IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 164

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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“Scientists believe that in order to protect the environment, people must use less energy in their daily lives. However, most people have not changed the way they live. Why do you think many people ? What could be done to encourage them to take action?

Throughout world experts in scientistic fields report that best way to defend nature stability is to encourage people to utilize less energy in their daily basis needs. But significant portion of the individuals still ignoring this valuable advise. I personally believe that such a sircumstances occured because of prohibitive costs of devices which helps to live people convinient life with low amount of energy. To address this problems we have to find way to reduce the price of the applicants that saves the energy.

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People living in the 21st century have a better life quality than people who lived in previous times. to whta extent do you agree or disagree?

In modern society people have a better life than in previous times. Some community disagree with this statement, but I agree people who live in twenty-first-century have a lot of advantages such as having a better education, healthcare system is more mature, and there are a lot of advanced technology. In this essay, I will discuss how people who living in present-day society is better than previous times.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

There should be clear gap between the personal life and the working life. I completely agree that educators should not display their own thoughts infront of their students, which are not related to their studies. In this essay, I will explain some points to justify my opinion.

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Many young people change their jobs and careers. What are the reasons for this? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

With today's modern trends, young people have made a lot of changes in their lives, especially about work.In this essay,i will show the reasons and discuss both advantages and disadvantages of the problem.

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Not enough people realise the importance of natural world. What is the reason for people’s lack of awareness? How can people be made more aware?

It is an irrefutable point that not all people realize the importance of the natural world, due to their disconnection from their habitat and this is the main reason behind it, however, they can also become aware of it by taking some measures, which I will discuss in the following paragraphs with relevant examples.

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WRITING TASK 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. It is important for all towns and cities to have large public outdoor places like squares and parks. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? You should write at least 250 words.

Nowadays, more accent is emphasized on recreation zones for the public. It is essential for every urban area to have huge outdoor areas such as squares and parks. They would enable people to have places to recreate and relax. However, to establish them the government would need extra-money which could benefit to the health sector. I am of the view that, more outdoor areas need to be constructed to help the population to deal with indoor stress.

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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money constructing railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many argue that it is important to invest railways between long distance cities. Other people believe that the money spent on public transportation to develop infrastucture. This essay will examine both sides of the discussion and give clear opinion about what I thought.

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Some people think that the government is wasting money on the art and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?

it is being argued that government should not expenditure on art, it should spent on other benefical public services. This essay, however, strongly disagrees with this statement . arts are the various practices formed which illustrate culture and history of particular nation as well as it can also generate revenue like othe public services

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Some people think that competation at work, at school and daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that competation in our life is a good thing. While Other people think we should help each other, instead of competing with others. In this essay, I will discuss both views and my opinion at the end.

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It is important for everyone, including young people , to save money for their future. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

There is no doubts that , nowadays , some people spend their property recklessly . However, other people trying to save money for their future . In my opinion, i strongly agree that, saving money is an important and good thing for the future.

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Some people say that the characteristic we are born will have many much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in life. To what extent do you agree with this?

Undoubtedly, some folks notion that habits of a person who born with them effects their character and success rather than having a multifarious experiences in their whole life. In this essay, I will analyze my viewpoints in the disagreement of above mentioned statement in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Discipline is an ever increasing problem in modern schools. Some people think that discipline is the responsibility of teachers while other think that this is the role of parents. In this essay I will discuss both the viewpoints and share my opinion.

Undoubtedly, spending life in rules is a prudent idea in the today's world. Some section of individuals notion that tutors play a vital role to teach the value of discipline, whereas others say that this is the responsibility of parents. In this essay, I will analyze both the sides along with my view points in the favour of latter statement in the upolcoming paragraphs.

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Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

The advancement of technology has dramatically changed humankind’s life. In this era, people can work from everywhere as long as they connect to internet access. This kind of advantages also bring benefit for children because they do not need to come to class for learning. In fact, they can also participate in virtual class provided by foreign schools or universities. Given the situation, the writer argue that these features of globalization are beneficial for workers but likely adverse for children.

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Some people think that having a set retirement age (e.g 65 years) for everyday, regardless og occupation, is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserves to retire and receive a pension at an earlier age. Do you agree or disagree? Which type of workers do you think shiuld benefits frkm early retirement? Give reasons and examples.

It is obivous for every profession to have an retirement age, for example 65 years. Though some people claim that is biased for some professionals as their job could be harder than other workers. They insist that it should be at an more earlier age. I completely agree with this notion.

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Excessive consumption of sugar causes many health related issues. Some people believe the government should control population’s sugar intake while others think people themselves should be responsible for their sugar eating habits. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Health issues nowadays mainly the uncontrolled consumption of sugar is one of the main concerns that the government is facing now.. Many people shift the blame it go the government and should be responsible to its people conditions. However, there are people argue as well that it is an own's responsibility to be crucial in eating food that people must indulge.

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Some people say that what individuals do to protect cannot make difference, others say that individuals can protect environment. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

In the recent years, protecting ecosystem is a topic of concern. Some individuals opine that humans cannot save the surroundings others are against it. However, I believe that people can protect the environment with some measures like limit to use natural resources, and by creating awarness. In the upcoming paragraphs, I will discuss both phenomenon.

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Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living In an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment. Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some individuals prefer to live in a house rather than an apartment, while others think that living in an apartment has more pros. In my opinion, living in a house has more advantages than living in an apartment because people can live whatever they want in houses,they can make new relationships and also houses have more opportunities.

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It is important for all towns and cities to have large public spaces such as parks and squares, Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

As urban areas are full with apartments and buildings, it is important to have parks and squares in such places to let people breath and I agree to this statement fully.

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Some people believe that children should be banned from using their phones during the school day. Others believe that children should be allowed to use their phones. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people would argue that students should not use their mobiles in schools, others would say that students' mobiles should not banned at school. While using mobile will help children to call their families and take photos for lessons, i believe that using phones during the school day has a bad effect on student outcomes, because they will not focus on their studies.

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In some countries university students live at home with their family while they study, whereas in other countries students attend university in another city. Do you think the benefits of living away from home during university outweigh the disadvantages?

In some nations university students choose to live at home with their family throughout their education, on the other hand, in some come countries many students prefer to go to different cities for university. Although there are a few negatives associated with preferring to study in another cities, I feel that the possible benefits would be far more considerable.

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