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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Not enough student around the world choose to study science subjects at the university. What are the reasons for this? What impact does this issue have on society? Give your reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Technology is rapidly changing the lives of people around the world, creating a high demand for university graduates with background in science. However, the number of students studying relevant subjects is well below the required level. This problem seems to caused by outdated preconceptions, which determine young people’s choices today.

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Nowadays, it has become common for students to take a gap year between school and university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Living in today’s modern world, school leavers are gaining a wide range of stresses. This is due to the competitive college admissions. Many take a lot of time preparing for their university matriculation instead of reflecting on their professional goals. While it is general for school learners to take a gap year to find their own interest and seek out answers for their big questions in life, others hold an opinion that it is a waste of time. This essay discusses both positive and negative aspects of the aforementioned statement with various reasons to support each point of view before the conclusion is reached.

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Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the government of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In many less developed countries around the world, the essential public sections like healthcare, education and business are in urgent need to be improved to make sure these parts are functioning well. Some people think it is the duty of those rich nations to help the poorer countries in such areas. I tend not to agree with this notion.

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society others say that schools are the best way to learn. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In this modern era, some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society, while others believe that schools are the best way to learn instead of family. This essay will be examined both viewpoints and give some suggestions about it.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high level of sugars which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Concerning medical problems such as diabetes,some people believe that food that contains a lot of sugar should be sold at higher prices to reduce sugar consumption. I personally, however, disagree with a such an opinion, because it is not practical to decide how much the price should be raised for each product, and because the effect of price change would be limited similar to other highly taxed commodities such as tobacco.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high level of sugars which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Concerning medical problem such as diabeses,some people believe that food contains much sugar should be sold in higer price to reduce sugar cunsumption. I personally, however, disagree with such an opinion, because it is not practical to decide how much price should be raises for each product, and because the effect of price chage would be limited similar to other highly taxed commodities such as tabaco.

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Some people think that all university students sould study whatever they like. Others believe that they shoyld only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.

A majority of the population supposed that people should take courses they are favoured of. On the contrary, some argue that the choice of one’s major for undergraduate study should take into account of its practical qualities in the near years to come. In this essay, I would like to include both views and provide a revelation of my opinions by examining some examples.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high level of sugars which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Concerning medical problem such as diabeses,some people believe that food contains much sugar should be sold in higer price to reduce sugar cunsumption. I personally, however, disagree with such opinion, because it is not practical to decide how much price should be raises for each product, and because the effect of price chage would be limited similar to other highly taxed commodities such as tabaco.

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The consumption of world’s resources is increasing dangerous rate. What are the causes and solutions?

There are more and more researches and articles providing proof that our Planet's resources are being abused and overused; which certainly should raise a concern about its dangers. In the essay I would like to mention one of the causes, such as the consumeristic mentality being promoted in the media and possible solutions in form of education and awareness campaigns.

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Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how?

The English language showers an ample amount of opportunity since it is used by most people in the world. Although it is used widely, People will not die just by not learning English. Certainly It crucial to learn English to maintain the pace with the growing world. Ensuring the survival of the Local language by the people is equally important. Below I will discuss more on the importance of both languages.

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In your opinion. What has been the most significant transportation innovation of the past 200 years? Support your opinion with reasons and examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, we have been developing several essential transportations from the model of the past. In my point of view, In previous many hundred years ago, in my country, people still travelled to other places by boat as the river is the main road now and then and the hugest way to traffic.

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Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others, however, disagree. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

I received an Email a few days back from our Human Resource Team related to sharing of personal information of all employees. I want to share my views about the Pros and Cons of it.

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Tourism has been a good source of revenue in many countries and government should promote the industry. Do you agree or disagree.

It is believed that government must improve tourist attractions because it contributes to a significant increase in the amount of income for an increasing number of nations around the world. I completely agree with this statement the impending essay will discuss the same with a logical conclusion.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

There is no doubt that these days life getting more and more difficult and people who need to improve must face some risks to have a perfect opportunity in either their professional and private lives . In my perspective the benefits of taking risks are more than the drawbacks , in this essay I will explain both sides and draw up my own conclusion .

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Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children.

With the technological advancements in recent years, computers are becoming more and more integrated into today’s society. This increase in adoption means that people, and youngsters ,in particular, are being exposed to computers more often. Some people praise this development, whilst others believe that daily use of a computer imposes a negative effect on young people. This essay will elaborate on the latter standpoint.

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Some people think tourism should be banned while some disagree. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

nowadays, some people believe that government should stop people to travel in different countries. others think that tourism is a basic need of countries to develop in future. In this should discuss both sides and give your personal point of view.

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Some people think that new houses should be built in the same style as the older houses in the local area. Others disagree and say local authorities should allow people to build houses in the style of their own choice. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People have different views on how people should do in free time .while some argue that is crucial to do some activities that improve mind during the leisure time , others believe that free time just for resting and relaxing. eventually , I want to discuss these opposite views and give my input into the matter .

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be c compulsory part of high school programme(for example working for charity ,improving the neighbourhood, teaching sports to younger children) To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is an undeniable fact that " Education is the most powerful weapon used to change the world ." However , few masses opine that learners must perform community services like doing charity job , giving knowledge regarding sports without salary along with academics as a part of their high school programme . I partly accord with this statement . In this essay , I will discuss both views before deriving a meaningful conclusion.

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IN SOME PLACES, WORKERS ARE REQUIRED TO RETIRE AT A SPECIFIC AGE. IN OTHER PLACES, WORKERS CAN RETIRE WHEN THEY CHOOSE. IN YOUR OPINION, SHOULD THERE BE A MANDATORY RETIREMENT AGE FOR ALL WORKERS?

Some people should not retire from their job at the stipulated age. I believe this is uncomfortable and can cause very problems.

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Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and work of art by using a computer. Do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that people can see historical monuments and work of art by using computer.

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