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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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what are the main problems associated with using social media plateforms ? What are the most serious problems associated with the it and what solutions can you suggest?

Social media is booming technology platform in nowadays rather than any other sources, countless mankind is uesd across the globe. However, there are some troubles releated to using these kinds of technologies, creating fakE account for cheating people and unreliable marketing advertisements are the serious problems. This essay will discuss the main issue and how to tackle this issue with effectively in briefly.

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Some people think the best way to succeed in life is to get a university education, while others disagree and say that is no longer true nowadays, discuss both views and give your own opinions.

Do all people who succeeded in life have got a degree? Certainly not. Neither degree nor a university education has not led them to be a success. Sometimes, world-recognised innovators and entrepreneurs had chased away from the school saying they are not good at education. So, it is worth finding out what brought them to be such outstanding successors.

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some people say that parents shoud encourage thier children to take parts in organized group activities in thier free time,others say that it's important for them to learn how occupay themselves on their own. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

My first point of view about the topic, exactly the first point: encourage parents, I agree completly because is the best way to grow the childrens social skill and give very strong in the personal development these activities are very important in the school, college or univeristy and in the future of the childs in her adult life is when they show that skills and make is succesfull lifes.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

In this new era, with the advancement of technology, some people think, in the new future newspapers and other traditional methods of reading will be diminished. Because all of people will acsess free information by online apps. I agree with this statement and I will discuss my opinion.

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It is too expensive to look after and repair old building .Tho money should spend on building new modern buildings instead .To what extent do you agree or disagree.

As many buildings have been built across the world, it is easily seen that there are a number of aged buildings. Though quite much money is being spent on them, some argue that the money should be for buildings new ones rather than repairing old ones.

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Consumer behaviour has changed considerably in recent years due to technology. In what ways does technology affect consumer activities such as shopping? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, technology has changed as a result human behaviour has changed. The merits of this field outweigh the demerits.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

It is hard to deny that alternative medicines and treatments help people to get rid of health problems, and we should encourage this way to promote our medical influence. Such a fact leads impressionable people to generate the opinion that we should try plenty of medicines and treatments to keep healthy. However, such a statement suffers from both logical and factual fallacies. As far as health and feasibility are concerned, I strongly hold that we ought to visit doctors regularly.

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Some people think that is a government should be responsible for improving public health. Others, however, believe that everyone in the community should take part in this issue. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

After the recent global pandemic general health of the messes is largely discussed. According to some people it is on the state to control the medical situation, while other believes it should stem from each individual. Both the views have their own merits and demerits which will be analyzed in the upcoming subsequent paragraphs.

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes ( for example working for charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to young children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Certain percentage of people claim that public works have to be a mandatory component of the higher school program. I disagree with this statement. This essay will provide reasons why this statement is a not good idea.

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Some say that news has no connection with most people’s lives and it is a waste of time for most of us to read newspapers and watch television news programs. Do you agree or disagree?

Well, I can say that the topic of the meaning of news in a person's life is not debatable for me. Moreover, I am happy to share my personal reasoned opinion.

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Some people believe it is essential to include physical education classes in the curriculum for all school-age children. Others think that children's time is better spent on more academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion

The School schedule is full of different subjects. One type of them is undoubted, another has numerous questions. One of the second type of subject is Physical education. Should Physical Education be part of the school schedule?

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Colleges and universities should require all faculty to spend time working outside the academic world in professions relevant to the courses they teach.

Learning from the real-life experiences could be the best way to perceive the knowledge heartily which may be last forever. That’s why, teachers should be bounded by the college and universities to work and see the things outside the academic life or theoretical view to practice the learning in real life example. I mostly support the prompt and will argue that why I have taken this stance within this disquisition.

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Some say that news has no connection with most people’s lives and it is a waste of time for most of us to read newspapers and watch television news programs. Do you agree or disagree?

It is thought by some people that following news on newspapers or on TV news programs, has no benefit for their lives. I disagree with this idea and I believe everyone should follow what is happening in his or her country and in world.

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Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employee. What, in your opinion, should be the main function of a university?

It has become debatable whether Universities should deliver some essential skills and content which is required at job sites or should provide fixed courses irrespective of their use. In my perspective, the true motive of an educational institute should be to give certain useful knowledge to its learners since it is necessary for them to get a stable job and University itself would receive some name and fame.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers/books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is often argued that in some years anyone will adquire printed stuff such as books, newspapers or magazines due to people will find it online for free. Although, I guess that this situation could be dramatic for independent libraries, I support that the population could have all of these resources in the Net for free.

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Some people believe that childhood is the best stage of happiness. While others believe that a person can enjoy more happiness in other stages of life. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Happiness is a feeling which varies from person to person. In the opinion of many,

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Many people assume that the goal of every country should be to produce more materials and goods. To what extent do you agree or disagree that constantly increasing production is an appropriate goal?

In the present age, globalisation has put a pressure on every country to mass produce. That is why many people think that it needs to be the prime target of all nations. Personally, meanwhile I believe that this is crucial for the economic growth, I cannot completely agree with the statement, since some countries should concentrate more on other spheres.

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Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving a car or motorbike. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the present age, every family usually owns more than one car, and naturally, when children in the family become of age, they are eager to get their driver’s licences. Some people believe that raising the minimum age for driving a vehicle is the most effective way to prevent accidents. Although I agree, that the age increase could play a big part in reducing the number of car accidents, I cannot fully support this view because I believe that there are other equally important means that can be taken.

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Some people think that it is the responsibility of the government to ensure that people in the country have healthy lifestyles. Other people believe that individuals should be free to decide their own lifestyles. Discuss both opinions and give your own idea.

There are conflicting views regarding whether the lifestyles of individuals should be decided by themselves or ensured by the government. This essay will analyze arguments from both sides before deducting my personal opinion.

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many people strive to maintain a successful career and happy family at the same time.what problems can this create?what are the possible solutions?

The utmost desire of every individual is to maintain a work-life balance for a bright future and a pleasant family. This essay intends to explain two major effects on human health and suggests some viable remedies to curb the grave concerns.

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