IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 851

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Although the position of women in society today has improved, there is still a great deal of sexual discrimination. Do you agree?

Gone is the idea that, women can’t be in society and they should stay home and take care of children. It is plain to see these days position of women in social life has changed beyond recognition. yet, I completely opine that, there are still much discrimination between both genders. This essay will state some valid evidence for the same.

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In some places, fast food, prepared meals, and sugary drinks are now sold in more shops and at lower prices than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Our diet is becoming increasingly unhealthy. This is reflected in the fact that cheap, fast food, and sugary drinks are now found in many shops around the world. However, the low prices and convenience come at a cost.

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In modern times young adults spending more time with their friends and less time with family. Why has this change occurred? Do you think parents should force their children to spend more time at home?

Nowadays， as people are aware of the important of gender equality in school. Some people suggest that the ratio of female and male students should be 1:1 in schools. However, I disagree with it.

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Some people think that the government should strictly control the supply of fresh water while other think we can use as much water as we want. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is a widely held view among people that it is the authorities who hold responsibility for effectively allocating the source of clean drinks to the public. Both sides of the essay will be discussed before my point is drawn at the end.

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The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest?

The Internet is one of the outstanding innovations of the digital age. It has entirely changed people’s way of living. It has completely reshaped how the information is exchanged between individuals due to which so many complications are arising which did not dwell before. This essay states the problems and solutions to reduce the troubles due to the internet.

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Due to the influence of worldwide media such as television and computers, the gap between cultures is decreasing. The introduction of this global culture is a great benefit to the world. To what extent do you agree with this viewpoint?

These days, the development of the media in terms of television and laptops closes up the disparity between various cultures and traditions globally. Consequently, these provide numerous advantages to humanity. In this essay, the advantages of the media will be presented to support my agreement with the statement.

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All children should be made to wear school uniform. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

School uniform has been a constant subject of debate all around the world in recent years. There are many different opinions about this regulation from the institution and state levels. As far as I am concerned, there are two main reasons that need to bear in mind, in terms of socioeconomic background.

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Celebrities such as singers and film stars earn too much money, buy too many goods and care too little about other people. To what extent do you think this is true? Should anything be done to change the situation? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is certainly true that famous people in some countries are very wealthy. Many would argue that this promotes a wasteful lifestyle. However, I tend to think it is their money and that, as long as they pay their taxes, no one can tell them what to do with it.

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Some people believe that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others think that this has little effects and measures are required. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Fitness plays a vital role in our life. Although, the busy schedule of the public is being an obstruction to find a leisure time to do any physical activities. I concuer that enhancing games facilities will be a positive trait for imporving the health of an individual. A number of sports clubes have established now which have a nexus of aminities including, lawn tennis and swimming and so on. On the other hand , there are limitation to play it by keeping in mind the age and health status of the people.

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In some places, old age is valued, while in other cultures youth is considered more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

While some people argue that elderly persons are more important, others believe that teenagers' impact is highly valuable. In my opinion, having more youngsters causes more benefits. This essay comprises both these views and my opinion; followed by a logical conclusion.

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Appearances are deceitful. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?

There is a belief that a person's look can be deceitful. It is a belief that i agree with, because in my opinion, a person's look does not mean anything, if we do not know personality or feelings.

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foregin country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Language is a way of communication with human over the world. Many say that there are only reason for learning other languages is to travel or work. Others argue by saying that there are more different reasons for learning foreign languages, as sush, knows other culture or curiosity.

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What is the reasons , effects and solutions of water pollution ?

Water pollution is a serious problem in big cities, impacting the livelihood and the well-being of the urban population. In general, water pollution can be divided into two based on the area of impact, which are surface water pollution and groundwater pollution. These two kinds of pollution are related, as surface water can seep through the soil pores and vice versa. Back then, water pollutants are mostly in the forms of heavy metals and organic substances from agricultural and industrial activities. However, recently microplastics become alarming pollutants due to the higher use of plastic containers and substances in daily life. COVID-19 has also caused higher plastics amount in the waterways and coastal areas.

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Recent figures show an increase in violent crime among youngsters under the age of 18. Some psychologists claim that the basic reason for this is that children these days are not getting the social and emotional learning. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

With the agreeable order ot the day, it cannot be denied that there is a significant increase in violent crime among youngsters under the age of 18. Some experts claim that young adults who are committing this crime, which is called 'juveniles' in the criminal justice system, did not receive social and emotional learning throughout their childhood. I have to agree with the statement because from what I have learned during my college years as a Criminology student, early childhood play a big role in shaping teenagers into the person they become in the future.

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Planting trees is very important for the environment. Some people say trees should be planted in the vacant areas of city and towns, while others say housing facilities should be built instead. Do you agree or disagree?

It is said that planting trees is an important activity for our habitat. Therefore, numerous humans agree that trees should be planted in the vacant areas of cities and towns, while others say housing amenities should be built alternatively. In my experience, I prefer planting trees because of some pros and cons.

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The best curriculum is not one based on a static body of knowledge, but one which teaches students to cope with change. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

In the recent era, there is a hot debate on distinct type of schooling. A group of people argues that excellent way of education stresses on adjustment with fast-changing society. I personally agree with this issue and I strongly support my opinion in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Some people spend most o their lives living close to where they were born. What might be the reasons for this? What are the advantages and disadvantages ?

Nowadays people are flexible and settle globally however it has also been observed that many individuals prefer staying in their hometown. In this essay, we will explore a few reasons for them to stick back to their city and discuss merits as well as demerits on the same.

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Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each tyoe of crime. Others, however, argye that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, shoukd always be taken into account when deciding on the punishmen. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Preventing violence and felony in society is a controversial topic among policymakers ,,however there are two contrary approaches to declining it ,each side has benefits ,so ,I want to assume that the punishment will be effective if It chooses wisely to suppress the intention of violence and is capable of correcting it ,so I am going to explain my thesis in upcoming paragraphs to clarify the topic.

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3.The only way to improve road safety is to give much stricter punishments on driving offenses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that stricter punishments would prevent people from driving dangerously on the road. While some people believe that is the sole way to improve road safety, I partly disagree with it. In this essay, I will delve deep into both sides of the arguments and give out my logical conclusion.

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Students are becoming more and more reliant on computers. What are some problems associated with reliance on computer and what are some of the possible solutions

The consequent modernisation of learning has resulted in the use of computers in learning. This however has resulted in students relying more on them. This essay will highlight the problems which are associated with that and the use of other resources in learning.

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