IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 167

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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In most countries, prison is an effective solution for the problem of crime. Some people think a more effective solution is to provide a better education. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

Nowadays, many solutions for the problem of crime had been proposed, all goal of solutions are seek a better way to deal with crime events. One of them is to provide a better education, and make convict reformed and return to society. This essay will discuss the reasons why I agree provide a better education.

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Both government investment in public transport systems and reductions in public transport ticket prices would help to reduce transport pollution greatly. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The problem of pollution caused by vehicles has become a rising concern for authorities. Whether funding to improve transport infrastructure and minimizing bus fares would be environmental friendly approach is the question of debate. This essay agrees with this statement as these suggestions seem quite efficient to ecnourage the more use of public shuttle service.

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Some people believe that stricter punishments can reduce crime rates. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The debate whether strict punishments should be implemented or not to lower the level of crime is ongoing. Many people think if the government introduces laws to punish criminals, this can in consequence lead people to fear the laws and they will not likely to commit crime. For instance, many countries such as Saudia Arabia and Palestine have very strict laws against drugs where people can even lose their fingers if they are found out of commiting these crimes.

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Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In present days, many people have put much attention to climate change as a serious problem to human lives and earth. Because of that, some people argue it is really important to think about the solution of it while others do not think so. Instead of live with it, I preferably to prevent climate change. This essay will elaborate how climate change have negative impacts on agriculture and weather.

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Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The idea that universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject is a topic of considerable debate in modern time. I am disagree because in my opinion universities should give a fair chance for number of male and female in each subject due to they must choose the subjects that they interests in without seeing the gender. Universities must make a strict exam to increase their universities’s acception rate to look for potential students according to their talents and interests. However, different fields often attract varying levels of interest from men and women due to societal factors, cultural norms, or personal preferences.

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Some people think the increasing use of technology in the workplace is good for young people's prospects of gaining a job and harder for old people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today's fast-paced world, new technology can efficiently do a lot of things. While some people will use technology in the workplace that is good for young people's prospects of gaining a job but harder for old people, some people argue that, and I apply totally agree with that. This essay will discuss why I agree the increasing use of technology in the workplace is good for young people's prospects of gaining a job.

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Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified ? Are there any alternatives ? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

A lot of millenials believe, that animal testing is not advisable and should be banned, whilst other group of people advocate main scientific findings can be unleashed only through animal analysis. I will shed some light on both the views and put forward my opinion on the given issue.

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You live in a small city. A local internet service provider is planning to launch 5G technology in your area. Company is conducting a survey to know public opinion Option A: Company should launch 5G for better communication services. Option B: introduction of 5G means more expensive internet services.

I firmly believe that launching 5G services would be an excellent option for the town. By introducing new technologies, one can upgrade the version of existing platforms of communications and experience fast internet speed across the websites.

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The behaviors of student in class become worse to worse. What has led to this situation? What can be done to solve it ?

The poor way in which pupils conduct themselves in class is a real issue of teachers today. This trend has been brought about by old-fashioned teaching methods, and class size, which both need to be individually addressed.

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Some schools are very strict about their school uniforms and the appearance of their pupils, while other schools have a very relaxed dress code. What are the advantages and disadvantages of having a school uniform?

It is universally acknowledged that special outfits are worn commonly in various organizations and academic institutes and schools are no exception. It is believed that mandatory dress at schools comes along with several drawbacks, while proponents of dress code argue that it should be taken serious by schools. This essay will discuss the cons and pros of imposing a constant uniform at the school.

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Air pollution is currently a big issue in most industrialized cities causing respiratory problems and changes in weather patterns. What do you think are the causes of this? What measures can be taken to reduce air pollution?

It is argued that air pollution has became a global problem and it is considered as a main factor behind respiratory and weather problems. I completely support the idea and will enlist the causes and solutions in the essay.

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Many people think that the behavior of professional sportsmen off the field is not important as long as they are good players. To what extent do you agree or disagree with it?

Every sports plays an important role in native citizens life whether if its cricket, football, tennis and many more. People follow sports players as their ideals and follow its life and value life a crazy fan. So, I personally believe that the action of each and every players in sports plays a very crucial role even off the sports ground. This essay will discuss why I disagree with this statement that if the player is very briiliant in its field but its actions off the field plays vital role as well.

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Many people think that the behavior of professional sportmen off the field is not important as long as they are good players. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that it is not necessary for the professional athlets to behave well. In my opinion, successful sportmen should pay attention to their responses and attitudes toward events.

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Using computers for a long time may have a lot of negative effects on children so it should be restricted. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

The emergence of computers has helped us in many ways, regardless of the user's age. However, when a child uses a computer for a long time, it might causes many potential drawbacks on their overall development and it should be restricted. I strongly agree that the use of computers need to be limited to children as it can badly affect their health.

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Some people think that the government should provide housing, while others believe that it is not the government’s responsibility.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The issue of whether the government has a responsibility to people’s housing has sparked considerable debate, with some people arguing that people’s housing is outside the government’s responsibility while others believe that administration should arrange for people to live. In this essay, I will discuss both views but personally, I agree that the government has no obligation to accommodate people.

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News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

At present numerous individuals consider that seeing pictures is more effective than hearing in TV News.Similarly, l agree with this assertion, and this essay examines the reason why this is viable according to me.

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There is an increasing evidence that global warming in caused by human actions. Many people want to immediately start reducing pollution from cars and factories. This could be done through taxing polluting industries. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

The alarming rate of poulltion is caused by the increase in any activities of humans. It is prevalently seen that the more activities are done by humans, the the faster the world becomes warmer. It is the fact that reducing the use of cars or the factory manufacting can help mitigate the severity of pollutiuons. Personally, it is reasonable and feasible to increase pollution taxes as it is the most effective way. There are reasons and evidence to support.

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Describe the benifits of Smart phone in your job and in your personal day by day activities

There are many cutting-edge technology devices that I have been used. If I have to chose one to talk about, it could be the hand phones. You know I have been using the hand phone for long period of time. However recently i just bought the new smart-phone that the old one had been had serious problem.

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n some countries, there is not enough recycling of waste materials (e.g. paper, glass, and cans). What are the reasons and what can be done to solve this problem?

The recycling of paper, glass, and cans does not have enough machines to reproduce again in some nations. This caused by the less awareness in people and the solution is that the government should step up to introduce more recycling machines so that people can knows more about this products.

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Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, people have more higher education, it makes the society seriously competitive. There are few people agruing that competition makes people motivated at company, at school and in daily rutine. However, other people believe that assisting and cooperating with each other is more significant than competing against other people. From my perspective, helping each other is the best way in the society.

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