IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 167

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Although many people value their public parks, this space could be better used for other purposes such as residential areas for the ever growing population or to develop business and boost economies. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?

Some people believe that places that are guaranteed for people should be important, while others prefer those places used for economic purposes and building. I agree with the first state, even though building new apartments would improve the economy, parks are built in healthy environments and give us a chance to raise our children in the safest place.

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Some companies have uniforms for their staff which must be worn at all times. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.

In the contemporary world, professional dress codes have been introduced in various organisations. Although instructing staff to wear uniforms may increase the level of trusts from potential customers, I think the disadvantages outweigh the benefits as it would tremendously affect staff’s performance.

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Nowadays the government are investing more in public transport including buses and train than in building new roads. What are the reason for this? Is this a positive or negative development.

In today's contemporary world , globalization is increasing significantly; the government agencies are more incline towards improving the modes of public transportation instead of improving and constructing new roadways . This essay will briefly explain some aspects of the former and the latter along with some instances to justify whether it's beneficial or not in context with developement prospective .

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More and more people are working from rather than at the workplace. Some people say this will bring benefits to the workers and their families, but others think it will bring stress to the home. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is believed that offline teaching will be substituted by artificial intelligence in near future. I disagree with this statement because every student is different thus requires individual approach. The other way of study that meets this requirement is using online courses preferably with curator.

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These days, a majority of animals are kept in zoos in order to save them from becoming extinct. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Nowadays many species of animals are endangered and this makes authorities take measures in order to save them. That's why a huge number of animals are now found in zoos. From my perspective, this case faces two sides.

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University education system is one of the most widely discussed topics these days. Many people believe that college students should be allowed to choose subjects they like to study. Others think that it is always better to learn subjects that have relevance in the future. Discuss both views and give your opinion

The tertiary education has always been a debated topic. On one hand, some individuals believe that is more advantadgeous for students to select their own subjects, meanwhile, others believe that is better to have some basics topics that have importance in their curriculum mesh. This essay will discuss both views and give my opinion.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for qualifications. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There are different views on whether higher education students should put all of their concentration on their major or they can learn other subjects simultenously. While there is no limit on knowledge exploration, I believe it is much more efficient if college students only focus on their main subjects.

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A rise in childhood obesity is a real threat to health with an increasing number of children now classified as overweight. What are the causes of the problem and what measures can be taken to solve them? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge of experience.

There is no doubt that these days childhood health becomes a very interested topic in many countries. However,childhood obesity considered one of the most controversial issue today.In this essay I am going to explain the causes and effects of this phenomenon and I will give some solutions to avoid from increasing this problem.

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In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

Befor college, many young people are advised that, take a year for travelling or working. This essay will argue the cos and pros for taking a year after high school. This essay will estimate that acquire experience about the world and the life, but it may be inhibition the incentive for studying.

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As the internet becomes more popular, newspapers are becoming a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Newspapers turn into an outdated sources of information, in the opposite the internet comes to be significantly fashionable. I agree with this claim because electronic news are more up to date compared to the printed ones. Furthermore, access to the web is cheaper and easier than to the press.

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Some people believe that if police force carries guns, it can encourage a higher level of violence. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today’s society, there are many violent cases which caused many concerns. Some people argue that if guns are carried by the police force, it will encourage an increased level of violence. From my perspective I disagree with this statement.

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At the present time, populations of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages whats your opinion?

In today's world, many nations around the world have greater number of youths, who form the greatest proportion of the total population. I think this is a positive development for a nation and its benefits surpasses the drawbacks.

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Compare between the educational system of Australia and Palestine

In today's world, providing the a great educational system is a privilege for every country and both Palestine and Australia are working to improve their educational system. Despite the similarities between both systems yet the differences are quiet noticeable in fees, pathway and language. In this essay I will discuss each point for both countries.

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Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What possible solutions can you suggest?

The issue where criminals re-offend after being released from prison remains a significant problem for society. This difficulty not only endangers people's public safety but also suggests problems within the justice system. By understanding the causes of these phenomena, it will be possible to provide practical solutions.

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The plans below show a harbour in 2000 and how it looks today.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps illustrate siginificant changes in the layout and facilities of the harbour between the year 2000 and today.

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In some countries there is not enough recycling of waste materials (eg paper, glass, and cans) What are the reasons and solutions?

Some countries are not involved in recycling like others. I believe that it is because people lack the knowledge of recycling process, and it can be unaffordable. However, introducing recyling as a subject in schools, and investing in this area can help to tackle these issues.

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The plans below show a traditional and modern two-storey Japanese house. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The diagrams compare the interior design of a traditional and modern Japanese house.

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Some people feel that entertainers (e.g. films stars, pop musicians or sports starts) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Wich other types of job should be highly paid?

Nowadays, there is a popular opinion in the society that women should prefer career and personal development to the family values and children. At the same time another gorup of do not want to agree and tend to live in traditional families where men and women save their gender roles. In this essay I am going to diecuss both sideos of the argument and then argue in favour of balanced approach.

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Nowadays, people are living an increasingly longer life and in many countries there are more old people than young people. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

Today, most people are living and growing longer life and in most nations there are more old people than grown-up people. There are two drawbacks which are overpopulation and increasing burden on family members. while, it is beneficial to help family members and youngster learn experiences from older people.

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Some people prefer to travel in their own country when they have some time off. Others think that it is better to take a trip to a foreign country. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons to support your choice.

It is debated that some individuals choose to visit international countries to spend their holidays. However, others are opposed to such an idea which thinks the motherland is the better options. I would rather explore on other nations which I will explain the reason in detail in the following paragraph.

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