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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Nowadays on-line shopping has become more popular than in-store shopping. Is it a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.

Mr Adam White is being referred to your care. He will be undergoing a colonoscopy next week as scheduled and will be requiring your expertise and health teachings.

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Some countries are struggling with an increase in the rate of crime . Many people think that having more police on streets is the only way to reduce crime. To what extent do you agree?

To Begin with, smuggling and snatching have a very inferior effect on everyone’s life all over the World, due to these activities population are not feeling safe living in their own country. Many people believe that having more police on the roads can be the only solution to decrease crime in some countries. From my point of view, this can be the solution to some extent.

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As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Job satisfaction is one of the most priliminary factor for a happy professional carrier for adults. Many factors are considered to have a satisfied job. In most of the cases people work in a irrelevent job may be due to the family pressure or compulsive requirement they may not have job satisfaction in reality. In this essay, I will explain the reasons for doing such compulsive jobs wih out interest.

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It is very clear that English should be the primary foreign language taught in all schools around the world. Learning a different language before English is, in today’s world, a waste of time. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

English is obviously one of the most widespread languages on Earth. Despite that fact, I completely disagree with the idea, that English should be seen as the only option for a primary foreign language.

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The amount of time is spent on sports and exercise should be increased The amount of time is spent on sports and exercise should be increased in school in order to tackle the problem of overweight children. Do you think this is the best way to deal with this problem? What other solutions can you suggest?

Outdoor games play a vital role in our everyday life. It gives so many benefits to our body and any type of physical activity prevents us from various diseases.

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The cost of flying has decreased significantly over the last decade. This has made overseas travel much more accessible. Discuss advantages and disadvantages

Airplanes have become the safest mode of transport, thanks to our emerging technology. This has led to a sharp decrease in fares, and traveling overseas with ease. In this essay, I will outline what I consider the potential advantages of air transport, and some negative outcomes that I feel are likely to occur.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion ? What sort punishments should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour for children?

In this contemporary world, it’s very significant for every human being to know the difference between right and wrong so that anybody can take their decision wisely. At early stage, children should learn about good and bad. punishment is important to help them to learn this diversity. I agree that punishment takes place a great role in shaping their future.

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Immigration has a major impact on the society. What are the main reasons of immigration?

I am writing to express my interest in studying for the Master of Engineering Program "Electrical and Computer Engineering" at University of Saskatchewan. My choice of studying this course is to strengthen my knowledge and improve my skills in Power systems, and Communication Technologies. I am currently working as a Mechatronics Engineer, having a total of 6 years of experience, out of which 2.5 years in the industrial sector, and am currently looking forward to moving on to the next stage of my career. Having good knowledge of electronics, electrical and mechanical design, I was able to achieve any given task with innovative ideas, which resulted in better performance. However, I am still eager to learn more and advance in my career.

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Some people say that the only way to get success is to go to university. Others say that it depends on other factors. What is your opinion?

Nowadays, Everyone prefers to complete his undergraduate studies, rather than get a job or start their own business at an early age. Some believe that going to university is the only way to be successful, while on the other hand, others believe that being successful depends on another factor, despite going to university. In my opinion, going to college is very important to be successful in future.

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Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all schools subjects .But other Believe that teenagers should focus on the subject that they are best at or they find the most interest .Discuss both views and give an opinion.

There has been much discussion revolving around the issue of whether students should learn every presented subject in school or it is better to let them focus only on those lessons they are excited about. In this essay I am going to present both views and give my opinion.

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Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more diadvantages?

These days, numerous individuals expend more and more time at their employed and lesser time for chill out. From my point of view, it has more cons than pros but also has disadvantages. In this essay, I will examine both positives and negatives conversation issue.

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Crime rate, in most countries, is often higher in urban areas than in rural areas.

It is observed that a considerable proportion of crime rate happening around the developed cities in present-day, which usually/ regularly seems to be higher than that in other rural areas. This phenomenon can be attributed due to several factors; however, I believe that there is a reverse/separate truth behind the above bare reason which would be discussed objectively along with the feasible solutions during the course of this essay.

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Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a persons culture and character from their choice of clothes? Do you agree or disagree?

Some individuals argued that dresses indicate the human personality.In order to get information about ,culture it is enough to look at a person's style of clothing.I partially disagree with this statement.

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In spite of advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

Beyond the shadow of a doubt, the more technological development and advancement in every people’s life aspect are made, the less the level of life’s difficulty will be; however, remarkable advancements in agriculture do not result in welfare for every individual around the world, and some of them are still hungry. I contemplate that the aforementioned issue has some reasons and can be improved by some measures that I am going to describe in the following paragraphs.

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Some believe that technology, such as mobile phones, cell phones are destroying social interaction. Do you agree or disagree?

It is true that the advent of technology such as smartphones brings people countless merits. However, it is also argued that it have ruined social interaction. This essay agrees with the given information because it is obvious that people interacts with each other less than before.

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Some people work for the same organisation all their lives.Others think it is better to work for different organisations.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

While working for the same company or different companies is a matter of choice, it has its own advantages and disadvantages.

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Some people think that offenders should be put in prison. Others, however, believe that providing offenders with education and training is more effective than putting them in prison. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Offenders are the ones who have committed a crime , that somehow affects the moral fabric of our society. While some public thinks that the best way to deal with such criminals is to put them in prison, others, ,however, prefer providing them with education and training. This essay will throw light on both these views along with my opinion

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

Taking risks is a significant thing in our daily life and working. The view point have both of benefits and limitations.

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Recent advances in medicine have resulted in an increase in life expectancy over the past four years. Do you think that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

since medical treatments have progressed, many people expect to live longer than before. Although there may be some positive consequences of this trend, I believe it is more harmful.

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A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not well-managed. What are the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world? Do you think that the benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?

• In our modern life, many places all over the world depend on tourism as a most significant reference of revenue. Regrettably, tourism can also be a source of difficult situation if it is not well-managed. From my point of view,many tourists bring a lot of advantages to the host country, moreover it invited some disadvantages as well, which cannot be ignored. In this essay , I will discuss the pros and cons of tourism.

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