IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 164

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of many species & loss of biodioversity. What are the primary causes of loss of biodiversity? What solution can be done to to solve it?

It cannot be denied that people have taken part in the loss of biodiversity and extinction of many species around the world. To solve this problem, it is important to know the cause of why such events occur. This essay will try to describe the cause and solve this problem.

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Below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year iy the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and ie comparisons where relevant.

The table compares average amount of time not-working people spent on their spare time activities during last year.

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Public health is becoming an urgent issue nowadays. Some argue that governments should create nutrition and food choice laws to improve public health, while others believe that it is a matter of personal choice and responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, it is a global problem that who should take responsibility to improve the public health. The view of whether the government ought to consider its citizens' healthcare or each individual should take some steps for the protection is advocated by a group of people. I partially support this viewpoint and I will elaborate my arguments in following paragraphs.

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you're people should be treated like adults if they commit a crime. in what extent do I agree or disagree

Many teenagers commit crimes but get treated differently than adult’s criminals. Despite that many people think its important to punish the younger generation in the same way as adults, I would argue that it is not fair and logical. Younger people brain functions differently and punishing them in the same way as older people will be a lot damaging for their future careers.

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it is important to everyone, including young people to save money for their future. to what extent do you agree and disagree woyj this statement? give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples fro your own knowledge or experience

In today’s rapidly changing world, money saving for a better future is a topic of debate. While some argue it is not beneficial for living behavior, I firmly believe that integrating what people need into preserving their funds can greatly enhance the quality of life.

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Advertising is becoming more and more common in everyday life. Some people say that advertising has a positive impact on our lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued by a lot of people that advertising is changing our daily life,which is really ordinary around us.I completely agree that advertising is benefits to us,because it lets us konw more information about this society in very short amount of time.

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Some people think that the most important thing about being rich is it gives a person the opportunity to help other people. Do you agree or disagree?

A group of individials adhere to the view that the essential part of being wealthy is assisting people and some of them don't agree with that idea. I partially support this viewpoint and I will elaborate my arguments in following paragraphs.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Marketing is widely used by bussinesses to attract potential costumers. Although there are numerous methods of advertising, highlighting new features of products are the most popular one. Adopting this method has its roots on limited capacities of advertisements. In my opinion, it is logicaly a positive trend because it is still used wordwidely.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar.

These days, the process of making food and drink products contain a massive amount of sugar, which leads to various health issues. Many believes that sweetened foods should be made more expensive to encourage people to eat less sugar. This essay believes the notion above will make people to stop consume high levels of sugar because it will lower the number of people buying them and encourage them to buy healthy foods.

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Some people think people can exploit animals for any purpose they need, while others do not think so. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In the past, other creatures in this world below human tends to be a subject for their needs, and it is often argued that animals should be trade to meet people's demands in goods or services, while some individuals believed it shouldn't be. This essay will discuss both views and give my own opinion.

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Public transporation is essential but problematic. Describe soem of the problems connected to the public transportation and suggest some solutions.

Public transportation has been essential for everybody, but it is problematic. One of the problems of this is that there are a lot of traffic congestion during the day, and the other issue is air pollution. The possible solutions to these are that companies might offer to increase salaries if employees use a bicycle, and work from home.

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Global warming is a big concern these days. Though there has been much noise made on this issue, carbon emission is not being curtailed. Are we contributors to this issue? What solutions do you propose to counter this issue? Discuss.

Global warming has become a major issue nowadays where many people realise that the significant rising of carbon emission must be controlled immediately. I believe that human activities are the biggest contributor in global warming and some behaviour changes must be taken in order to solve this issue.

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In most successful organizations, some people believe that communications between managers and workers is important, other people said that other factors are more important. What is your opinion?

One of the most controversial topics today relates to what are key factors to lead companies and organizations successfully. While some believe that it is the interations between directors and subordinates, others claims there are more important elements for this. In this essay, I elaborate on the resaons why I support the former view.

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Economic growth is the best way of ending global poverty, but it can also have a negative effect on the environment. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

It is commonly believed that an economic development can vanish universal financial hardships, but it also comes with it’s consequences. While I understand there can be negative effects on environment due to economic inclination, acc to me an economic growth plays a vital role to make our lives better.

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The family has a great influence on children’s development but the influence from outside the home plays a bigger part in children’s life. Discuss both

People hold different views about whether family members have a critical impact on offspring's improvement or others’influences are more essential . I firmly believe that family may contribute to their children's development rather than others.

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Some people think that one of the ways to solve environmental problems is to increase price of fuel fir cars and vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

It is believed that increasing the price of fuel for vehicles is an effective way to reduce environmental pollution. I fully disagree with this notion due to the following reasons.

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In most successful organizations, some people believe that communications between managers and workers is important, other people said that other factors are more important. What is your opinion?

Good communication is a vital for the growth of any company in the global. According to this, some folks agrued that it is major to have a good way of communication between employers and employees; therefore this will bommed the turn over of organization. However, some contend that instead of commuication other areas are more cruical. In my opinion, I believe good commication is a key of success for any company.

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Young people who commit crimes should be treated in the same way as adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today's world of technology and modernisation, the crime rate has started shooting up. The main reason for the high amount of crime rate is people are vulnerable and can easily fall into the trap. In the essay, I will discuss whether is it worth punishing teenagers in the same way with adults. In my opinion, young people can change their behaviour if someone will help them .

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In modern life, it is no longer necessary to use animals as food and in other products like clothing and medicines. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Is it right to say that animals are no more essential for the production of eatables, fabric and medicines? In this contemporary era people shift their interest towards veganism and I am strongly agree with this perspective. The following paragraphs will elaborate my point of view with supporting evidence.

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the growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in town adn cities closing . do you agree or disagree ?

Some individuals are of the opinion that with the rapid increase in online shopping, all physical stores in suburban and urban areas would soon go extinct. I firmly disagree because not everyone can patronize e-commerce business, especially people who are not tech-savvy, and there is the risk of breach of privacy and online theft.

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