IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 796

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some people believe that children have the freedom to make mistakes, while others argue that adults should prevent them from doing so. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Mistakes are the integral part of human life. Even, practice of mistakes is most common among kids. However, the freedom of making mistakes among children have always been a question of debate. Some believe that, kids having their own freedom to do the things, others think elder should have control over them. The upcoming paragraph, I shall discuss both of these views precisely to obtain a path forward to this subject.

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It is observed that in many countries not enough students are choosing to study science subject. 🔻What are causes? 🔻How can this situation be improved?

It is an undeniable fact that " education is a powerful weapon that can be used by people to revolutionise the world ". However, only a few scholars opt for science subjects for their secondary education in various nations . This essay intends to enumerate some comparing causes behind this ever-increasing trend and will also enunciate the ways to improve this situation.

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In future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying What extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The graph chart illustrates the population of tourists, who visited a specific island in the Caribbean Sea, between 2010 and 2017, with two types of accommodation: staying on a cruise ship and staying on the island.

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Young people who commit serious crimes should be punished in the same way as adults. Do you agree or disagree ?

Most of the citizens believe that teenagers who are involving with serious offence have to be cursed similar to the adults. I strongly disagree with the statement, because I believe rather than punishing the same way redirecting and helping the juvanile to understand the seriousness matters. This essay will depict why same treatment as adult should be avoided when in comes to punishing young adults.

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Although it is generally illegal, physical punishment continues in many countries. Some argue that parents should have the right to punish their children in this way. Do you agree or disagree?

It is hard to deny that physical punishment still happen everyday in many countries even it is certainly illegal which rise lots of attention from a large proportion of people to this topic,and there still have some poeple who think that they have the right to punish their children. From my perspection, i hold a strong point that children should be treat in correct way without physical punishment which should be deep in everyone's mind and behavior since it is relate to the future of the country.

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Traffic jam brings a lot of problems to our life. What are the problems? What are the solutions?

The world is moving at a rapid pace. Modernization is the essence of a booming society. The population in our society is expanding at an alarming rate. To cope with the commute-related needs of our masses, the number of vehicles is rising at a sharp pace. I strongly feel the rising vehicle number is going to be a matter of crisis for the future.

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Some individuals believe raising the minimum legal age for driving cars or riding motorbikes is the most effective method of increasing road safety. While I accept that this policy is good to some extent, I believe it is not the best because there are much better measures to reduce traffic accidents.

There are so many laws that should be put in place that are best measures to reduce traffic accidents and among rules, raising the minimum legal age for driving motorcycles is by far not one of them.

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More and more people today are moving away from where their friends and family live. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

These days, lots of people are migrating from their hometowns and countries where they could live with their companions and families. There are numerous advantages and disadvantages to this decision which will be discussed in the following paragraphs. As far as I am concerned, the drawbacks outweigh the benefits.

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Many working people get little or no exercise during the working day or in their free time, and hand health problems as a result. Why do many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

People are working so hard that they deprive themselves of physical exercise that is good for their bodies and good health, in the next paragraphs I will explain why many working-class people do not get enough exercise.

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Some people believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn and should not pay any tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people are unwilling to pay taxes as they consider tax as a burden, which would reduce their disposable income. I believe that levying taxes is essential, because without tax revenue, a country is not able to function well.

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Many people believe that it is a good idea to have a dress code at workplaces. ‎Do you agree or disagree with your statement? Give your opinion and ‎examples from your own experience.

It is generally thought that having a unique dress code at offices is an excellent proposal. Considering employees from different financial backgrounds and communities they live in ,it would be better if every worker can wear a uniform.This topic has been profoundly discussed and I will point out my perspective before coming to a conclusion.

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Nowadays, children spend too much time watching TV and playing computer games. Some people believe this has negative effects on children's mental abilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

As they say,Too much of everything is bad.Nowadays,Children spend too much time watching TV and playing games.This has negative effects on children's mental abilities.This statement is true as an excess of everything is bad.There is some advantage as well disadvantage of both.

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Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this argument and then give you

Nowadays, in the contemporary world the technologies become popular and use in education area. Some people consider computer is the virtuous arsenal for students, while others think it can reflect harmfully. Personally, in my opinion a breakthrough technology can increase capability of pupil. This essay will examine both sides

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There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

It is true that nowadays various types of music are existing. Analyzing requirements of people morality, to listen music is one of the basic activities which is humanity needs it.

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Many people think that every individual is responsible for their happiness, but people believe there are other external factors that influence us . Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Numerous individuals believe that they themselves are accountable for their happiness. While others opine that external stimulies are responsible to lead a happy life. Although, materialistic forces certainly helps an individual to be happy. This essay is of a opinion that happiness is a state of mind and can be attained by feeling contented from within.

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To meet the growing need for food to support an increasing population, a country should make use of edible insects as a food source. However, some people believe that insects are not only unhealthy but harvesting them will also negatively affect nature. What are the benefits and drawbacks of eating insects? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The scarcity of food supplies has been one of the alarming issues in the world. Some people believe that using insects for food purposes would help to increase supplies due to their availability and cooking simplicity, while others are of the opinion that it would mostly bring negative consequences in the form of diseases and bird extinction. This essay will analyse the advantages and disadvantages of this. One of the striking benefits of consuming insects is their high abundance. Indeed, every country could be proud of its own variety of insects. If talking about food consumption, the number of insects significantly exceeds the human population which would allow people to balance out the decreasing supplies of food. Another positive aspect of edible insects is that they could be easily cooked. It is no secret that people prioritize their time spent on work over household activities such as cooking. Using insects would decrease the time for food preparation and it wou...

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Many efforts have been made by countries to address challenges concerning the environment but the situation have not improved. What are the possible reasons for environmental degradation? Are there any solution to combat this problem?

It is undeniable that governments pour a lot of effort in order to solve environmental problems even though they gained little. There are several causes for this environmental decay, but measures could certainly be taken to solve the problem.

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School Children should choose the subjects they study from a young age and stop doing subjects they find uninteresting.” How much do you agree with this opinion and why? Give reasons and examples to support your answer.

Selecting the courses which school students are studying since childhood and should not take those subjects which they do not want to study. I completely agree with the given mandate and will explain some of the reasons why children should continue their favourite subjects in future.

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what are the main problems associated with using social media plateforms ? What are the most serious problems associated with the it and what solutions can you suggest?

Social media is booming technology platform in nowadays rather than any other sources, countless mankind is uesd across the globe. However, there are some troubles releated to using these kinds of technologies, creating fakE account for cheating people and unreliable marketing advertisements are the serious problems. This essay will discuss the main issue and how to tackle this issue with effectively in briefly.

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Some people think the best way to succeed in life is to get a university education, while others disagree and say that is no longer true nowadays, discuss both views and give your own opinions.

Do all people who succeeded in life have got a degree? Certainly not. Neither degree nor a university education has not led them to be a success. Sometimes, world-recognised innovators and entrepreneurs had chased away from the school saying they are not good at education. So, it is worth finding out what brought them to be such outstanding successors.

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