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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Many university graduates cannot find a job in their chosen profession, what factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opnion, should be done about it?

It is clear that unemployment has become a tremendous issue for long years due to many factors including recession, lack of appropriate skills, experience, etc. This essay will discuss how these obstacles can be addressed for forthcoming graduates.

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Nowadays, an increasing number of people woth health problems are using alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their normal doctors. Is it positive or negative development?

In this competitive world, it is not possible for any person to survive without proper remedy and good health. Some schools of thought presume that currently many people choose medication and alternative medicines over visiting doctors. Here, I coincide that not selecting health takers' advice can be a positive development for some as a middle-class society can not afford the cost as well as dissatisfaction and high effect of medicine plays a vital role to avoid it.

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some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. others, think that change is always a good thing. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some citizens believe that variety is an inseparable part of their lives while others claim that having a fixed daily routine has been better for them. I argue that life without changes and experiencing new things would be meaningless. However, it has completely been a personal matter and all inhabitants should decide about it on their own.

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Home is the basic necessity of everyone. A government should provide home to those who cannot afford it. To what extent you agree or disagree

The building is a fundamental requirement for each citizen.Some people believe authorities should provide accommodation for those who can not purchase it.I opine to this because of taxation and the safety of the populace.This essay will explain in detail the reasons for my stance as well as examples in the subsequent paragraphs.

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Many parents are unhappy with the amount of violence in video games, TV programs and other leisure activities. How harmful could this be to children? What could be done to solve this problem?

Most parents feel discontent with the level of violece in video games, television and leisure activities. This could be a deep negative influence for children because violent games negatively influence on children behavior, and the most viable solution is to set stronger regulations on the level of violence allow on this video games.

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In some societies,the number of crimes comitted by teenagers is growing.some people think that regardless of age teenagers who commit majour crimes should receive adult punishment.To what extent do you agree of disagree?

Nowadays, we live in a world where crimes are rampant. It is so common that some people are not surprised anymore. The moment we turn on our TVs, we are greeted by the news saying that juvenile delinquency is happening throughout the world. As painful as it sounds, it is a truth that we could not easily disregard.

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What are the advantages and disadvantages of public transportation?

There are different kinds of public transportation in the world. They have important rules at transporting people in the cities. On the other hand, they have some disadvantages, too. We talk about both of them in this essay.

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The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

We are living in a world which becomes more unhealthy everyday due to several reasons and despite of the fact that most things have proven it self as very useful they as have a major impact our health. Therefore is it very likely that standard of people's health decreases in the future. I agree with that thought and this essay will support my opinion with examples.

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Some people think that governments should spend money for the development of public trasportation systems in order to help solve this problem. Others think it is better to spend money for the development of electric and other types of cars that may cause less pollution. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowlegde and experience.

Air pollution is mostly caused by cars and vehicles. It pollutes the air as it is burning the fuel. Nowadays, there are many vehicles in most of the world which pollute the air. Some people say that the government should spend money to improve public transportation in order to solve this issue.

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In some countries around the world men and women are having babies late in life. What are the reasons? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In the modern world, there are lots of different values and meanings to being a family. In a particular group of countries, men and women decide to have babies mostly at a later age. While this trend has some drawbacks, I think that benefits are outweigh.

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Holidays honor people and events. if you could create a new holiday, what person or event it would honor and how would you want people to celebrate it ? use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

It is a common belief that giving holidays is a part of a state’s policies which is true and considered as indispensable for public. These holidays can be granted on the basis of different events and sometimes honored to different personalities for their certain work. In this essay, it will be discussed that if I will create a new holiday, whom I will honor it and how will I expect people to celebrate it.

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Some people believe that newspaper is the best way to learn about news. While others believe that more effective way is through other media. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, technology trend speedy to improve and developed into our life. People like to share post of the news rather than use realistic newspaper. In this essay to be discuss two aspect views and suggest my perspective.

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Some people think that Government should take measures to improve the health of its citizens. Others think it must be managed by individuals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The role of medical care has become a major discussion in today's world as people's life has increased.Although some think that it is the responsibility of the government to improve the health of its citizens,others think that the individuals should take control of their physical conditions.This essay will discuss both the two sides and explain why I think it should be the individual liability to maintain one's health.

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Professional sports people are often idolised by young children. Some people think that they, therefore, have a responsibility to be good role models at all times for children. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays youngters are choosing sports persons as their idols, so the majority of the people belive that they have greater resposibility in carrying good mentorship all the time for young children. However, I completely agree with this statement as it helps in building childs' future in a positive way.

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Many people in cities today live in high-rise apartment blocks. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this type of living? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience

In this contemporary epoch, whilst opponents hold the belief that high-level accommodations have a plethora of advantages, proponents have a diverse perspective, because that might compulsively affect many citizens who raise children . My contention will be further explained.

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It is more important to spend public money on promoting a healthy lifestyle than to spend it on the treatment of people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A large portion of the public's money is being spent on treating people in the hospitals, while it might be better to utilize it for the prevention of multiple diseases by promoting a healthier lifestyle to the population. This essay will discuss the importance of preventing disease by having a clean and active lifestyle.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message ?

We are living in a society which makes us believe that we can reach everything we want, if we only try hard enough. This mentality is brought to us by the media and the entertainment industry and is especially widespread among children. Despite the fact, that this way of thinking might have a positive impact on them there are also drawbacks to this attitude. This essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of the ‚everything is possible mentalitymentality‘ and will provide a logical conclusion.

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Despite improvements in vehicle technology, there are still large numbers of road accidents. Explain some of the causes of these accidents and suggest some measures that could be taken to address the problem.

The progress made in the automotive industry is astonishing. However, a large number of road accidents is still a matter of concern, andcertain measures must be taken by the governmentto resolve this problem.

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Some people believe that reading stories from a book is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that reading a book is superior to watching TV or playing games as regards children's academic proficiency and physical health.

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Some people think that people who are over 60 years old should retire and stop working. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Life is all about stages, there comes a period one needs to relax, and taking care of either by government or their children but this also depends on how early procreation took place in the aspect of children taking care of them. Meanwhile , a few numbers of individuals are of the notion that 60years elder should retire and as well stop working . I totally agree with this statement and this essay, will discuss on the need for older people to cherish their retirement age.

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