IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 168

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, in some certain area, especially in countrysides, lots of small local shops have closed due to lack of costumers. This case happens because most of people prefer to buy necessities in supermarkets. Some groups think that this is not important whether the people go shopping at local shops or large shopping malls, whereas others argue that it causes some disadvantages, both for the people and the environment. In my opinion, I firmly agree that this can results negative impacts to the society and the environment.

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Some people think it is not necessary for adults to receive education in class. Self-study is a good way for them to study more effectively. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

When adults choose to study, it is mostly for self-enrichment, for enjoyment or self-improvement, and not to work toward a vacation or degree. They have two opinions in front of them. One is to do self-study through various resources such as the internet or libraries and the other is by enrolling in regular classes. While I agree that self-study is more convenient for adults, a more effective approach would be to do major part of the study on one’s own and top it up with a few days in the classroom.

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the table below highlights data on the number of travellers using three major british airports between 1998 and 2003. summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The table shows information about how many travellers used three major British airports over a five-year period between 1998 and 2003.

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The statistics show that prior to the year 1960, less than half of one percent of adolescents had been vegetarians.

The statistics show that prior to the year 1960, less than half of one percent of adolescents had been vegetarians. Consumption of vegetarian foods also gradually rise among the adolescents and reached it’s plateau of 15% in year 1980 among teenagers. This is the time that the most considerable increase of vegetarians among UK adolescents was recorded.

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Children are under more pressures nowadays from academic, social and commercial perspectives. What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures?

In this day and age, myriad of kids are facing huge pressures, due to academic, social and commercial aspects. The main reason for that is parent’s effects in children’s choice, but possible solutions to this might be classes or seminars for children and for mothers and fathers.

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Children are getting more pressures nowadays from academic, social and commercial perspectives. What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures?

Children today face increasing pressures from academic, social and commercial sources. The main cause of this issue is the high expectations set by school and parents. However, the reliable solution would be promoting a balanced approach to education, emphasizing the importance of well-being over academic success.

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Some people say that sports must be included in the school curriculum. However, others hold the opinion that it shouldn’t be there as it can lead to wasting time, which can be utilised for more effective academic training.

It is universally acknowledged that the educational system is an inseparable part of minors’ life and through educating, they will be trained not only scientifically but also characteristically. It is argued that school curriculum, in addition to the scientific subjects, should be involved with physical education (P.E) too. However, this notion has some advocates and opponents. This essay will elaborate both sides defends and reveal my orientation too.

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Bullying is a big problem in many schools. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

It is widely acknowledged that bullying is a serious issue founded in numerous schools, others argue that society should not neglected about the factors contributed to this worrying trend and should take action to resolve this immediately. Both point of views about causes and solutions of bullying in schools will be further discussed in this essay.

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Some people consider sport to be their career and role in society. For others, it is mostly a workout to keep fit. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is universally acknowledged that sports play a significant role in humans’ life. Some people consider it as a profession and an approach of earning living, hence, they dedicate their time and effort to be professional in their careers. However, some people disagree with this approach, and from their view points, sport is the mean of a healthy lifestyle. This essay will express the perspective of both sides and relieve my orientation towards it.

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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Other believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Generally, university students learn subjects which are considered as useful for their future job positions during study time. And these subjects are always planned by universities for students. This argument that whether students should be able to select their subjects in given fields of study by themselves, according to their own passion and enthusiasm, is both supported and refuted by many. This essay will analyse both sides of this argument before declaring a position.

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In many parts of the world, there is not enough food for everyone. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Insufficient food become a problem in many countries. Having said that, many people can not fulfill their needs, which is food that contains nutrion. The causes of this issue are lack of water resources and the land is arid. However, there are some ways that the government can do to tackle this problem, such as doing import meals from another country.

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In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

Have you ever considered how to recover from school before attending a university or getting employment experience? It's common knowledge that having your parents push you to attend college after high school offers some benefits, but it also has drawbacks. This essay will examine the benefits and drawbacks of young people working or traveling for a year in between high school graduation and college enrollment, and it will do so in a rational manner.

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The number of overweight children in developed countries is increasing. Some people this is due to problems such as the growing number of fast food outlets. Others believe that parents are to blame for not looking after their children's health. To what extent do you agree with these views?

Obesity is the first step that can leads us to many health problems in future. Nowadays, there is surge in the weight of children in many prosperous countries. According to some people it is mainly due to increased in number of junk food intake whereas, other believe that it's parents responsibility to look after their kid's wellness. In my opinion, they both are right and I completely agree with both statements. In the upcoming paragraphs, I will shed light in some points to justify my opinion.

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Many people one weitten tengsagain ass formal and me way Wha dinadopment have schvantages and advantages

Significant number of individuals prefer utilising informal form of speech in writing. Using less formal language might simplify communication between persons and make it more friendly. However, it also may lead to loss of professionalism and establish increasing of vocabulary.

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The most important element in a person’s life is their work. Without a satisfying career, life is meaningless. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays working is a cornerstone in our life. Some people argue that the presence of asatisfying job is crucial and gives more meaning to our lifes. I agree with the statement, In this essay I will discuss my argument followed by reasons and examples.

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some people agree with studying at home is better than studying at libraries, what do you think? do you agree or diagree

Some poeple believe that it is better to study at home than libraries. They believe that home is more convienent and they feel more comfortable while studying. I tend to disagree with the given idea and think that libraries are much better choice comparing to your own bedrooms for so many reasons.

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Topic : children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic, social and commercial perspectives. What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures?

In this modern day,kids have been lining increased pressures from various issues of their existence,such as social,academics and commercial.This essay will analyse the reasons of pressures and suggest steps to less them.

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Despite a large number of gyms, a sedentary lifestyle is gaining popularity in the contemporary world. What problems are associated with this¬? What solutions can you suggest?

It is clear that nowadays except the big amount of gyms in cities, the part of citizens prefer slow pace life, although experts suggest that this may lead to numerous health problems.In this essay, I will discuss the reasons why this might be the case and put several solutions to tackle these issues.

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In the past, lectures were the traditional method of teaching large numbers of students in a classroom. Nowadays new technology is increasingly being used to teach students. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this new approach in teaching?

These days online lectures and gadgets during classes are a common thing thanks to the progress of technology. New technologies have essential benefits as teaching despite a long distance and better opportunities for both teachers and students. However, it has some drawbacks for health and is not affordable for everyone.

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it was predicted that people living in the twenty-first century would have more free time than ever before because of improvement in technology. To what extent has this prediction come true?

Due to the advent in technology, a future in which individuals would have more leisure time than in the past has been in trajectory for a period of time. In my opinion, in present days, this prediction has become a reality to some extent for certain group of population, while there is the other who must work harder and have less free time than before.

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