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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some People believe that childhood is the best stage of happiness. While others believe that a person can enjoy more happiness in other stages of life. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some argued that early years is the best stage of life. However, other believe that one can enjoy more in other stages of life. In my opinion, although in childhood there are less responsibilities, I believe that the other stages of life are fill with happiness as people become independent.

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in many countries, not enough students study science subjects. What are the causes? What will be the effect on society? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Science units are important due to its useful and neccessary. In contrast, lacking student spend time on this subjects in numerous countries. There are plenty of noteable reasons for this situation and how it has negative impacts on our society.

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In modern times, children are spending less time with their families and more time with their friends. Why has this change occurred? Do you think parents should force their children to spend more time at home?

Nowadays, children spend more time with their friends than with their families. This change has occurred because children do not want to feel left out amongst their peers and parents should not force children to stay home because they will resent their parents for it.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business, and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.

It is not true that sharing information as possible in scientific research, business, and the academic world is good for the public. The information who possesses has the power to access it either in terroristic aspects or in saving lives. I think that information that could save lives through public health care such as COVID-19 vaccination should be shared freely. Otherwise, information which causes to threaten naive people should be kept confidential.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.

Many people believe that focusing on saving endangered plants and animals supports essential environmental issues. With certain amounts of time, there is a continuous cycle from plants to animals in the particular environment where we live together. There is a linkage between plants and animals in an environment that should be protected.

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The leaders or directors of organizations are often elderly people. However, some sat that young people can also take the lead of organizations or companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent generations, there is a global trend about older people being the chief executive officer in an organization, I completely agree with this decision because they are more exposed to and experienced in the game than youngsters.

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Some people say that adversiting is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people argue that people with highly qualified in a profession should work in the nation where they were trained, while others believe that they can be work wherever they want. Although requiring them can increase the number of experts in a country, their right to get better job opportunity and improve their career belongs to them.

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In some countries, there are not enough medical or educational facilities in rural ares. Therefore, some people believe newly graduated teachers and doctors should be sent to work in rural area for sometime. Other people think that people should be free to choose where they work after graduation. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

As the world continuous to grow, problems following the expansion also grows rapidly. As the human population is expanding every day, and in order to have a good life they need an expert medical attention. While, this statement also throw some light, on how the competition to be ahead in life gets tougher.

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Influence of human beings on the worlds ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of biodiversity. Causes and solutions

It is an irrefutable fact that human activities, over the years, have drastically impacted our natural ecosystem, thus leading to the tragic extinction of many endangered species. Notwithstanding, this essay will delve into the causes behind this unforeseen occurrence and provide some solutions to this menace.

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Mobile phones and the Internet have made it easy to stay in contact with other people. However, as a lot of time is spent using telephones and computers, there is less face-to-face contact and direct communication. Is the growing use of communications technology a positive or a negative development for society ?

The world is growing at an advanced rate, and tech is one of the main reasons why. Nowadays anything is possible by a click of few buttons. The more time human spend on tech to improve it or expand it, more spiralled we get into it and before we know it we are dependent on it. Technology can be seen as both positive and negative as it is such a big topic to discuss.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we are no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In the modern life advertising has significant role in our dairy life. Some people believe that advertising is successful in getting people to buy more things, while others believe that advertising is just for attention. In this essay I will discuss each aspect and express my opinion.

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Some people should give healthcare the first priorities; somre others believe there are more important priorities to spend the taxpayers' money. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

t is believed that governments should spend taxes on providing healthcare service, facilities firstly, whereas other people believe other things are much more important than healthcare. While I understand other areas, such as infrastructures, job opportunities, education, should be financed healthcare should be prioritized. I believe that healthcare should be the main concern of the society fro some reasons.

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Some people say that spending the national budget on space exploration is a waste of resources. They insist that those funds should be spent on people living on earth. Do you agree or disagree?

We are living in an advanced world. People's lives has become more sophisticated in terms of standard of living what it used to be earlier because of the development in the field of research and science.However, there is notion among some folks that instead of allocating the country fund on astronomy research, those funds should utilise on pupils residing on earth. I am not firmly agree to this and my perspective to this will be outlined in the following paragraphs.

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Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?

Some people choose to buy a lot of toys for their children to play with, so the children are not being reliant on friends’ existence. Although it can help the very young ones to build their creativity, having too many trinkets may lead them to experience a bad social relationship with others and could grow their tantrum habit.

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In many professional sports, there is an increase in the number of athletes using banned substances to improve their performance. What are the causes of the phenomenon and what are some of the possible solutions?

The number of sportspeople using illegal substances to improve their performance has increased in many sporting events. This essay believes that many athletes are taking banned substances to win the competition and exceed capabilities beyond their limits. This can be prevented by requiring athletes to take drug tests before the competition and punish them if they have violated the rules.

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ome people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some would say that parents should teach their offspring how to be good members of society, while others are of the opinion that school is the best in this regard. This essay agrees with the latter point and will show that, despite the practical experiences that parents give their children, school lessons can give deep insights into what it takes to be good citizens.

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Some believe that in many nations, it is necessary to spend a lot of money to build new railway infrastructure for fast trains between cities. Others feel that the government should spend money to improve existing public transportation. Discuss both of these perspectives and give your opinion.

I’m surprised to receive a gift from you on my birthday, so I’m writing to thank you for this lovely demonstration of love and care. I’m in tears since I got it in my hands!

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A knowledge of maths is not important for most jobs nowadays. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Maths is one of the nightmare subjects in school times for most kids. However not knowing numerals is not a disadvantage. Most jobs these days are now based on sales, marketing and customer success.,Still there is a lot of emphasis on math because high paying IT jobs require one to be good at mathematics concepts. Let's discuss both views and then I will give my opinion on this.

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Over time, as children grow older, the relationship they have with their parents changes. In your opinion, what role should parents have in their adult children’s lives?

Parents are a crucial part to children's upbringing as they are their main example to follow. However, in child's adult age their roles change completely as they are not anymore the ones who make decisions. This essay will explain the role that parents can play during adult stage.

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Nowadays many individuals work for long hours more than considering time for recreation. This issue has both benefits and drawbacks. I personally argue that disadvantages are more than advantages.

There are some benefits to working more than having leisure pursuits. Firstly, people can work overtime to make more money in order to have high-quality entertainment even if it is too short. Take employees earning a high salary for extra work as an example; they can have better hobbies in their holiday. Another advantage might be getting a job promotion. People devoting themselves to companies are more likely to climb the career ladder since they will become more skilful. To take intern engineers in companies as an example, they work full-time even on the holiday and then become senior engineers after a period and may get a high-power job in the future.

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