IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 791

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Because of improved technologies in communication and transport, people in some countries can now choose to live and work anywhere they want. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In this current modern world, technologies in communication and transport have become essential, thus people in some countries can now choose to live and work anywhere they want. In the essay, we will discuss about the pros and cons of this statement.

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Many different countries have most shops and products as the same. Some consider it a positive development, whereas others consider it negative. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In this contemporary era,some proponents discern the view that globalization helps all countries to have common goods of high quality, while others are against this claim.They do not consider that the merits surpass the demerits. However, I am a staunch believer that economic growth depends on the country itself .My contention will be further explained.

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I recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers trave to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or a negative development?

Nowadyas, people have more buying otipons, it can be seen, that popularity of big shopping mall, is increasing day by day, as a result, local shops are lossing their clients. From customer's point of view, this is a positive approach. People can buy many things at one and other facilities. Prices can be control due to compitions in the market.

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Some people think that government should spend money on railways. Others believe that there should be more investment into new roads.Are you agree or disagree

In the recent past, the state has been spending huge amounts of wages for the community’s growth. A school of thought suggests that authorities should utilise some funds for the development of railway lines instead of expressway.I,however,believe that authorities should not only spend on railways but also equally devote themselves to byways for the better advancement of society.

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With the increasing demand for energy such as oil and gas, people start looking for new sources in remote and untouched places. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

With increasingly demand for energy, people start searching some new sources in rural areas or remote places. Although these can invade the wild and disturb animals, it allows getting the energy supply to maintain country's economy and citizen life. I believe these advantages far outweigh any potential disadvantages.

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In the future, robots will do more and more jobs instead of humans. Does this development have more advantages or disadvantages?

In this technological advancement era, robot will soon be norm. Many of the task which are performed by humans will soon be replaced by machines and robots. In my opinion this change will have more benefits than drawbacks.

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with growing population in cities , more and more people live in a home with small or no outdoor areas. Is it positive or negative development.

In this contemporary era, population rate of each country is increasing swiftly; therefore, it created demand for residential houses. As a result many individuals started to buy and live in accommodation with no open air spaces. In my perspective, this trend triggers adverse effect on house owner's mental and physical health.

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People who live in busy cities are in many ways at a disadvantage to those who live in rural areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

.Many people who live in bustling towns and urban areas are at a disadvantage to those who live in small villages and countryside areas. In this essay, I will either agree or disagree with this statement. Firstly, I will discuss the benefits of finding work and health care whilst living in a city. And secondly, I will explore the positives, the social aspects of living in an urban area. In my opinion, one of the great advantages to living in a city is the economic benefits that it can bring. For example, it is true that many large and wealthy businesses and corporations operate in large towns and cities. I just noticed I repeated a large in the same sentences try not to repeat vocabulary too often. For this reason, people often find that they can gain employment a lot easier than they would if they lived in the countryside. Furthermore, it is also true that in a metropolitan area, people have more access to health care and quality hospitals. In addition to this, the wa...

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The world has seen an enormous increase in flights for leisure,business and commercial purpose around the world over recent years. What do you think are the main advantages and disadvantages of such flights? Do you think flight should be texted more?

It is an undeniable truth that the world is unimaginable without an air journey. In fact, it is indispensable. However, in the past few years, it has been observed a surge in the number of flights. Just as every coin has a flip side this change, for sure, brings both positive as well as negative impacts on our life. I would elucidate the pros and cons in the following paragraphs and opine that

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

Children should know what is wrong and what is right when they have a small age and it is parents' duty to learn them.when children do not want to learn it may be caused by punishment.I completely agree with this opinion.

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Environmental degradation is a major world problem. What causes this problem and what can we do to prevent it?

In the 21st century, the most important threats faces by societies around the globe is deterioration of their habitats. Poor drainage systems with waste disposal sites and use of sub standard soil chemicals have contributed greatly to this worrisome trend. Adequate sensitisation of the people on the benefits of utilizing good flow channels and development of guidelines to regulate industrial producers is essential in averting this menace in our whole environs.

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University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies. Do the advantages of studying abroad outweigh the disadvantages?

The trend of studying aboard among university students is currently increasing. Although studying abroad can decrease their quality time with their parents and siblings, students can gain more academic achievements. In my opinion, studying oversea will give students more opportunities in many aspects, even though they have to be apart from their parents and siblings, but that will be worth it in their future life.

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Some people think that the increasing use of computers and mobile phones in communication has negative effects on young people's reading and writing skill. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The use of laptops and smartphones in today's society is increasing so rapidly for purpose of communicate each other. It is believed that it had adverse affect on reading and writing skill of individuals. I partially support this statement. This article will discuss both aspects and a reasonable conclusion.

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Some people think that media have the right to publish details of people's private lives, while others think it should be controlled. Discuss both views.

Most people thinks that media has a right to establish citizen's personal life, whereas others do believe that it is needed to be controlled. This essay will discuss both the views with examples.

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they become totally out of control. In my opinion, I strongly disagree with the statement and the reasons for this will be discussed in the forthcoming paragraphs.

In recent years, great attention has been given to the subject of pollution

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In many countries, plastic containers have become more popular than ever. They are used in many businesses, for example, the food and drink industries. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Plastic containers irrefutably are becoming more and more ubiquitous in our daily lives. However, due to their detrimental environmental impacts, public opinion remains divided over whether or not to penetrate the use of plastic packaging. Despite being a contentious issue, numerous industries including food and beverages are still using plastic items to store their commodities, While this trend has certain benefits, I would contend that they are eclipsed by more significant drawbacks.

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Goverment has responsibility to its citizens to ensure their safety.Therefore,some people think that the goverment should increase spending on defense but spend less on social benefits. To what extent do you agree?

Social benefits help in the growth of the country. I partially disagree with the statement that the government should invest more in defence rather than social benefits for the safety of their citizens. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument in the subsequent paragraph.

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Young are encouraged to take a year off after finishing high school in before the university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this

Many young people are suggested to work or go on a journey a year before the commencement of University. The recommendation for this essay will be that the experience of gaining and earning money for tuition fees or extra expenses are great benefits, however, decreasing emotion on studies and delaying careers are dominant disadvantages.

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Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In last few years, medical treatment has surely become a sort of luxury, rather than a necessity. Many people may hold on to the view that paying money up front provides faster treatment. However, I belong to the group of individuals who concur with the idea that having free health service is more beneficial. This essay will articulate my opinion and agreement regarding the benefits of free medical treatments.

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Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

In the modern scenario, people have to pay entrance charges for many public places. Even a number of museums are charged, while rest are free of charge. It is agreed that benifits surpass the drawbacks of applying tickets for entering to museums since, conjestion would be reduces as well as money could be allocated for renovations.

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