IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 168

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Both government and individual are spending vast amount of money protecting animals and their habitats. This money could be better spent dealing with fundamental issues in society such as poverty and healthcare. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In some countries, government and citizens are investing more money on protecting animals , while others would argue that it is a better investment to addressing social problems. For instance ,healthcare systems and poverty. This essay completely discusses with this view because people are the main responsible of wildlife destruction and caused severe environmental problems.

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Nowadays, there are many TV shows that allow ordinary people to go on television and become celebrities, even though really, they have no talent. People should not be allowed to go on TV shows unless they can demonstrate some skill or talent that is entertaining. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Today, there are many TV shows that ordinary people can apply to freely. Ocassionary, these programms make a common people a celebrity, such as Susan Boil in a pupular audition TV program, God Talent, in the UK. However, it is a true that some people with no talent or an excell performance are showed in the TV.

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Recently we are facing increasing number of cars, which poses great threat to the pedestrians and cyclists. What's more, a lot of parks need to be sacrificed as a result of the construction of railways and superhighways. Do you agree or disagree? What do you think is the best solution to satisfy residents to their heart's content?

Due to increasing population, more cars are be needed to deal with the needs of transportation. In my view, I agrees that the number of cars rise not only make a negative impact on pedestrians and cyclists, but also diminish the area of leisure parks because of construcion of railways and superhighways.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Parenting is hard to ask because as a parent we all want our children's to grow to be an amazing individual. In order to raise them well, we must teach them what is right and wrong at an early age. If children can learn to differentiate this, they will surely be a fine adult in the future and we as a parent will feel insured.

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Some people believe that elderly employees are more useful to a company. While others believe that young employees are better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Some people believe that older employees can give more to the company because of their experiences. While on the other side,others believe that young employees have a greater ability to work because of their flexibility and endurance. In this article,I will be discussing both views and give my opinion in the end.

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Around the world children learn English language as a second language at school. however, in some places they also learn at Kinder garden. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of learning at kinder garden?

There is no denying the fact that in some countries around the earth kids do not make English as a main language at school. While it is a commonly held belief that, teachers make kids at school learn English and make it second language, there is also an argument that in some areas they learn kids how to speak English as a main language. This essay will analyse this topic from both points of view and express my opinon.

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Some people believe that reading is always a good habit. Others feel it depends on which books a person is reading. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Today, a contentious issue exists regarding the reading. It is thought by some people that reading is an excellent hobby for individuals, undoubtly, while others challange that the books what a person's read are the important. In this essay, both views shall be explored, and my opinion given.

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Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. Othe people think that in today's world subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both points and give your opinion

In this contemporary era, every country on the earth, there is disagreement around the topic of paramount of teaching history. With regards to this topic, few consider history should a major class in school; while, other assirt teaching science and technology is more crucial. In this topic, I will state the both points and inculding my contend.

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The working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend. Do you agree or disagree?

In recent decades, there is an arising debate over whether the number of days off during the week should be extended or not. I am strongly convinced that shorter working hours can be highly beneficial because of some reasons that will be stated in this essay.

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Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of working from home.

In recent times, the number of workers who started to work from home has risen. Many people choose the freedom and comfort of working from home compare to working in an office. However there are both benefits and drawbacks to working from home. In this essay I will discuss some of the reason why working from home is getting popular and some drawbacks that YOU should be aware of that.

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Some people say that adversiting is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In recent times, advertising is getting more and more important for companies. Some people argue that this is an effective way for businesses to sell their products or services. However, some people believe that people are not paying attention to advertises and it is not effective anymore. In this essay I will discuss both views.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In recent years, instead of going to their usual doctor, patients consider alternative medicines and treatments more viable. While there are some benefits, I believe that this is a negative development.

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Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some contend that there should be no education tax requirements for those sending their children to private schools. I firmly disagree with this notion.

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In some contries an increasing number of people are sufferung from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. it is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. to what extent do you agree or dissagree with opinion

Health problems are now crucial issue, resulted from inappropriate eating behavior. Many people believe that government should be involved by rising tax of junk food, while some believe that having some exercise and eating healthy food are more sensible. In my point of views, I agree with later view with the reasons discussed in the following paragraphs.

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One problem faced by almost every large city is traffic congestion. What do you think the causes are? What solutions can you suggest?

In recent times, opportunities and living in large cities got attractive and the number of people who lives in large cities is rising all the time. However these cities have problems and one of them is traffic congestion. This essay will look at the reason for this and propose some possible solutions.

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In many countries people of all ages do sports and exercises a lot.Does this have more advantages or disadvantages? give reasons for your answer and include examples from your own knowledge and experience.

From all age groups of individuals living in numerous domains devote themselves to sports activities. From my perspective, this is a magnificent habit that a human being can have with no drawbacks on the grounds that by not choosing stable life people can enhance their physical health along with mental state.

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Some people think that schools are too competitive and that this has a negative impact on children. Others believe the competitive environment encourages children to achieve. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

There is a strong debate among people whether competitive environment has a positive or negative effect in chlidren ability to comprehend in schools. In general, younger generation tends to get more excited when it comes to be better than other friends at school. It is agreed that competitive environment helps juveniles to achieve success in the future. However, this essay will present why school should keep the competation between childeen and mention some examples about it.

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Because of the global economy, many goods including what we use as daily basis produced by other countries have to be transported for a long distance. What extent do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages

Transported producet can be grow a economy. By transporting system a country can benifited. It has many advantages outweigh the disadvantanges. I believe it has many advantages.

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In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some contend that child employment, a popular practice in many countries, is wrong while others believe it can be a valuable experience both on learning and responsibility measure. Although working from a young age might pose certain challenges, I believe the benefits it brings about overweight the drawbacks.

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Many countries want to host international sports event, while other countries think that hosting sports event has more problems than benefits. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In this modern era, many developing countries are indulging towards promoting sports events at international level. Although few nations are proud to participate for hosting global games tournaments in own state but, its not always popular for others as some people belives it can be challanging for nations growth and impact on financial level. This essay will discuss both sides of view and i shall focus on promoting international events can be advantageous for counties growth, and i will elaborate it in further paragraphs.

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