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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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In many countries government spend a lot of money on arts. However, some think government should spend more on health and education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that authorities in some nations are spending a lot of money on promoting Arts whereas others belief that Goverenment should spend it on health care and on educational sector. I agree with this notion that these sectors helps to lead a stronger and educated workforce for the betterment of the society but arts have their own importance.

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Holding International games such as The Olympic Games is an exciting event. Some people think that it has positive effects while other argue that it is a waste of money. Discuss both sides of view and give your own opinion.

Holding international games such as The Olympic Games is an interesting activity. Some individuals might think that hold this event have many advantages. First, The Olypmic Games can bring positive economic impact to the host country because hosting international games would attract poeple from different countires for visiting. It might need a lot of staff to entertain them. So, the number of job requirements will increase which can boost the economy through tourism, infrastructure development and job creation. Second, The Olypmic Games can also rise the host country's global prestige and recognition. Since this event is very important to the host country, they will focus on developing the centre of the country for gain global attention to their advanced infrastructure. Therefore, this event can expand the international reputation to the host country and encourage their cultural exchange.

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To what extent has the traditional male role changed in the last 20 years? Many people believe that women make better parenting than men and that this is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting. Write an essay expressing your point of view. Give reasons for your answer.

It's argued that over the previous 20 years men role has been changed. And, many people believe that women better than men in parenting. Therefure, due to that women have the greater role in raising children in most societies. In my point of view, women have the ability of raising the children better than men. And this is because of the nature of women. Moreover, Men might spend most of their time in work and with friends.

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Some people believe that it is important for parents to tell or read stories for their children. Others think that parents don’t have to do this because there are many sources for children to read like books, comics and websites. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

It's argued that some people believe it's necessary that each parents should tell or read stories to their children.While other think it's not that important since there are many sources for children to read. I believe it's one of the most important thing to tell and transfer the parents information to their children.

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Many people today are worried about cyber crime such as hacking and identity theft. What problems does cyber crime cause andd what solutions can you suggest for ordinary people and business to take?

These days many people are concerned about cyber crime like hacking and identity theft. The problems caused by cyber crime are they put people at risk, and people cannot share their personal information with others. The solutions are not sharing personal information online, and the state should take necessary measures to tackle cyber crime.

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Information technology enales many people to do their work outside their workplace ( e.g. at home, when travelling, etc. ). Do the benefits of this mobility outweigh the disadvantages ?

It's argued that technology can help people to work remotly from their workplace, I believe the mobility of this dose not outweigh the disadvantages, due to people feel they should respond to their work even after the working hours.

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Littering in cities is an increasing problem which needs to be dealt with. Some people think that steeper fines is the best way to deal with the problem. To what extent do you agree?

There is a significant increment of littering in cities while most of the cities suffer of that, while steeprt fines might help in this situation as people believed. this essay totally agree with this statement fines might be the solution of this issue.

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Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people,however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Whilst the governments believe the economy is very important because they depend on it very much, people think the other types of progress are equal to money so they can get their rights properly.

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Today more and more tourist or visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the advantages and disadvantages for tourist who visit such places?

The tourism sector is expanding day by day. Each year people from different regions are dreaming to travel to different tourisrt sites. Some are exploring the oceans, where as some are surpassing mountains. On the other hand, many are choosing difficult places like K2, Sahara desert or the Antarctic. However, these dangerous exploration, have some advantages and disadvantages. I completely agree with the ideas and will talk about both positive and negative impacts of troublesome tourism in my essay.

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Veer advancement in medical science note it is quite common for people to live up to age of 100 and further medical research would make it possible for normal human beings to live longer than that. Is this desirable or not

Society has different views about the development of the science which is predicted to help individuals live longer while others deny these benefits. There are some strong arguments in support of this new advancement of medical science, but I believe that living up to 150 years will cause negative influence on the community.

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Some people regard video games as useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that video games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits?

Nowadays, a lot of people playing video games, as a result of it some argue that video games can be a useful educational tool, while others believe that its have a bad impact on those who playing it. However, in this essay, I will discuss both perspectives and provide my own opinion.

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An increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. Why is this the case, and what solutions are possible?

Nowaday, the environment is threatened by the increase in commodity production to meet market demands leading to a lot of consequences. Therefore, to overcome the serious consequences which are caused by the manufacturing industry, we need to clarify the causes and come up with optimal measures.

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Many countries are experiencing population growth and need to build more homes. Some say that new homes should be constructed in existing cities while others argue that new towns should be built to accommodate the growing population. What are the advantages and disadvantages of these points of view

In the last years, a demographic growth has been observed in many countries. As a resoult, there is a necessity to provide a place to live for increasing number of people. While some claim that in order to do it cities should be extendend to include new districts, others believe that it is more efficient to bulid new cities. Each of these views has both pros and cons.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely succesfull at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

These days people argue that advertisement has a big impact on our behavior when bought things, while others think that is not useful anymore. This essay will discuss both views.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is considered by some people, whenever, any bad situation come in life it is good to accept it as it is, while, some thinks we should try and improve such situations. I believe it best to analyse the problem and try to solve it, but for sometimes situations are that worst, we left with only one choice to accept it and move on.

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A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of Income. Unfortunately, tourism can be cause of lot of problem if its not well managed . What are the advantage and dis advantage in the modern world? Do you think advantage overweight the disadvantage .

The issue of tourism has been a disputatious and contentious matter recently. It has been argued that travelling has a major impact on both countries and people. Therefore, I tend to believe that both the benefits and drawbacks need to be examined in depth.

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In many countries, women are allowed to take maternity leave in the first months after babies are born. Do advantage outweigh disadvantage?

There seems to be a debatable issue of whether mothers are entitled to stay away from official duties during the initial months when new born babies need maternity care in more nations. Letting females experience maternity leave provides them an opportunity to get adapted to their new life no matter how others strongly others oppose my notion. Now, I will make the issue clear in order to arrive at the last but not least conclusion.

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The working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend To what extend fo you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevaant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

This essay will open topic about working week and should it be longer or shorter. Aurthor opinions, that goverment have to make working week shorter during the winter and the summer time. I will explain and give some relevant knowledge from this topic.

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In modern world technology develops dramatically. Some people believe that this is good for traditional cultures, but others think it will lead to their extinction. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Rapidly developing technologies in nowadays world affects not only our lives, but more common things like traditional cultures. This problem might be arguable for some people in the way of iteraction for traditional cultures and dramatically developing technologies. In my opinion, such phenomena might be dangerous but useful for saving traditions.

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In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is controversy about whether substantial salaries would benefit society at large or it is an issue that needs to be addressed. Although i acknowledge the benefits of equality, i believe the drawbacks imposed by it pale its benefits.

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