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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Housing shortage in big cities can cause severe social consequences. Some people think only government action can solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

It can not be denied that population growth is a major issue in the metropolitan area. The extension of the citizens is contrary to the broadening of the residential area that has limited land to build and it will lead to a housing crisis phenomenon and council should be concerned about this problem. I strongly believe the statement and some consideration regarding my attitude will be elaborated in this essay.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything, they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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In some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

Knowing the history of the house they live is being popular in recent times. Curiosity and rising the market value of one’s building are capable of explaining the activity, and moreover, asking about residents in the same area and doing exploration on the archive or internet give tremendous clues.

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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done in this problem?

Technology has developed in past decades and has found its way through agriculture. It has helped humans to produce more food in hopes of solving the hunger and malnutrition problems, but unfortunately many cases of hunger are still being reported. This essay will point out a possible cause of this problem and a probable solution.

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many people believe that mobile phone cause more harms than benefits. to what extend do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, a lot of people think that the excessive usage of cell phones is causing more demerits rather than merits.,however I believe otherwise because it all depends on how we use it, surely there are a lot of disadvantages like addiction and access to inappropriate content,but, no one can deny the fact that technology has brought us closer and it has provided ease in our daily life and work.I will prove my point further in the essay.

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In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those causes?

Nowadays, the amount of crime is increasing in many countries. This is one important problem that lots of nations have to face and resolve. In my opinion, the first reason is economical situation, the second reason is technology developing.

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Some people think that exercise is the key to health, others feel that having a balanced diet is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

It is widely believed that becoming good health is the one of vital factors in living, some accepted that exercise is the key to have a good health while others think that high quality food consuming is more and more important for health. I, for my point of view, am convinced that both have equally benefits, and the support will be elaborated in this essay.

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Many countries spend a lot of money in art. Some people think investment in art is necessary, but others say money is better spent on public services and facilities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In the current scenario, The management of technology is constantly on the rise. For instance, social website like Facebook, WhatsApp, Linked in, etc. Which has had an adverse impact on one's individuality as well as on Society. I support this statement which states that social site had a false impact on people. Analyzing the advantages and limitations of a networking site will prove this.

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Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

Modern advancements have made a major impact on nature such as the advanced engines of cars which create harmful gases . It is thought by some that these ought to be sorted internationally, however other opine solutions on the national level is the best way. Both views are discussed in upcoming paragraphs with examples.

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Some people think that some types of criminals should not go to prison. Instead they should do unpaid work in the community. Do you agree or disagree?

In this contemporary world,people argue that some convict should do volunteer effort instead of putting them behind the bars.I strongly agree with this opinion and in this , essay I am going to elaborate on my thoughts.

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Some cities create housing areas by providing taller buildings. Others create housing by building houses on a wider area of land. What solution is better?

It is a known fact that nowadays authorities of most cities encourage builders to develop buildings in such a way, that they will be able to give as many places as they could, and one of the obvious solutions is just to make buildings look like skyscrapers. Only a little number of cities have laws that deny constructing buildings of more than several floors. Although, I have spent all my childhood in such a place in the countryside in a two-storey building and still have warm memories about it, I truly believe that the future is high-rise buildings and that this solution is much better than shallow development.

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Some people feel that children should be educated in single sex schools; others argue that mixed schools are better. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

the vast majority of people think that students thought be educated in single sec schools. other whilst, that co-education education schools are ideal.I'm strongly disagree with this statement.The trend of this essay is to view both sides and give your perspective view.

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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is two category of people the first who thinks that every student all over world should study what they are keen on others asserts that students should study only necessary subjects that will be helpful in the future such as science and technology. I agree with the statement that says every student should study discipline that they are interested. However in this essay we will discuss both views.

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Some people believe that increasing taxes on various industries will reduce pollution whereas others believe that there are better alternative ways. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

A considerable proportion of citizen adopt a preconceive notion that implementing high tax rate to all industry sectors will aid in mitigating the environment pollution, while there are others who argue that other methods seem more effective. In my opinion, I strongly believe that there are far more influential ways to dwindle the level of contamination.

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In recent years more and more students are choosing to read e-books rather than paper-based books. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays most students opt for e-books instead of paper-based books.I believe that choosing e-books could be beneficial but it has drawbacks as well.

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Fossil fuels are the main source of energy in many countries. However, in some countries, alternative sources of energy are encouraged. Do you think this is positive or negative development?

Fossil fuels are the major resource of energy in many Regions. However, in some regions, alternative sources of energy are encouraged. In my opinion, finding alternative energy resources is better than using fossil fuels Because fossil fuels have a bad influence on the environment. Therefore using alternative energy is positive.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In recent years, a vast majority of individuals who are suffering from ailments are more likely to try curing themselves with alternative medicines rather than relying on a professinoal doctor. I admittedly consider this trend a negative development as it inclouds more drawbacks than plus points.

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Individual greed and selfishness has been the basis of the modern society. Some people think that we must return to the older and more traditional values of respect for the family and the local community in order to create a better world to live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (society)

The main reason why it is not necessary for students to take their gap year is that we cannot promise that students will actually make full use of the time because of lack of dedication (unintelligible, can be changed to: Although there exist certain advantages of a gap year, it does not mean everyone should take the break since some students might lack self-regulation). Not everyone is full of self-motivation let alone the students who had just suffered from senior high(suffer from general plus disease or Disasters and other bad things should be changed here to suspended from the intense pressure of college entrance exam--college entrance exam pressure), where (the clause here lacks an object, should be changed to which) many students wants (the subject and verb are inconsistent in singular and plural, change the for want) to escape from, so I believe (reduce "I think" in the argument of the main paragraph and use more logical arguments) most of them will take the gap year mainly f...

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The rise of convenience food has helped people keep up with the speed of the modern lifestyle. What are the advantages of this trend? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages

These days, people's busy schedules demand the food industry to adapt to the world's fast pace. Several benefits arise from this trend, however, numerous drawbacks outweigh them.

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Some parents think it is a good idea to give their children mobile phones, while others disagree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Most of the parents believe it is a ideal to give their kid mobile phones, but whilst others disagree with this statement. In this essay ought view both the side and also give your personal point of view.

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