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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some people focus on news in their country, while others think it is more important to be aware of international news. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Obtaining news to date is an indispensable part in people’s lives. While it is believed by some that national news should be the sole focus of readers, I believe that international news is of equal importance.

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Some young people find school difficult and leave early without any qualifications. What causes this problem and what measures could help reduce it?

For some students going to school and studying is not desirable and they drop off school before their graduation from there. in my opinion, there are two main reasons for that issue and also two possible solutions to improve it.

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These days people get more information about world with the help of media. Advantages and disadvantages of mass media.

In this day and age, mass media gives a large amount of data about the world to people.The following paragraphs take a look at both advantages and disadvantages of the argument.

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As the number of cars increases, more money has to be spent on road systems. Some people think the government should pay for this. Others, however, think that car users should cover the costs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Local Community Mental Health Team Copper Mental Health Team Perth Australia September 20, 2022 RE: Mr Jake Cruz, 24 years old. Dear Team, I am writing in regard to Mr Jake Cruz, who has Major Depression accompanied by deliberate self-poisoning. He is for discharge today and he needs your support and management. Mr Cruz presented with troubled sleep and a lack of the mood. Although his mood is decreasing, he is improving and has a low risk of self-injury and no suicidal ideation at present. Additionally, he demonstrates a better response to Cognitive Behavior Therapy after one-on-one counselling. Medically, Mr Cruz had the first episode of DSP and Major depression a year ago. In addition, he sees a psychologist intermittently. Currently, his second self-poisoning symptoms prompt him for admission. He was been prescribed Mirtazapine 30 mg. Mr Cruz, a permanent resident is living together with his mother, he has been depressed, subsequently, and his wife divorced him a yea...

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Modern technology has being used more and more in different aspects of our lives, such as education. Do the advantages of using technology as an educational tool outweigh its disadvantages?

Everything has two sides and modern technology in education is not an exception. In the past, most people do not have knowledge about technology while today the whole world depends on it in a variety of different sectors of our lives ,especially in education. The essay will discuss why using modern technology in institutions is superior.

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Influence of human beings on the world’s ecosystem is leading to the extinction of many species and loss of biodiversity. What are the primary causes of loss of biodiversity? What solutions can you suggest to protect endangered species and biodiversity?

Despite knowing about biodiversity’s importance for long time, human activity has been cause massive extinctions of different species. This essay will examine the main cause of loss of biodiversity and possible solutions to this problem.

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Some people think that teenage years are the happiest times of most people's life. Others think that adult life brings more happiness in spite of greater responsibilities. discuss both these views and give your opinion.

We used to hear, you should spend a live life while you are still a teenager because after this period, it will be the real life. Also, young people are waiting to become an adult because they want to whatever they want without permission from their parents. Then when you grow up, you want to be a child again. People has never satisfied themselve their place. It is the common thing that they think. For this essay I will elaborate my perspective on both topic in the next paragraph.

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Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society.

Social networking sites, for ,instance Facebook, are thought by some to have had a detrimental effect on individual people as well as society and local communities. However, while I believe that such sites are mainly beneficial to the individual, I agree that they have had a damaging effect on local communities. With regards to individuals, the impact that online social media has had on each the individual person has clear advantages. Firstly, people from different countries are brought together through such sites as Facebook whereas before the development of technology and social networking sites, people rarely had the chance to meet or communicate with anyone outside of their immediate circle or community. Secondly, Facebook also has social groups which offer individuals a chance to meet and participate in discussions with people who share common interests. On the other hand, the effect that Facebook and other social networking sites have had on societies and local com...

