IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 167

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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People can perform everyday tasks, such as shopping and banking as well as business transactions, without meeting other people face-to-face because of technology. What are the effects of this on individual and society as a whole?

Thankful for contemporary the high technology give us an opportunity a lot of ways of transferring a money each others despite far side. In my opinion this development is very useful in this era because modern time is a very globalized era that is useful for saving time. But others like to talk about some risks of business transactions.

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In recent times, economic growth has helped many become richer, both in developed and developing countries. However, those in developed countries are not as happy as they were in the past. Why is this? What can be learned from this?

Nowadays, economic growth has significantly increased wealth in both developing countries and developed countries. However, it is observed that those people are less happy than they used to be. This essay will discuss the reasons for this trend and the lessons that can be drawn from it.

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Some people believe that school students should be required to do some free social work after classes .

Some individuals argue that schoolchildren must obliged to do volunteer after lessons .I partially support this viewpoint for a variety of reasons .

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Some believe that student's success is mainly based on the quality of their teaching while others think it has more to do with the student's attitude. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

When it comes to students' success, there is always an argument about wether the teachers have more impact or students themselves are the main key. While both are 2 important factors, I believe that it is mostly the person him self who paves the way. During this essay I shall give my ideas on this subject and discuss both sides.

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Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other.

In this day and age, there are lots of views about whether competition is crucial or cooporation is preferred. Both factors have their own advantages and disadvantages that also depend on our attitude. The essay beneath will point out this opinion.

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More and more people are relying on their private cars as a major means of transportation. Describe some of the problems over-reliance on cars can cause, and suggest at least one possible solution.

The use of automovile as a way of transport has been incremented in popularity during the last years. As for, a high percentege of people chose it as their prefered option to comute from home to work, due to, it is considered the most convenience. However, there are some cons in terms of reliable which will be explored in this essay as well as how they can be possbile tackled.

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The aging population is good for business, the economy, and society. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

For the time being, the public is generally divided on whether elderly laborers make profits for businesses and society. I agree to a point with the view that it provides potential benefits. Whereas, some people say old employees bring disadvantages to the economy.

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In many parts of the world girls and boys are educated together in co- education or mixed schools. Some people think that girls and boys benefit from being educated separately in single-sex schools. To what extent do you agree with this view ?

In modern society, it is often argued that both female and male adolescents should be educated in same spaces while some believe that younger students should be separated as a gender and studied in other schools. From my perspective, the former of the issue seems more plausible because gender issue shoud not be related to committing crimes.

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Some parents are worried about the increasing level of violence on TV,video games, and other types of entertainment for children's leisure. How does this affect the children. How do you think the problem can be tackled

Some guardians are worried as their offspring are more interested in television, video games and other kinds of entertainment. It affects on child's education and overall future. However, parents have to educate their children about their well-being and success to overcome this problem. This is the main solution. I will explain both the views in forthcoming paragraphs.

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It is important for people to tale risk, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks overweigh the disadvantages?

It is topic of a great debate whether an individual should take risks in their day to day life at professional and personal levels or not. In my viewpoint, the advantages of the former view certainly overweight the disadvantages of the latter approach. This essay will try to delve into both pros and cons involved in this trend.

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Some people think that competition at work, at school, and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to coorporate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your opinions.

Some people consider having competition at work and school to be a good thing, while others think that striving to cooperate is more important, rather than competing. In my opinion, I believe that having competition is essential for job satisfaction, while the corporate is more useful for future challenges.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort od punishment should parent and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

In this modern era, due to the advancement of technology, parents are more concerned about their child's growth than in the past. Offsprings can learn good and bad things by penalizing them in different aspects. I largely disagree with the notion that punishment is necessary to make a child more disciplined. There are some easy ways to make children realise their mistakes, which are discussed in the subsequent paragraphs.

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more and more people are relying on their private cars as a major means of tranportation.Describe some of the problrms over-reliance on car can cause, suggest atleast one possible solution.

In this contemporary era, every individual wants to enjoy freedom in terms of various aspects, and mode of transport is one of these. Private transport are more demanding on the basis of choice. I will elaborate on the effects of depending more on cars and provide some impactful solutions in subsequent paragraphs.

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In many countries, large amount of foods are wasted. Why do you think people waste food in this way? What can be done to reduce the amount of food thrown away?

there are a great amount of food waste in many countries around the world. in this essay we will explore the resone and solution to reduse the amount of food waste.

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Some people think that professional sports players earn too much salary, especially when they do not seem to help people and societies the way people of other occupations such as doctors, teachers and soldiers do. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

some people think professional sport player get paid too much wages, while they do not seem to help the socities nether the people unlike teacher, doctors and ther occupations do. eventhough professional sports players don't contribute the help of societies like others do, i strongely disagree with and thinnk they deserve their high wages.

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Details of politicians' private lives should not be published in newspaper. To what extent do you agree or disagree

There is no denying the fact that the private information about political persons’ lives is a private secret. While it is a commonly held belief that details about politicians’ private lives should not be published in printed media, there is an argument opposite it. In my opinion, I consider that the personal information of politicians’ private lives should not be published in newspapers.

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In many countries women no longer feel the need to get married. Some people believe that this is because women are able to earn their own income and therefore do not require the financial security that marriage can bring. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

One of the biggest discussed Issues nowadays is whether individual financial security more prioritised over traditional marriage. Now women Are beginning to think they do not need to have a partner to be financially independent. Personally, I agree with this type of view and there are some reasons to think so.

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Passage 3 In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message ?

in many cultures, childern are told that they can achevie anything they want if they try hard enough. in this essay we will explore both advantages and disadvantages of advising children to try hard in order to achive anything.

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It is easier for wealthy people to maintain good health than it is for people who don’t have large amounts of money. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your reasons and include relevant examples.

These days, it is very easy for the rich people to focus on thier health; However, it is hard for those who do not have enough money to spend on their health. If asked, I strongly agree with such a notion. My view is justified further.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Students in several university interest to learn other subjects besides their main one, whilst others believe it is more crucial to focus their studying time and attention for a qualification. This essay will discuss both views and at the end I will give my personal opinion.

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