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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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DOCTORS, NURSED AND TEACHERS MAKE A GREAT CONTRIBUTION TO SOCIETY AND SHOULD BE PAYED MORE THAN ENTERTAINMENT AND SPORTS CELEBRITIES. DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE.

The debate that which vocation makes a greater contribution to the society has gone long enough. Many people believe that Doctors, Nurses and Teachers have a larger contribution to the society, and hence they should be compensated more than the celebrities from sports or entertainment industry. I wholeheartedly disagree. In this essay, I will discuss the positive impacts that these celebrities make to our society, and the factors that should be considered while deciding the pay of any profession.

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Many doctors say that people in today’s world do not do enough physical exercise. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions are there to this problem?

In this era of globalisation, lifestyle has changed a lot and society try to adjust to the varied situations. New innovations and technology make life easygoing. The easier life is, the more vulnerable we are to fatal diseases due to lack of action. However, there are certain ways to ensure that people are starting it again, which this essay will explain and will state the cause for this issue.

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Some people think that sports involving violence, such as boxing and martial arts, should be banned from TV as well as from international sporting competitions. To what extent do you agree?h

Nowadays, Martial arts are not just a means of entertainment, they have also become a source of income for athletes and countries as well, but the fame of this sport has many disadvantages, and I will mention some of them.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays,we often find ourselves surrounded by all form of advertising .while some people believe that advertising has become so wildly spreed that it does not influence us as it used to ,it is considered by many .a successful toll of getting us to purchase things I side by the later opinion and the following paragraph will further illustrate.

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It is important for people to take risk, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, A person who takes a risk or has the ability to read or understand between the lines is successful. There was a time when people always advise others to avoid risky situations and try to make decisions on logical grounds but now that theory is changing rapidly. In this essay, I will discuss both advantages and disadvantages of taking risks and share my findings.

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Some people think job satisfaction is more important than job security. But others believe that people cannot always enjoy their jobs and having a permanent job is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, almost everyone wants to find a suitable job after graduate. However, whether the work position is security, if they can work for long time and how satisfy with their job is a controversial problem. In my opinion, what we need most is not only a job, but safety and enjoy in so that we can work for long time.

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Some people think that paying taxes is their only responsibility towards society while others feel that everyone should do more. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some individuals believe paying taxes is the only responsibility of them to society, whereas others think there are much more things that all should do to the world. In my opinion, the latter is more reasonable because it will produce more educational significance to society and make the world better.

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Some people use social media to keep in touch with other people and news event. Do you think the advantages of this technology outweigh the disadvantages?

Many individuals in the world have advanced technical knowledge. In which mostly social platforms are highly busy with individual contact with family and friends and knowing current affairs. I would accept and stick to the advantages of the concept that outweigh the disadvantages.

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Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is undeniable that history is one of the most important school subject. However, there is opposite opinion for this statement and people believe that in 21ct century Science and Technology are more neccessary subjects. From my point of view, I strongly disagree that sci-tech subjects are in the first place. In this essay I will give explanation to my opinion and provide information about both views.

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Many people argue that museums and art galleries should present the nation's art, as opposed to artworks from other countries.

In this contemporary epoch, museums’ exhibitions have become a controversial argument. Whilst some proponents emphasize that art galleries should present the national artworks, some opponents and I adopt a diverse stance because the merits of displaying foreign works of art exert a great deal of influence on inhabitant. In this essay, my contention will be further explained.

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Nowadays, obesity is increasing in a rapid pace. The reasons of it and how to tackle this issue

In this contemporary world, obesity has been on the rise. A significant number of people is obesed due to some reasons such as poor food choices and lack of exercises. This essay will consider why obesity is inclining in this new era and a suggested way to curb it.

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As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In a modern society, it is encouraged that young people should develop an enterpreneurship mindset and build up their own enterprises. It is clear to me that the more money the business makes the more responsibilities to the society it should take.

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Today’s food travels thousands of miles before it reaches customers. Why is this? Is this a positive or negative trend? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

At the present food go through long distance before consumers get chance to buy it. Globalization makes it possible, and i believe that this is dangerous trend because long traveled food needs various chemicals to preserve it. I do write my ideas with proper explanations in my forthcoming paragraphs.

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In some countries and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing .what do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

Few nations and their levels of health and fitness are going down. I think there are many reasons behind it and I will discuss them in my upcoming essay.

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Many cities have serious problems with traffic congestion. What are the causes of these problems and what are some possible solutions?

In recent times, the traffic is one of the most distracting issue that people face, because it leads to difficult problems to day-to-day life. In this essay, I will first suggest the biggest problem by this phenomenon and provide some possible solutions for the traffic.

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In the past important knowledge of culture and history was stored in the museums. Nowadays information is freely available on the internet therefore is no need of museums. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Museums are both a knowladge hub that showcase the history and culture and also act as a guardian preserving the historical valuable items. With emergence of information technology, some argue the museums can be completely replaced by online platform. In my opinion, museum would never be replaced by any media since the learning experience and academic discussions it creates cannot be done over the world wide web. Internet would not replace the museums.

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

It has been suggested that high school students should be involved in unpaid community services as an obligatory part of their curriculums. I completely agree with it because the students will not become selfish and they will be socialized.

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Some people say that television is useful for education, while others say it is useful only for entertainment. Discus both views and give your opinion.

Television was one of the pivotal inventions made by humankind. Many people say that television is helpful for education, while others believe it is used only for entertainment. I think this device can be used as a source of knowledge. This essay shall discuss details of my stance with examples in subsequent paragraphs.

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Childhood obesity is becoming a problem thoughout the developed world . Because of this , some people think that adverts for fast food , sweets and sugary snacks should not be allowed in schools and colleges . To what extent do you agree or disagree with this ?

It is often considered that in the contemporary era obese problem rising among children. Due to this, few masses believe the advertising of junk meals, sweets and sugary snacks should be banned in schools and colleges. In my, inclination advertisement should be banned in school and colleges. I partially agree with the statement which leads to a conclusion also.

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the rise of convenience foods has helped people keep up with the speed of the modern life style . what are the advantages of this trend ? do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

these days, instant food getting popular among the people . the constant increase in instant food has fruitful for the people which contain the speed in luxury living style . in this essay both give benefit and disadvantage of the this trend.moreover,there more drawback than having advantage.

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