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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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It is generally believed that the Internet is an excellent means of communication but some people suggest that it may not be the best place to find information. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

As globalization grows rapidly in this era, the Internet becomes a prime pivotal media in many aspects of life. Some public stated that the Internet could be the perfect place to communicate, but some also argue that it might not be a great place to gather accurate sources. The writer will discuss both of the stated views and also the perspective for the motion.

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Many believe that to be successful in a particular sport, having a natural ability is more important than training and hardwork. Discuss both views n give your opinion.

Numerous individuals claim that natural ability plays a vital role in sports rather than training and hard work. Perhaps natural ability gives us perks of technique. Yet, practice makes everything perfect. In my, opinion the position of practising and ability which have gained naturally appears to be more rational. In this, essay we will further elaborate on the positive and negative impact of both approaches and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.

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Many offenders commit more crimes after serving their first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

It is clear that the number of times to violate the law by some criminals, who accomplished their first penalty, would be growing. In my opinion, it is because the imposed punishments cannot help them realize the significance of obeying the law, which can be solved by enhancing costs and providing lectures.

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Nowadays television and the Internet have a greater influence on children’s behavior than their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People have different views about the new generation. And how they focus on modern technology more than talking with their parents. However, I agree that there's a noticeable effect on the Kids these days. So we will discuss it in this essay.

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Some people think that older school children should learn a wide range of subjects to acquire more knowledge, while other people believe they should learn a small number of subjects in details. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, there is always an argument about letting children in older school study a wide range of subjects. I believe it has both positive and negative effects on elder communities learning various courses or focusing on several courses.

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Nowadays television and the Internet have a greater influence on children’s behavior than their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are contrasting views as to who has a greater influence on a child’s behaviour in today’s time, whether it is the parent or the internet. As per my opinion, the internet’s influence is unparalleled, but it cannot be compared to the magnitude of that of a parent, and this essay will explain why.

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It is important for people to take riske, both in their professional lives and their personal lifes. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

Life is unexpected, and there are possibilities that things will not get in the way of planning. That is why some decisions are defined as risks. Although risk-takers are appreciated for their courage, and some are recognized as well-known inspirational people, this topic still needs to be debated.

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Some people think the technology makes life complex, so we should make the life simpler without using the technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Technology has continued its development for years and these developments have affected positively effects in society's growth. In contrast, some nations ponder that machinery makes life complex, and they do not want complexity in their lives. This opinion does not suit me. There are numerous things to deplete this idea.

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some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes ( for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The unpaid community plays a important role in society. It is a great opportunity to consume information and knowledge from there. But, others reject this notion. In my, perspective the position of this issue appears to be more rational. I strongly agree with this argument. In this, essay we will further elaborate on the positive effects of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.

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In the past, many people had skill such as making their own clothes and doing repair to things in the house. In many countries, nowadays, skills like these are disappearing. Why do you think this change is happening? how far is this situation true in your country?

In olden days, people were skilled enough to sew their own outfits and repair household items. However, these skills seem to be vanishing in recent years due to a variety of reasons. This essay illustrates some factors contributing to this change and discusses the present day situation in my country.

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Many people believe that cooking is an essential life skill and should be taught to boys and girls in schools. Others disagree and believe it is a waste of school time. To what extent do you agree?

Recently, society has been debating whether it is beneficial for children to have meal preparation classes in school. In the present essay, I will express my opinion on the topic.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. What might this be the case? What could be the disadcantages of being self-employed?

There is an upward trend on establishing own business and reaching financial freedom, respectivly. It can be seen that some people try to undersdant the background of this idea and figure out the possible bad sides of this mentality. In fact, creating a new kind of a profession or a work to serve society has a huge amount of risk due to the posibilities of lack of experience and financial crises.

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Some people say that playing computer games is bad for children in every aspect. Others say that playing computer games can have positive effects on the way children develop. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is argued whether playing computer games helps children’s life development or not. Personally, I think playing games is a good approach to improving children’s problem-solving and collaboration skills. However, it could also cause adverse effects on their mental and physical health.

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Some people think that universities should provide graduate with the knowledge and the skills needed in the workplace. Other think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer. What is your opinion, should be the main function of a university?

Certain individuals opine that tertiary education should give students critical skills needed in society ,whereas, others think it is not the responsibility of the universities to do that. Instead, tertiary schools must be concerned about running regardless of the courses it offers. I, however, think that universities should offer useful degrees to students. The essay below will discuss these views at length.

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Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in team sports, like football. While other people think that taking part in individual sports is better, like swimming. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

While many believe that playing sports in teams offers more benefits to the players, others argue that solo sports such as swimming grant people ideal chances to develop themselves. In my opinion, the latter draws my support.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In this day and age, almost all companies and professions are faced with numerous and various tastes and demands due to globalisation, and this has made the competition tighter and more intense than before. As a consequence, businesses should focus more on fresh items and new options of their outcomes, and introduce them in their commercial to have a place in this competition. Although this issue probably has pros and cons points, it seems to me that it is considered a positive development.

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Some people think that because some children find some subject such as mathematics and philosophy difficult, they ought to be optional instead of compulsory. To what extent do you agree?

It is true that might few juvenile facing problems with subject such as statistics and psychology because it is hard to read and atleast options should be available for middlers who think that it is tough. In my, opinion the position of choosing the subject appears to be more rational. In this, essay we will further elaborate on the positive effects of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.

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Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Whether the punishment should be fixed for each type of crime or should consider the circumstances of an individual crime and motivation. In this essay I will present both sides of this issue and conclude by giving my own point of view.

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The best way to solve world’s environment problem is to increase the cost of fuel. Do you agree or disagree and give your own opinion.

Currently earth is in dangerous period of time. one of the biggest concern is the air condition in many nation is in horrible situation. goverments in many country were trying to increase the cost of fuel to improve the existing situation. in my opinion this is not the best way to solve the problem

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmers (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Recently, people have been debating if the younger generation should volunteer for community work as one of their extracurricular activities. In the present essay, I will express my opinion on the topic.

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