IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 211

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subject. But others believe that teenagers should focus on the subject that they are good at or they find the most interest. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

School plays a crucial role on the teenagers skill advancement. While some people argue that students should focus on all lessons, others think that teenagers should study more into the subjects that they are capable and interest at. This essay will discuss both views and give my personal standpoint in detail.

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Countries with a long average working time are more economically successfull than those countries which do not have a long working time. To what extend you agree or disagree?

It is argued that countries with a longer average working time are more economically successful than countries with shorter working times. This essay wholeheartedly disagrees with this assertion due to the justifications and illustrations given below.

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Some children spend a long time each day on their smartphone. Why is this? Is this a positive or negative development?

Some juveniles spend a long time each day on their mobile phones. This is because video streaming apps are so engaging, but this can have negative consequences because they can disract from family life. Minors love using mobiles devices because streaming services have many entertaining videos. This means they have endless opprtunities to enjoy themselves, and they can spend their entire day consuming new shows without thinking. For example, many videos on Netflix are aimed at children, some of which design their title and thumbnails to entire children to clich on one more video. As a result, they spend their free time in front of a screen instead of being outside doing physical activities, such as bike riding or playing sports. Despite them being highly enjoyable for the child, this essay believes they should be views negatively because of the impact it has on time with parents and siblings. Being around one's nuclear family teaches children many important things, such as values, m...

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The movement of people from agricultural areas to big cities has caused many problems at both places. What are the reasons of this problem and how can it be solved?

One of the significant issues today relates to the immigration of farmers from countrysides to more populated areas, which has brought negtive impacts on both places. In this essay, I elaborate the causes of this trend and how this should be dealt with.

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In some countries, fast food restaurants and companies give money to schools provided that the school promote their products to school children. What do you think is the positive and negative of this in the development of children?

In some parts of the world, some junk food owners try to promote their products among scholars by providing financial support to the school. I personally believe that this action is likely to have more negative effects on pupils' development.

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In some schools and universities, girls tend to choose arts subjects (e.g literatures), boys tend to choose science subjects (e.g physics). Why do you think this is so? Should this tendency be changed? Do you agree or disagree?

In some educational institutions, there is a significant trend where female students select arts and literratures, males are involved in science. In this essay, I describe the backgounds of this and the reasons why I vehemently believe that it should be improved.

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Some celebrities say their love lives shouldn’t be under scrutiny in the media. However, other people feel that they should accept this as part of their fame. Discuss both perspectives and give your opinion?

With the advancement of technology, information flows very fast. Consequently, famous people are concerned about their exposition. Some argue that their personal life should not be shared on the media. However, some people believe that it should. In my opinion, people should have the right to preserve their lives, but this essay will explore both views.

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Some people claim that the government should provide free health care. Others think that the government will not provide the most innovative methods of treatment and it's better to invest those funds in education and culture. What is your opinion?

No one can deny that some people believe that the government should provide free health care , while others prefer to think that the government will not provide the most innovative methods of treatment and it's better to invest those funds in education and culture. It is important to admit that both views have their own benefits. In this essay, I will discuss the possible reasons that support each view, and what benefits they bring to the society.

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Some people think it is more important to plant more trees in open areas in towns and cities than provide more housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people believe that increasing the number of the plantation of trees in towns and cities is more crucial than building houses. I strongly agree with planting more plants rather than making more houses and this essay will explain the reasons in the following paragraphs.

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Sopeople me think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

o live in the community,it is necessary to become a good member.Most of the people believe that it is parents duty to educate children to be a favourable component of society while others think that teachers should teach them.In this essay, I Will discuss both points of view.As far as I m concerned, I strongly agree with the statement that parents can teach them moral and religious values.

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Some people believe that advertising has a strong effect on a person’s decision-making process. Others feel that it has little or no real impact. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

It is often held that advertising have a significant impact at influencing customer to purchase items. While some people argue that advertising are predominant in persuading people to buy the products, others have opinion that other approach will be more effective. This essay will discuss both these points of view and give my personal opinion about the issue.

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Some pepole say that teenagers should work part-time and earn money. This way they will learn basic lessons about work and becom disciplined. Others argue that teenagers should not sacrifice their rest and after-school activities to work . Discusee both views and give your opinion.

Some people see that teenagers should find a job opportunity and gain financial returns after finishing school. In addition, they will acquire life skills and experiences. Others, think that they have free time in their lives to work in the future. Therefore, they should spend their free time with interesting activities with their friends. From my point of view, I see that students in advanced stages of their lives should get new skills and competencies through working.

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Some parents nowadays put more pressure on their children to succeed. Why is this the case? It is a negative or positive trend?

It is widely recognized that some parents in this day and age tend to apply more pressure on their offsprings to achive goal in life. This essay will explain reasons of this phenomenon before concluding that it is more harmful to children's overall development.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All students should be required to study art and music in secondary school. Use specific reasons to support your answer.

Secondary school is a one time moment in people's life, some of the people choose to do whatever they want. It could be focus on art and music or studying science and social. Some people argue that all students must study art and music. But, I think they do not have to, as they have their own expertise also they do not have much time in highschool.

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All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree?

While the idea of banning all cars that burn fossil fuels and replacing them with electric cars has environmental benefits, a complete ban is not good at this point. I believe a gradual transition is more practical solution due to economic challenges and current limitations in infrastructure.

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Fewer and fewer people today write by hand using a pen or pencil . What are the reasons for this? Is this positive or a negative development.

Nowadays pen and pencil are being used by small numbers of people. The development of technology is one of the many reasons behind this trend. In my opinion It is a posItive step.

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Celebrities play an important social role in the community. What are the advantages and disadvantages of being a celebrity

Today, being a celebrity in modern society has positive and negative sides . However, some of them enjoy being popular, also most of them want be private and personal freedom. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages .

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Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to university education and that governments should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is thought by some that everyone should be entitled to higher education, and this should be made free to puilpils by the government without considering their financial capability. In my opinion, i agree that university education should be made free, because education is important for growth in every society.

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Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society. Describe advantages and disadvantages of death penalty and give your opinion.

Some individuals assume that particularly dangerous criminals should be punished with death penalty, while others think that this type of punishment is not a clear solution. Even though it seems like capital punishment should scare potential maniacs from commiting crimes, most of the time, this penalty will cause them to commit even more bad things, since they have nothing to lose anymore.

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Some people think that parents should deal with their children's poor behaviour, while others believe it is the government's responsibility to regulate it. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experiences.

It is believed by individuals that parents should negotiate with their children's bad behaviour. However, others assume that improving kids' ethics is the government's priority. Both perspectives are significant and in this essay I will discuss them.

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