IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 166

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Many people think that money is important to achieve happiness. What is the importance of money to happiness? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your experience.

In this 21st century, every individual is in the race to make more money than everyone .People think that in achieving happiness money plays a vital role. In this essay, I will discuss the ways how important money is to be happy.

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youger people need to be treated like adults if they commited a crime

Many teenagers commit crimes but get treated differently than adult criminals. Despite that many people think its important to punish the younger generation in the same way as adults, I would argue that it is not fair and logical. Younger people brain functions differently and punishing them in the same way as older people will be a lot damaging for their future careers.

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In these day, some people believe that the white collar worker must have a higher salary than the renowned athletes and artists. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

A lot of people around the world have been debating that the white collar worker must paid more than athletes and artist. It is difficult for some jobs such as doctors and lowyers to accept having low salaries nowadays. It is agreed that white collar worker must have more salaries than the renowered athletes and artists. In this essay, will discuss why some jobs have a direct effect on human lives rather than just for entertainment.

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reason why someone should pearn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

The demand for educating a non-native language is ever-increasing in the modernized world. A few people argue that the only purpose of learning an external language is for working or travelling, while others believe that there are many more reasons to this trend. Both these views will be explained and given a conclusion.

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Nowadays, more people are migrating to other countries than ever before. In order to become integrated into society in their adopted countries, immigrants should abandon their old ways and adapt to local custom and codes of behavior. Do you agree or disagree ?

It is argued that, nowadays people are migrating to other countries, so in order to merge themselves there, they need to learn new costum and codes and should forget old ways. I agree to the idea that should learn new culture of their choosen countries, but they should not forget their roots. I will justify my opinion in this essay with examples.

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The government’s investment in arts, music, and theatre is a waste of money. Governments should invest these funds in public services instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The government resources are limited so it is important to ensure their way of spending wisely and consider public needs. Is it wise enough to spend government money on “important but not urgent” things while there are higher priorities?. Some argue that authority entities should support any cultural program such as art, music or theater. However, I strongly believe to some extent that government has higher priorities, such as education sector and health care sector

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Today, many people do not know their neighbors. Why is this?

The way of social interaction has recently been changing. One of them is social engagement among neighborhoods in the city. Commonly, within people who live together in the same area, they do not know each other. Do we people in urban areas especially become more independent and not social beings?. Few reasons can be dependent factors that influence social phenomena. It could be because of longer commuting time or lack of public facilities.

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Some people think that some type of criminals should not go to prison, instead they should do unpaid work in the community. To what extent do you agree?

Nowadays, there are many types of criminals, such as robbery violence, etc. And in the opinion of some persons, the prisoners with easy ones, it is necessary to go to free work without paying and convince them to be through the community. I prefer to agree with this statement for some reasons. For example, instead of wasting time, they must help their country and spend their time on something useful. The second is that the local government must pay for all outcomes, and this money comes from taxpayers.

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Many children today are overweight and unhealthy. Give reasons for this problem and give solutions to fix this problem.

The world had drastically changed from the past. Today many childeren are extremely overweight. This is very unhealthy and can lead ro problems. This essay will explain reasons for this and give solution to fix the problem.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both this views and give your own opinion.

In recent decades, there are so many environmental problems that we need to tackle such as the rise of plastic bottles, water shortage, climate change and the loss of particular species. Some people debate whether the loss of particular species of plants and animals is the most important environmental challenge or if there are some other crucial environmental problems. In my opinion, the most important problem in the field of environment is climate change for several reasons which will be discussed in this essay.

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Many people think that every individual is responsible for their happiness, but some people believe that there are other external factors that influence us. Discuss both views and give your own oppinion

All of human in this world has a right to be happy. Otherwise, they can also change the bad things that happened to them become bless or choose to feel glad. On one hand, some people argue that everyone must responsible for their own happiness. Meanwhile, others think there are some reasons outside from ourselves that make us happy. This essay will elaborate both sides and give a conclusion.

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some people think that online reading materials are better for children. others argues that traditional paper based resources are better. discuss and give your opinion.

There is no denying the fact that there are different styles of reading and everyone of us got it’s own.

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Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of many species & loss of biodioversity. What are the primary causes of loss of biodiversity? What solution can be done to to solve it?

It cannot be denied that people have taken part in the loss of biodiversity and extinction of many species around the world. To solve this problem, it is important to know the cause of why such events occur. This essay will try to describe the cause and solve this problem.

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Below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year iy the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and ie comparisons where relevant.

The table compares average amount of time not-working people spent on their spare time activities during last year.

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Public health is becoming an urgent issue nowadays. Some argue that governments should create nutrition and food choice laws to improve public health, while others believe that it is a matter of personal choice and responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, it is a global problem that who should take responsibility to improve the public health. The view of whether the government ought to consider its citizens' healthcare or each individual should take some steps for the protection is advocated by a group of people. I partially support this viewpoint and I will elaborate my arguments in following paragraphs.

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you're people should be treated like adults if they commit a crime. in what extent do I agree or disagree

Many teenagers commit crimes but get treated differently than adult’s criminals. Despite that many people think its important to punish the younger generation in the same way as adults, I would argue that it is not fair and logical. Younger people brain functions differently and punishing them in the same way as older people will be a lot damaging for their future careers.

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it is important to everyone, including young people to save money for their future. to what extent do you agree and disagree woyj this statement? give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples fro your own knowledge or experience

In today’s rapidly changing world, money saving for a better future is a topic of debate. While some argue it is not beneficial for living behavior, I firmly believe that integrating what people need into preserving their funds can greatly enhance the quality of life.

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Advertising is becoming more and more common in everyday life. Some people say that advertising has a positive impact on our lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued by a lot of people that advertising is changing our daily life,which is really ordinary around us.I completely agree that advertising is benefits to us,because it lets us konw more information about this society in very short amount of time.

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Some people think that the most important thing about being rich is it gives a person the opportunity to help other people. Do you agree or disagree?

A group of individials adhere to the view that the essential part of being wealthy is assisting people and some of them don't agree with that idea. I partially support this viewpoint and I will elaborate my arguments in following paragraphs.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Marketing is widely used by bussinesses to attract potential costumers. Although there are numerous methods of advertising, highlighting new features of products are the most popular one. Adopting this method has its roots on limited capacities of advertisements. In my opinion, it is logicaly a positive trend because it is still used wordwidely.

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