手机会花更多时间没有缺点。例如，如果他们长时间看电子设备会对他们的视力产生影响。此外，父母应该管理孩子使用智能手机的时间。综上所述，许多年轻人花时间使用智能手机的原因有很多。我认为有积极和消极的结果需要考虑。但是，我仍然认为这是积极的而不是消极的。children spending much time on their smartphones. However, whether children should overuse a smartphone is a controversial issue. I mainly agree with the fo...

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In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move to regional areas outside the big cities. What are the advantages and disadvantages?

Decenterlization is a huge trend that is affecting the business world nowadays. Most governments are taking a step forward and encoutaging business owners to move to rural areas. This step has positive and negative aspects that will be discussed in this essay.

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Young people are leaving their home from rural areas to study at work in cities. Do the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?

Major cities' populations are increasing constantly because they provide people a lot opportunities. So many young people immigrate to these cities from smaller ones or villages. I believe advantages are more than disadvantages.

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Playing games teaches us about life. Do you agree or disagree with this statment? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

It is irrefutable that games are playing an imperative role in our life. Especially children can learn plenty of things and increase their social as well as physical activities owing to the games. I completely agree that games can teach very important things to us that will help us in the future.

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Some Parents think that watching television and playing computer video games is beneficial for children development some say it has a negative impact on children development.Give opinions on both the ideas with e.g.

There are many theories about the influence of watching television or playing video games on new generations. Someone thinks it could be an opportunity ,however other people tell the opposite.

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7. > How do movies or television influence people’s behavior? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answers.

Nowadays, watching some films, unconsciously, influences our ways of life.

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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is import for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Few individuals claim that nowadays children have the freedom to do anything without any permission such as eating various foods, buying garments, and, watching videos, and it is tended to be kids mean full and only think about themselves. The importance of flexibility was always debatable and has now become more controversial. With many individuals believe that it is beneficial. While others reject this notion. In my, opinion the position of freedom appears to be more rational. In this, essay we will further elaborate on the positive and negative impact of this notion and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.

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Nowadays, people can live and work anywhere they want because of the development of communication technology and transport. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

These days thanks to communication and transportation technology citizens can freely choose where to work and start a living. It is deniable to claim there are no disadvantages. In this article bellow two of both pros and cons will be explained.

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some people think that robots are very important to humans future development while others think they are dangerous and have negative effects on society . discuss both views and give your opinion

Some argue that machines with artificial intelligence are critical to improving people's futures, while others argue that the invention of robots is a risk that can have negative consequences for society.I believe robots are crusial becouse without robots we cannot be achive the production that is required.

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Some people argued that history is of little or no use. Others believe that studying history give many benefits. Discuss those views and give your own opinion?

There are controversial perspectives heating up a debate over history. While some claim that the history is inapplicable, the opposite makes a statement that learning history brings advantages. While the former is valid to some extent, I consider myself an advocate of the latter.

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The resroration of old buidings in major cities around the world costs enormous amounts of money. this money would be better spent on new housing and road development .to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

The renovation of old buildings in main cities over the world is expensive. These expenditures would be better invested in new housing and infrastructure such as road development. I totally agree with this point of view because the effectiveness of renovating old buildings is relatively low. When these funds are invested in amenities, they help to improve people's lives and the country's economy.

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Some people argue that thanks to the widespread accessibility of the internet, libraries are no longer necessary. Do you agree or disagree?

With an increase in the usage of the internet worldwide, mankind has moved towards a digital approach for most of their daily chores like banking, education, shopping, and many more. Tasks like reading and writing have been drastically changed since the onset of technology. Some people believe that the online educational platforms can replace the traditional libraries as there are various options and they are easily accessible. I, too, agree with the above-mentioned statement and this essay will discuss the same.

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Some people believe that children's leisure activities must be educational, otherwise they are a complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree?

It is commonly think that pupil's entertainment activities should be educational and if not waste their valuble time. But I disagree with this statment because we should give them priority for make decision about that.

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the resroration of old buidings in major cities around the world costs enormous amounts of money. this money would be better spent on new housing and road development .to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

The renovation of old buildings in main towns over the world is costly . this expenditure can be invested on new buildings and infrastructure improvement such as road development. I totaly agree with this point of view becouse effectiveness of renovation old building is quectionable.

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Some people believe that there will be a reduction in air travel in the future. Do you think that this trend is positive or negative?

Many people think that there will be a gradual decrease in travelling by flight in the upcoming days. Others feel that this change has never happened. There are many pros and cons regarding this matter. But I support the notion because aircraft produce lots of emissions that are harmful to our ecosystem as well as have a detrimental effect on the economy.

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Some people argue capital punishment is a brutal decision and should be abolished. Do you agree or disagree?

In the last period, the population is divide into two groups of opinion about the death sentence: a part believe that is an extreme choice and wants stop this practice, while another agrees with it. In my opinion the judical murder is wrong, so I disagree for different reasons that I am going to explain in this essay.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary schools rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

In the current globalization era, a culture seems to be easier to be exposed to the different side of the World. It is argued by scholars that another language in addition to native language is taught to primary students are better than secondary students. In my opinion, this topic is widely open for this discussion.

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