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Some people think that drug addicts should be treated like criminals and sent to jail, while others believe that they should be treated like patients and sent hospital. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Drug intake among the youth has increased at a fast pace in recent years. Many people are of the view that drug addicts are criminals and should be imprisoned. On the other hand, few believe that they should be sent to hospitals and that proper treatment should be provided. This essay will discuss both the views and opine on the fact that not all drug addicts are criminals and assistance should be provided to these people like normal patients in some cases.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

Many people believe that the online news will replace traditional newspapers and books, and people will no longer have to pay to read anything. I partially agree with this statement, however, there are many articles that are not completely free for people to read.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

A recent controversy revolves around the most fundamental aspect; the question of whether to buy newspapers or to utilise modern technology to read the content online at free of cost. This essay disagrees with the notion and discusses some supporting points against the fact that online content can never entirely replace existing newspapers.

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For Many people, the the reason they work hard is to earn more money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today's digital world, where every step of life has big competition, everyone wants to do hard work and make a decent amount of money. According to a large number of people, men work hard to earn more cash, I completely agree with the present statement and in the given essay, we are going to delve into this further.

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A recent study showed people in developed countries are not as happy as they were before development. What are the causes of this and what are some possible solutions?

In the contemporary world , studies reveal that the people of the developed nations are not much-satisfied compared to the past when they were in the developing stage . Well, there are numerous reasons which create this problem like expenses, cut-throat competition and inflation . This essay will further discuss the causes and later provide a viable solutions.

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In cities and towns all over the world the high volume of traffic is a problem. What are the causes of this and what actions can be taken to solve this problem?

Nowdays trafiic is a big problem in many cities. From big cities to small town overall globe the issue of traffic is esclating. In this eassy we will be discussing some problem which causes the traffic, wheras on other hand we will be discussing some of the relavant solution of the cause.

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For Many people, the the reason they work hard is to earn more money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Money is very important in our lives in the time of age, and many people work their hardest to earn as much of it as they can. I disagree that people should only work for money, I believe that working should be about something bigger than money.

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Some people think that space exploration is a waste of resources while other think that it is essential for mankind to continue to explore the universe in which we live. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Space study and experiences have become controversial topics these days. Many people advocate that exploring the planet is not essential; however, others believe it is vital for humans’ survival. This essay will discuss both opinions and explain why the advantages of search outweigh the disadvantages according to my opinion.

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It has often been suggested that the reintroduction of capital punishment would deter the ever increasing rate of serious crime. What is your view? Do you think that capital punishment should be reinstated?

It is indeed true that the level of crime has been rising at an alarming rate across the globe. A school of thought suggests that capital punishment will be beneficial to mitigate the number of heinous crimes committed by offenders.This essay will discuss why the crime rate will be reduced through capital punishment.

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Some parents think that childcare centres provide the best services for children of pre-school age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is considered by some parents that kindergarten is good for their child. While other working parents think that their children are safe and learn more at home with elders of the family. In my opinion, I believe preschool centers enhance child learning skills, while grandparents are also a safe option for kids who are unaware of the bad intentions of strangers. On the one hand, parents want to give the best of everything to their children, they want to see them achieve every milestone on time and because of this they send them to childcare centers. For instance, if carers feel that their kids are behind others or have some exceptional learning qualities then they think they should admit to pre-school to sharpen their abilities. Pre-schools are working hard and providing kids with up-to-date learning activities. They are hiring nice, friendly, and experienced teachers who love their students. On the other hand, working parents who do nine to five jobs feel that it's good for their ...

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Buying things on the internet, such as books, air tickets, and groceries is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

Purchasing goods online like books,air tickets,and kitchen items are very popular these days.I strongly believe modern technology makes our life easier and more comfortable.I agree with this statement online shopping business growing more and more.In this ,essay I will discuss the advantages as well as the disadvantages of buying goods using the internet.

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Many old buildings are protected by law because they are part of the nation's history. However, some people think old buildings should be knocked down to make way for new ones because people need houses and offices. How important is it to maintain old buildings? should history stand in the way of process?

Recently, the phenomenon of T1 and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that matters of N1 are highly beneficial, such as issue is regarded thoroughly as both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I highly believe that N2 can be a plus and I will investigate that throughout this essay.

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