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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Many parents are unhappy with the amount of violence in video games, TV programs and other leisure activities. How harmful could this be to children? What could be done to solve this problem?

Most parents feel discontent with the level of violece in video games, television and leisure activities. This could be a deep negative influence for children because violent games negatively influence on children behavior, and the most viable solution is to set stronger regulations on the level of violence allow on this video games.

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In some societies,the number of crimes comitted by teenagers is growing.some people think that regardless of age teenagers who commit majour crimes should receive adult punishment.To what extent do you agree of disagree?

Nowadays, we live in a world where crimes are rampant. It is so common that some people are not surprised anymore. The moment we turn on our TVs, we are greeted by the news saying that juvenile delinquency is happening throughout the world. As painful as it sounds, it is a truth that we could not easily disregard.

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What are the advantages and disadvantages of public transportation?

There are different kinds of public transportation in the world. They have important rules at transporting people in the cities. On the other hand, they have some disadvantages, too. We talk about both of them in this essay.

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The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

We are living in a world which becomes more unhealthy everyday due to several reasons and despite of the fact that most things have proven it self as very useful they as have a major impact our health. Therefore is it very likely that standard of people's health decreases in the future. I agree with that thought and this essay will support my opinion with examples.

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Some people think that governments should spend money for the development of public trasportation systems in order to help solve this problem. Others think it is better to spend money for the development of electric and other types of cars that may cause less pollution. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowlegde and experience.

Air pollution is mostly caused by cars and vehicles. It pollutes the air as it is burning the fuel. Nowadays, there are many vehicles in most of the world which pollute the air. Some people say that the government should spend money to improve public transportation in order to solve this issue.

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In some countries around the world men and women are having babies late in life. What are the reasons? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In the modern world, there are lots of different values and meanings to being a family. In a particular group of countries, men and women decide to have babies mostly at a later age. While this trend has some drawbacks, I think that benefits are outweigh.

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Holidays honor people and events. if you could create a new holiday, what person or event it would honor and how would you want people to celebrate it ? use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

It is a common belief that giving holidays is a part of a state’s policies which is true and considered as indispensable for public. These holidays can be granted on the basis of different events and sometimes honored to different personalities for their certain work. In this essay, it will be discussed that if I will create a new holiday, whom I will honor it and how will I expect people to celebrate it.

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Some people believe that newspaper is the best way to learn about news. While others believe that more effective way is through other media. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, technology trend speedy to improve and developed into our life. People like to share post of the news rather than use realistic newspaper. In this essay to be discuss two aspect views and suggest my perspective.

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Some people think that Government should take measures to improve the health of its citizens. Others think it must be managed by individuals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The role of medical care has become a major discussion in today's world as people's life has increased.Although some think that it is the responsibility of the government to improve the health of its citizens,others think that the individuals should take control of their physical conditions.This essay will discuss both the two sides and explain why I think it should be the individual liability to maintain one's health.

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Professional sports people are often idolised by young children. Some people think that they, therefore, have a responsibility to be good role models at all times for children. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays youngters are choosing sports persons as their idols, so the majority of the people belive that they have greater resposibility in carrying good mentorship all the time for young children. However, I completely agree with this statement as it helps in building childs' future in a positive way.

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Many people in cities today live in high-rise apartment blocks. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this type of living? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience

In this contemporary epoch, whilst opponents hold the belief that high-level accommodations have a plethora of advantages, proponents have a diverse perspective, because that might compulsively affect many citizens who raise children . My contention will be further explained.

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It is more important to spend public money on promoting a healthy lifestyle than to spend it on the treatment of people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A large portion of the public's money is being spent on treating people in the hospitals, while it might be better to utilize it for the prevention of multiple diseases by promoting a healthier lifestyle to the population. This essay will discuss the importance of preventing disease by having a clean and active lifestyle.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message ?

We are living in a society which makes us believe that we can reach everything we want, if we only try hard enough. This mentality is brought to us by the media and the entertainment industry and is especially widespread among children. Despite the fact, that this way of thinking might have a positive impact on them there are also drawbacks to this attitude. This essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of the ‚everything is possible mentalitymentality‘ and will provide a logical conclusion.

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Despite improvements in vehicle technology, there are still large numbers of road accidents. Explain some of the causes of these accidents and suggest some measures that could be taken to address the problem.

The progress made in the automotive industry is astonishing. However, a large number of road accidents is still a matter of concern, andcertain measures must be taken by the governmentto resolve this problem.

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Some people believe that reading stories from a book is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that reading a book is superior to watching TV or playing games as regards children's academic proficiency and physical health.

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Some people think that people who are over 60 years old should retire and stop working. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Life is all about stages, there comes a period one needs to relax, and taking care of either by government or their children but this also depends on how early procreation took place in the aspect of children taking care of them. Meanwhile , a few numbers of individuals are of the notion that 60years elder should retire and as well stop working . I totally agree with this statement and this essay, will discuss on the need for older people to cherish their retirement age.

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Nowadays eating habits of people around the world are changing, causing them many health problems, including obesity. Why do people tend to eat so badly? What can be done to improve their eating habits?

Diet-related health problems are on the rise, this is as a result of poor eating habits of most people around the globe. This has caused obesity amongst others. This essay will discuss the causes of such eating trends and some possible solutions to improve them.

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It is predicted that robots are going to become increasingly important in our lives. How could robots be used in the future? Will this development be a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays, whole world is anticipated that androids taking more and more space in people activity. This essay will discuss how machines are going to be used in the fabrics and medicine. Furthermore, conclude and research, why this vogue is obviously welcome to become a development.

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Many young children have unsupervised access to the internet and are using the internet to socialize with others. This can lead to a number of dangerous situations which can be threatening for children. What problems do children face when going online without parental supervision? How can these problems be solved?

Undoubtedly, the Internet is an unlimited tool, that is being used by all humans on earth. Having children accessing the website without supervision, and interacting with whoever is behind the screen, exposes them to several dangers. As far as I am concerned, there are two approaches that can be applied to tackle such a challenge.

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The money spent by hovernments on space programmes would be better spent on vital public services such as schools and hospitals. To what extent do you agree or disagree .

There's a heated discussion about how the government allocated people's tax money for. And this essay will unravel this issue.

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