IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 167

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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In the past, most working people had only one job. However, nowadays, more and more people have more than one job at the same time. What are the reasons for this development? What are the advantages and disadvantages of having more than one job?

In modern society, some people tend to have multiple jobs. This is because they need amounts of money in capitalism. In reality, multiple jobs lead to that individuals can earn more money, however, they can easily lose their healthy lifestyles.

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Some people who have been in prison are the best talk to school students about the danger of committing a crime. Do you agree or disagree

Criminals are the best at talking to schoolchildren about the risk of committing a crime. Although it might be very useful and necessary for schools if criminals talk with them about the danger of committing crime, instead of them, teachers should talk with schools about the crime.

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The way that people work today has changed significantly due to the development of technology. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of these changes.

The prevalence of the cutting-edge-technology has caused a wide range of changes in the way of working, leading to the constant communication and sharing of knowledge across the world. This transformation then offers several opportunities to individuals for both personal and professional growth, while it exerts the significant influence on our society negatively. The advancement in technology fuels several shifts, thus it is crucial to delve deeply into its benefits and drawbacks.

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at the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults,compared with the number of older people. do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, the population of some countries contain mush more young adults than older people. This means that most organizations are running by the young individuals. Do the positives of this situation outweigh its drawbacks? In this essay I am going to analyze the major points and try to draw some conclusions.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Young generations are obsessed by smartphones for entertainment and communication. Even through, utilizing smartphone is universal in young kids, in my view, it is detrimental to their growth inevitably.

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In many countries, plastic containers have become more common than ever and are used by many food and drink companies. Do you think the advantages outweigh dis advantage.

It is an irrefutable fact that,the production of plastic products get exponential surge in current period of time. Some believe that this trend in positive, others reject this notion. However, in my opinion, disadvantages of this trend for outweigh the advantages. This essay will analyze the pros and cons of this trend by taking examples in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opin

In these days, sports players may have a high salary compared to those who are working in other fields. While many people think it reseasonable, others believe it is a sort of underestimating to many other professions. In my opinion, both views are right as rather than caring about sports players salary, we should think about improving other professions' salaries.

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Some people believe that young people bring more profit to the company. Others says that older people actually bring more profits. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The idea of increasing the profits is a crucial and controversial matter. Some folks believe the young people is the best. While other prefer the older. In this essay I shall elaborate the different type of view .

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Unemployment is one of the biggest problems of contemporary society. What do you think are the main causes of unemployment? What solutions can you suggest?

In this day and age, due to many factors, unemployment becomes a pressing issue in the entire world, leading to many demerits. This essay will clarify the reasons for this trend and provide some specific suggestions to overcome it.

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Some people have argued that videogames are a waste of time, and people should spend their time and money on better hobbies. Compare and contrast the benefits of video games with other hobbies. In your opinion, which is more useful? Why?

Nowadays, some individuals believe that playing video games is a totally time wasting activity. Also they thought that gamers should spend their money and time on more useful activities than video games. I partly agree that opinion because video games can make people more collaborate and learn them how to deal with losing. However, It may cause some anger and health problems too.

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Some people say History is one of most important school subjects other people think that, in today world,subject like science and technology are more important than History.Discuss both these views and give your opinion

Nowadays, Some individuals believe that History is more vital than other lessons while other people say that Technology and Science lessons are way more significant than History in today's world. In this essay I am going to discuss both perspectives and also I argued that Science and Tecnology subjects are more crucial than History right now.

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More and more women go out to work. It is the government's responsibility to subsidise them and provide free staffs and facilities to care for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this idea?

In present days, an increasing number of women enters the workforce. There has been an argument regarding whether the government should be responsible to support working women financially as well as enabling accessibility to childcare's resources. I partially agree with the aforementioned that the government should play a key role in providing aids for female employees, as I think that beside that, business organisations should share the responsibility in supporting women in the workplaces.

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Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

These days, many celebrities gain fame for their excessive wealth and lavish lifestyles rather than their work. While some people believe that has raised concerns among many that it may set a negative example for young people, I disagree with opinion that.

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The chats below show the percentage of students joining North West University.

The pie charts provide information about the proportion of students in different faculties and the regional distribution of art faculty students at North West University.

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Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects. But others believe that teenagers should focus on the subject that they are good at or that they find the most interest. Discuss both sides and give more option.

In today's world teenagers have a lot of ambitions. Most of their ambitions start during their time of studying in schools. In most cases, they find their love of doing something or anything studying and experiencing a new subject or activity in schools. Now, some of them believe that focusing on the things that they are good at will benefit them in the future or a good investment in themselves. On the other hand, some believe that focusing on all subjects will be better for them. Today I am going to compare both senarios by comparing both of them.

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Teenagers are spending an increasing amount of time on the Internet, and this is having a negative effect on their social skills. Do you agree or disagree?

It is universally accepted that adolescents tend to spend considerable period of their daily routine for accepting online resourses via Internet connection.Along with benefits of this modern tool of the 21 st -century,which has been changed social interactions tremendously,it has detrimental effects on teenagers.I completely aree with this opinion and wholeheartedly beleive that,this trend should be changed.

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Some people think that developed countries have higher responsibilities to climate change than developing countries. others believe countries should have the same responsibilities towards protecting the environment . discuss both sides and give your opinion

When it comes to protecting the state of nature that we live in, it is better to believe that each of us have our own responsibilities wherever we are. The issue of climate change is becoming more known towards society as the public could feel the effect growing stronger each day.

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More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in a foreign country. Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks?

In recent times,scholars have observed to move to another countries in order to receive tertiary education diploma.For an abundance of them,it will be preferred solution to achieve their purposes efficiently.Nevertheless,it can be destructive decision in their lives.I strongly opine with the idea that,studying overseas is a great opportunity and there more advantages than disadvantages.

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The advent of the Internet has made it possible for people to work from home. Write an essay looking at the advantages and disadvantages of this professional arrangement. Share personal examples in your essay.

The internet plays an important role in our modern life. This advanced technology made possible for workers to work for international companies remotely. This advancement has brought more benefits as well as some demerits that will be discussed in this essay with my own examples.

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In modern society, ambition is more and more important. How important is ambition for being successful in life? Is it positive or negative? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

In todays world, ambition is perceived as something that really crucial. Ambition makes people know what to do in the future, either their career or personal life. Ambition can make people's goals more celar and specific. On the other hand, sometimes ambition makes human do not enjoy their life because they are too much focus on their purpose in life.

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