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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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The best curriculum is not one based on a static body of knowledge, but one which teaches students to cope with change. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that the main purpose of schools prepares their students for their future lives and the improvement of countries. Although some social members believe that school authorities are responsible to design a curriculum just based on knowledge and scientific content, in my point of view the better action is to prepare pupils to cope with challenges.

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when a country develops technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out, it is pointless to try to keep them alive. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

When technology is developed in a country, the older dexterities and methods of spending life vanishes. It is of no use to keep practicing them anymore. I believe that technology should be focused on, however the older techniques should not be forgotten.

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Many people think that the best way to learn a culture is to learn the language of it. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

There are various approaches to learning a new culture. Some people argue that the optimal way is by studying its language. Personally, I believe language learning plays an essential part in the study of different cultures.

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Governments in many countries are urgently seeking ways to reduce unemployment in rural areas. What are the most effective ways to do this? which measure do you think would be the single most effective step that government could take?

Joblessness in rural areas is undeniably a growing concern around the world. Governing bodies are trying heart and soul to bring down the scarcity of jobs in rural areas. This essay will discuss the most imperative ways to decrease nonemployment in rural areas.

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Taxing Industries, corporates and individuals based on their environmental footprint is the only way to save the environment. Do you agree with the statement? Give your opinion.

To save the environment stringent tax system should be used . One of the ways to protect the environment is Carbon credits for corporates. Whereas individuals can opt for pollution spread fees. Many people argue that having a tax policy based on pollution emissions done by corporates and individuals is a right to step taken to protect the environment. Lets us discuss both views before i draw my conclusion.

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Some people believe that car free days are affective ways to reduce air population. However, others argue that there are other ways that are more effective. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion .

Today more and more community feel that designed car-free days are successful ways to bring air population. The advocates of this view argue that cars should be few to reduce air population. Others, however, disagree and believes that there are alternative ways that are more and more effective.

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Some people think the Olympic Games are exciting and can bring nations together. Others, however, think that it is a waste of money. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some are of the view that the Olympics are astonishing and can bring countries to common ground whereas others think its a decay of finances. While the games itself have opportunities for individuals it can be a paradise for fraud and mismanagement.

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It is often said that retirement is happiest time of one's life. How far do you agree with this view ?

In general, our world population is ageing consistently and the concern about retired generation is rising noticeably nowadays. It is said that retirement is the happiest time of one's life. But it seems to me that this is not definitely a confirmative statement because there are still many situations that we need to look deeply into it to confirm the above comment.

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In many countires, there are an increasing number of private cars. What are the advantages and disadvtanges of this trend?

In recent years, an immense amount of cars are in the streets that the vast majority of them use individually. So, increasing number of private cars have both benefit and drawback. However, I believe in, its disadvantages is obviously more than its advantages.

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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, children are expected to compete in all aspects of life. However, imbibing the youths with a sense of compassion is equally necessary. Both views have been discussed in the following paragraphs below.

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It is often said that retirement is the happiest time of a person's life how far do you agree with this view

In general, our world population is aging consistently and the concern about retired generation is rasing noticeably nowadays. It is said that retirement is the happiest time of one's life. But it seems to me that is not definitely a confirmative statement because there are still many situations that we need to look deeply into it to confirm the above comment.

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Some people say that increasing prices of petrol is the best way to reduce traffic jams and pollution. Do you agree or disagree?

The importance of minimise carbon emission for envionment was always debatable now has become more controversial. Many people claim that high prices of petrol will reduce traffic and its pollutions while others reject this notion. In my opinion, the latter preposition appears more rational and in this piece of essay. I will elaborate the reason and thus lead to logical conclusion.

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Some teachers think that changing subjects with every lesson will help their students focus more. However, other teachers think that offering their students several lessons on the same subject in a row will help them focus more. Which opinion do you think is better?

Teaching is for sure not an easy task at all, it takes hard labour and good knowledge to transfer the learning among the students. The teaching method is not rocket science which needs to be similar for all, it may vary from teacher to teacher as well as the grasping quality of the pupils is not the same also. So we can not actually depict which would be the best method to make the students focus more.

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Topic: Nowadays more and more people consume fast food on a regular basis. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

In this modern era,most people prefer to have fast food over homemade items in day-to-day life. Eventually, this bad trend might cause serious illnesses, obesity and even the sudden death of a person. This essay will discuss all possible merits and demerits of consuming restaurant food.

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Many people believe that the increased presence of violence in films and television these days in responsible for the rising incidents of violent crimes among youths in society. They argued that government have a duty to control the media so as to reduce this phenomenon. Do you agree with this argument?

While community is divided into two genders such as female and male, they tend to have own weeknesses, drawbacks and advantages. There are several types of requirements which lead to work in specific jobs such as intellect, physical power and mentality. I partly agree with this statement.

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Do you believe that professional athletes make good role models for young people?

Expert sportspersons, Who play sports very well, are nice persons for people, that are growing up, to follow. While I agree that people should learn from them, I believe that they have something we ought not to study.

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Unemployment remains the biggest challenge for school leavers. To what extent do you agree? What other challenges do young people face today?

n the present age, unemployment continues to be a huge challenge for school leavers. I believe that this is true in the modern day economy with companies requiring work experience from young people and the government trying to keep an unemployment rate. However, unemployment is not the only difficulty that youth faces today.

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Nowadays online shopping is extremely popular. Discuss the impact of it on the environment and on people who lost their jobs because of it. These days Internet shopping is increasing getting popular. Discuss the impact on climate and on the individual who lost their employment?

Nowadays, people are more willing to shop online than going to the store. This particular change has an impact on the environment and society. I am going to illustrate my point of view below.

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some people say History is one of the most important subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is often argued that the story about the ancient times plays a crucial role in education. However, some folks opined that nowadays, with the rapid of technological growth, STEM (Science, Technology, Engineering, and Mathematics) fields are the most important and for some extent, I agree with this stance.

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There are many inventions in human history, but some people think that the most important invention is the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is known that multinational events that bring together people of different nationalities and cultures include sports, cultural, business events, various types of entertainment and more. One way or another, the World Cup should not be counted the most unifying element that connects countries and continents. In my opinion, the superlative in graduation is calculated according to the more significant indicators.

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