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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.

Parents have influence on their children decision specially when their young. However, I think that this level of influence has decreased over the years and now young people are more independent when making decisions. I will explain why I feel this way in the next paragraphs.

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Advertisments of snacks and toys have a great impact on children and their parents. So, the advertisement to children should be banned. Do you agree or disagree.

In this present world, the promotion of snacks and toys has a huge influence on families. Therefore, this action should not be allowed by the authority. I completely agree with this idea: because children might get unhealthy and fat by consuming junk food, and some kinds of toys could affect scion and their attitudes.

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Some claim that studying abroad has great benefits for a student’s home country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Studying abroad has an enormous impact on many aspects of our lives. Some people believe that it might have a significant impact in the future, while others are convicted that there is no dissimilarity between home and abroad education. While I agree that being educated out of the home country could be more effective than at home.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Individually people believe that increasing the number of sports complexes would help to enhance society's health, while others feel these facilities could not solve health problems and it only small affect their life because people's behaviours are required for healthy life. This essay will argue that sports complexes are the best answer and education is a more suitable option. I will discuss both sides of the essay.

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Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Learning global language is more essential than learning local languages. If individuals do not know it would be high risk. In my opinion, everyone has to learn English. Without english life would be very useless because we can not catch a lot of opportunities.

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Even though globalization has some very positive effects, we cant forget its negative effects. What are the disadvantages and advantages of globalization?

There are certain positive aspects of nationalisation however, it has several other drawbacks attached to it. I solely agree to this statement, In this essay I have discussed both positives and negatives about it.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the acdemic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is considered by many that information should be widely shared particulary in the field of research ,business and academics,while other believe that this info is so pressious that this behaviour should be prohibited .this essay will discuss both this argument and also illistrate why sharing any peace of information can benefit an entire nation,

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Some people believe money is best gift for teenagerswhiel others disagree.discuss both views

The new generation of youth has great ambitions and wishlists to do during their free time. Most adults are unlikely to buy the best gifts which fit them all. In reality, having enough cash to spend, is very meaningful for all age groups.

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All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars replace them. Do you agree or disagree?

The issue of employing the use of electric cars has been controversial. It is often argued that the use of vehicles fueled with fossil should be prohibited, to allow those that use electricity to operate. I totally disagree with this argument due to the high cost associated with electric automobile and the reduction in employment rates.

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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There are two opinions about higher education. One part of people reason that is right if university students can choose any subject, which they want. Second part insists that students should learning only these subjects what they will use in the future especially science and technology. I am more close to the last suggestion. However, I think it is important to understand the benefits and disadvantages of each position, so I propose to discuss them in this essay.

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Successful sports professionals, such as football stars, earn much higher salaries than people in other important professions. Some people think this is unjustified and unfair. What is your own opinion. Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is opined by some people that, successful sports professionals should not get a much higher income than people in other important professions. I disagree with this view.

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Some people think that developed countries have a higher responsibility to combat climatic change than developing countries. Others believe that all countries should have the same responsibility towards protecting the environment. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Due to the dangerously increased climate change and pollution, some individuals claim that developed countries are more responsible for combating these changes than underdeveloped ones, while others envision that everyone should contribute to the protection of nature. This essay will elaborate on these two viewpoints and also discuss why I personally agree with the fact that all societies should act together.

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Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

It is notable that many adults choose not to give birth soon in life and there are numerous reasons for this decision. From my perspective, I think the positive aspects overshadow the drawbacks.

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social media is promoting communication between people . do you agree or disagree ?

In recent years, there is a growing recognition of the popularity of social media which is replacing face-to-face interaction among community many societies. This essay will discuss advantages and disadvantages of this issue.

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Some parents want their children to read-only educational books and consider entertaining books a waste of time. Do you agree with their opinion? Why?

Parental monitoring plays a crucial part in orienting the young's development. Some parents prefer their children to solely read books which are beneficial for their education and regard reading entertaining ones as time-consuming. I; however, disagree with this viewpoint because of the below reasons.

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social media is promoting communication between people . do you agree or disagree ?

In recent years, there is a growing recognition of popularity of social media which is replacing face-to-face communication among people many society. This essay will discuss disadvantages and advantage this issue.

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There have been a major advances in technology over recent decades and this has led to significant improvements in people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree

although, over the past few years technology is play major role in our lives and it also create impact in people's lives. However, I agree with this statement. In this essay give your personal point of view and the contrary as well.

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Some people think that use of social networking apps is very beneficial in today's world. some say that it put negative impacts on the society. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Although, The vast majority of people think that consuming of online social applications is very useful in modern era. However some think that it create bad effects on the community. In this essay should discuss both sides and give your personal feed back.

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In some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding out bout the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

There has been a tendency in the demand for accommodations background data from Residents. the forthcoming paragraphs will examine the reasons for this trend, and recommend some practical methods to research this.

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Shops should not be allowed to sell any food or drinks that have been scientifically proven to be bad for people’s health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Tendency to favour uncontrolled nutrition has come embattled over the past decade, following scientists’ booming concern on health. Discussion has centred on whether it culminate with banning markets from distributing these products. I am utterly convinced that this prohabitation is of significance. This essay will firstly argued that this action is highly likely to raise life-expectancy, and secondly contend that the result would relieve children from the mental issues.

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