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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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In their advertising, business nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is positive or negative development?

Nowadays, advertising has become a popular and the most common way of promoting something. A vast number of companies utilise these advertising methods to convey the benefits of using their products attractively and freshly. As a commoner, I agree there are pros and cons, but in my opinion, I think it has a positive aspects in development.

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In some societies, obesity is regarded as a major problem. Some people believe that junk food advertising is largely to blame for this problem and should be banned. However, others feel that junk food advertising does not contribute to the problem of obesity and should not be banned. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

This debate about whether betty fat in a human body is caused by junk food and or not, has been going around among many societies for a while now. Junk food is advertised by the seller so that they can sell and make profit but some part the population don't support this advertisement and are against it, demanding a shut down of this junk food industries. Where other part of the population believes that junk food and its advertisement has nothing to do with belly fat. I think both the arguments has its own point of views.

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TOPIC1.some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages

A couple of adepts have argued that pupils should be taught a foreign tongue in junior schools rather than high schools.In my opinion the benefits of such an approach outweigh the drawbacks.The key positive aspects of such action includes enhancing the speaking prowess and encourages the desire to chose a career path on lingual matters while unfavorable school results is the negative aspect.

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all cars that burn fossil fuels should be baned and electric cars should be replace them. do you agree or disagree?

Since the industrial revolution, combustion engine-driven vehicles have caused a significant impact on the environment. As a result, many people tend to transform their mode of transportation into eco-friendly vehicles. In this essay, I will discuss the advancement of replacing fossil fuels with electric supply.

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Many shopping malls have been built in different countries all over the world. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this for the local people?

In the contemporary epoch, a plethora of various shopping centres have been established across the whole world. Personally, I believe this phenomenon has more benefits as for instance many facilities are grouped at the same location, which saves the customers time. However, the possible drawback is that a such construction may alter the comfort of living in a particular area.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Others think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.

It is true that the economy has an indispensable role to play in many realms of contemporary society. Some individuals harbour a belief that advertising is the foremost method to stimulate customer consumption, whereas others hold the reverse viewpoint. From my perspective, it is a controversial issue which deserves an in-depth discussion.

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Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employee. What, in your opinion, should be the main function of a university?

Some intend that universities should value educational courses associated with future career enhancement, while others argue that students must opt the higher education courses for gaining in-depth learning without solely concentrating on job abilities. According to my opinion, a university education ought to provide a combination of both, and this essay will discuss both views including my perspective on this issue.

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Large companies use sport events to promote their products. Some people think this has a negative impact on sports. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the modern world, health plays a crucially important role in many lives. many businesses find it as well known as the customer insight to emphasize the main key point in their campaigns. So more sporty advertisement events would be designed by big corporations to approach their products. In my perspective, it is beneficial and ethical to use this method for society to raise physical well-being with the lower government’s burden.

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A government has a responsibility to its citizens to ensure their safety. Therefore, some people think that the government should increase spending on defense but spend less on social benefits. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that governments should allocate more resources and fundings to defense but less on social benefits to ensure citizens’ safety. I strongly disagree to this statement as wars rarely happen in today’s society and it may only have little improvement regrading to the defense.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

I strongly believe that melody is a footbridge between people with different, religions,statuses,cultures or ages across the world.I with the statement that songs unite the people because it isn't the language of any place but a universal language.

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Some people think the government founding should not be used for supporting art and culture, others think supporting cultural activities may be beneficial for the population anf the culture. Discuss both views and give your own opinion?

It is a common belief that some people argue that the government should not support artists and culture because it is not beneficial to all people. However, others are of the opinion that the government should invest more aggressively in diverse cultures and artistic activities. I agree with the former opinion. In this essay, both sides of the issue will be discussed and then my position will be presented in the conclusion part.

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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crimes drams are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV show are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas.

Nowadays, the trend to watch TV crime dramas and read books of breach novels has become popular. In this essay, I will give the potential explanation for this preference and give my opinion about those genres.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

In young age, recognizing the right and wrong policies is of great importance for children along with punishment which is essential to assist them to have better understanding of this difference. I completely advocate with this assertion based on some convincing reasons.

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write a application for your child's admission to school

To, The Principal, Bahria School & College NORE-1, M.T Khan Road, Karachi. Sub: Request Letter for Admission Dear Sir/ Madam, I, Anoop Kumar, am writing this to request your admission of my beloved son to the institute. Fortunately, your quality education is also affordable and near my home premises. I am an IT manager in a USA-based mining company working remotely from Karachi and my wife is an emerging cardiologist. My son, Vinayak, is a very talented boy studying in class three in another faculty. He has got his sharp mind from me and my wife and so he is quite intelligent and a quick learner. Due to our busy schedule, we realized a little late that a subsidy from an elite school is not what we expected. We felt it was wasting his thinking ability. Our son deserves a much better place to groom his personality and career and what could be better than an institution of yours. The Bahria School & College is a symbol of the educational aspirations of the...

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As global trade increases, many goods including those we use in a daily basis are produced in other countries and have to be transported long distances. Do the benefits of this trend outweigh the drawbacks?

Huge amounts of merchandise, encompassing those used regularly, are manufactured overseas and have to be conveyed across nations due to expanded worldwide trading. Personally, I believe that the benefit of this trend is greater than the demerit, as will be further explained in this essay.

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Some people claim that museums and art galleries are not needed today, because everyone can see historical objects or art works by computer. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that technology allows individuals a chance to see historical objects and works of art on a computer screen. As a result, museums and art galleries are no longer required. I oppose that point of view, and I am going to say why in this essay.

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When students move to a new school, they sometimes face problems. How can schools help these students with their problems? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.

Education plays a significant role in everyone's life and school are the door of education. I agree with the statement that whenever any student go to a new school, it is very common to have some issues, as a ,result school plays an important part in solving this problem no matter which student is having them. In my opinion, there are two possibilities school can help their students to solve any problem, which I will explore in this essay.

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Some people think that all university students sould study whatever they like. Others believe that they shoyld only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.

University curriculums become an ongoing debate these days. Some people recommend that university students should study their favourite subject. Still, others suggest that the students should be taught subjects related to science and technology which will be more beneficial for them after graduating. I don't agree with this point since there are a lot of reasons why students should follow their dreams. In this essay, we will explore both views and analyse the details.

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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

Nowadays, with growing communities the way of consumption material have been changed by individuals. New chemical materials have produced by fastest-growing technology. In time with that, the amount of rubbish has increased by changes in our producing. The one part of this issue will solved by government plans.

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The only way to reduce drug abuse is to legalise the substance and bring them under control. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and induce any relevant examples from your own knownledge or experience.

There is no denying the fact that drug abuse is an extremely serious problem. It leads to a large number of society and criminal issues. Some people believe that if the substance is taken under control and under laws, the facets of drug abuse will also decrease. However, I cannot totally agree with this view. I am concerned that legalizing the substance would cause other problems.

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