IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 213

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

band

Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.

Nowadays, the overall health rate in the whole world has become a big issue, and in order to fix that, some people want more sporting centers to be built, while others think it will not make any difference. I would assume that the lack of sports buildings is not the main reason for a low health rate around the world; nevertheless, adding more specific sports facilities could help to fix this problem.

band

In today's competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents go out to work. While some say the children in their families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parent’s absence. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own.

In today's world where it seems hard to make both the ends meet because of inflation. Some people say that both parents should go out to earn in order to make their kids' life better whereas others think that one one of the guardians should stay at home to look after their minors. The following paragraphs will look onto both the aspects of the statement.

band

Air travel is responsible for a lot of pollution in our environment. Some people think that prices of airplane tickets should be increased in order to reduce air traffic. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays there is a lot of air pollution caused by increased air traffic. Nevertheless, a group of people think that tickets on aeroplane flyes should be cost more for declining air traffic numbers. I absolutely disagree with this statement.

band

Some people want governments to spend money looking for life on other planets. Others, however, think this is a waste of public money when there are so many problems on earth. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

These days some people have shown enthusiasm about lives on other planets. Whereas, some others do think is a waste of energy to search about it. Subsequently, there is some argument between these two sides, that the government should spend some public money to look after life on other planets or save public money and spend it on solving the problems which these days human have caused to the earth by their doings. This essay is going to discuss both views.

band

TOPIC : The movement of people to cities is one of the biggest problems facing many cities today. Discuss the main causes. What solutions can be used to tackle the situation?

Nowadays, many people are shifting from countrysides to urban areas and it is become a big problem. Two major causes are people do not have same accessibility to education like in cities and the kind of jobs in rural areas are limited. This essay will offer two solutions, the first one is transmigration and the second one is equal development.

band

Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community. They believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole. Do you agree or disagree.

Some people believe volunteer work necessary for children in their free time because there are several benefits to both teenagers and the local community. In my opinion, I completely agree teenagers should do volunteer works for two major reasons.

band

Nowdays, advertising aimed at children is on the rise. Some people think this should be controlled. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The soaring number of advertisements directed at children has been a bitter controversy over the last decade. From this aspect, questions about whether this phenomenon should be regulated are raised. In my opinion, commercials targeting children should be strictly regulated to a greater extent.

band

In many countires women no longer feel the need to get married. Some people believe that this is because women are able to earn their own income and, therefore, do not require the financial security that marriage can bring. Do you agree or disagree?

The minds of the female population in the world about marriage is changing, the outcome is that the quantity of people that choose wedding is reducing all arround the word. In this essay we will see why this is a positive and is making the women more happy, financial secure and improving their lives.

band

Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding changes. Others, howevere think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

There is no doubt, that changes present in our lives; however, not all people accept it, trying to live in a familiar way. I suggest, that changes are good atributes and in this essey will observe negative and positive sides of the phenomenon.

band

The cost of international travel is decreasing, and so the trend of international tourism is increasing in many countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages of the rising trend of tourism for countries?

The cost of international travel is decreasing and therefore international tourism is increasing around the world. This essay believes that is has more advantages for the local economy although it may present some disadvantages that will be discussed below.

band

In recent years, there has been a rise in the popularity of second hand clothing amongst younger generations. Why is this happening? Do you think it's a positive or negative development?

The popularity of second hand clothings has been rising amongst the youngsters nowadays as they have cheaper price than new clothings and matched with purchased ability of the younger generations. However, this phenomenon will give a negative impact because it will affect local clothing brands sales due to the price of used clothings.

band

Some people say that to prevent illness and disease, governments should focus more on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, part of world population believes government should have an important role to prevent disease thanks to creation of a plan, that can remove the majority of air pollution. I'm totally agree with this statements because pollution damages products which we eat regularly and gas was produced by industrial basements go inside own body.

band

Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional food and traditional ways of food preparation. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

There are beliefs, that processed foods will grow in popularity so that it will substitute both traditional cuisine and its cooking process. This trend is easily agreeable with, because the convenience food is cheaper and half-cooked, as it saves up a lot of money and time for the end consumers respectively.

band

Some people think technology development decreases crime, while others believe it actually encourages crimes. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Argument regards to whether the development of technology could reduce crime rate has been raised at recent time. This essay will discuss both side of the view and conclude my own opinion at the end.

band

Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community. They believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole. Do you agree or disgree.

Some people believe volunteer work nacassary to childrens in their free time because there are several benefit to both teenagers and local community. In my opinion I completely agree with this point.

band

Some people say that it is better to work for a large company than a small one. Do you agree or disagree

Nowadays, individuals have been working in various ways and this has been accepted compared to the past. However, it is still said that working for a large company is better than working for a small one. Although there are both advantages and disadvantages, it is better to work for a large company.

band

As a result of tourism and the increasing number of people travelling, there is a growing demand for more flights. What problems does this have on the environment? What measures could be taken to solve the problems?

In recent times, tourism has become widely popular, and consequently, the demand for flights has also significantly increased. Although air travel serves as a fast mode of transportation, thereby increasing global connectivity, it also has some detrimental effects on the environment. This essay aims to elaborate on these effects and discuss some measures that can be taken to mitigate these challenges.

band

he Government in your area is planning to allocate a large piece of green belt Land to an entertainment company, the company plans to open a casino, a five star hotel and a large entertainment park, however some public organizations are against it, the local Government is seeking opinion from residents in the area, share your opinion Option A: Keep the Green Belt as it is and why Option B: Allow the development in the green belt and why

Thank you for seeking residents' opinion. The decision between building an entertainment company or not has sparked a considerable debate in our locality. I opine that building a recreational space would be a more apropos option as our town lacks public spaces.

band

In today’s society, both Western medicine and traditional complementary forms of medicines’ are now widely known and used. The effectiveness of these kinds of treatment is determined by the patient’s mental attitude towards it. To what extent you agree or disagree?

In today’s society, both Western medicine and traditional complementary forms of medicines’ are now widely known and used. The effectiveness of these kinds of treatment is determined by the patient’s mental attitude towards it.

band

In many countries around the world, life expectancy is increasing. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this situation and give your own opinion.

These days, an increasing lifespan has become one of the most frequently asked questions. Due to several reasons, the length of life has been rising in different countries around the world. That is why there might be a discussion about some possible pros and cons of growing life expectancy among some people. I believe that there are both positive and negative effects however, the outweighs the latter.

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.