IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 208

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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In some contries more and more people are hiring a personal fitness trainer rather than playing sports or doing exercise classes. what are the reasons for this? is this positive or negative development?

In today's fast paccing world, fitness is quite challanging to maintain for individuals. To balance healthy-toned body some prefers to have a personal fitness coach rather than not idulging in outdoor sports activities. However, there are some bright outcomes and drawbacks to seek personal help from fitness tutors. This essay will elaborate possible causes for new trends in fitness.

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Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. and attention to studying for a qualification. their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to

No one can deny that most people belives it is important to give all their time and attention to the main subject, while others prefer otherwise. In this essay I will disscuss the possibile point of views, and what I personally think.

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More and more people in developing countries are purchasing cars for the first time. What problems does this cause? What do you think is a possible solution?

Car owning number is increasing in the developing countries. The main problem this causes is congestion and poor air quality and the most viable solution is to improve the public transportation and educate people about it.

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Some people believe that individuals who earn a lot of money are the most successful. Others say that the individuals who contribute to the society (such as scientists or teachers) are the most successful. 🔸Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Write at least 250 word

Some become successful by their money and some by their skills. Some people say that only those people are successful who earn a lot of money and other opposition say that person who work as part of society like, scientists, teacher, navy officer are the most successful. I believe that both are successful on their position.

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Many elderly people are no long looked after their families are put in care homes pr nursing homes. What is the advantage and disadvantages of this trend.

Nowadays,It is becoming more and more popular for people to put their elderly families in a nursing home.Generally speaking,most populations tend to put their old parents in a care home instead of taking care of them in their own homes.It is obvious that there are a lot of advantages and disadvantages of putting old people in a care home.In this essay,I will address some benefits and drawbacks of this action from adults.

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Some people think the increasing business and cultural contact between countries brings many positive effects. Others say it causes the loss of national identities. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

Some individuals believe that tighter relationship in economy and culture between countries yield many benefits, while other consider that it is detrimental to national diversity. From my perspective, I reckon closer cultural and business contact impose positive impacts on two countries, although it may reduce some loss of domestic identities.

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These days’ children are surrounded by electronic devices such as personal computers, tablet computers, and smart phones, and they learn to use them at a very early age. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this situation?

Nowaday there are many thechnological inventions, that are encompass us and our children. Moreover toddlers are use them better than their parents. In this essay I'll try to understand if the advantages of such status are outweight it's disadvantages.

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More and more people are buying fashionable clothes these days. Does it have more negative or positive effects? Give reasons for your answers and include examples relevant to your experience.

It is frequently believed that the number of people purchasing fashionable clothes is increasing annually, In this essay, I'm going to compare advantages and disadvantages and include reasons for it.

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In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why this might be the case? Do you think this is positive or negative feedback?

Almost all people in many nation would prefer to own a home and consider renting condominiums as a secondary option. They see it as an investment asset and as a mean to exercise freedom to do whatever they love. I believe that this is a positive condition.

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the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driveless. The only people travelling inside these vehicle will be passengers. Do you think the advantage of driveless vehicles outweigh the disadvantage?

In the next generation , transportation will be driverless . The people will be the passengers inside these vehicles. These driverless vehicles have advantages and disadvantages. In this essay, I will discuss both sides and i will draw my personal conclusion.

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In some parts of the world, students are required to pass an entrance exam in order to be able to enter university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of passing an entrance exam?

The debate over the significance of requiring to pass an exam to get into college has sparked considerable controversy. In my opinion, despite the mere drawbacks this phenomenon may bring, its merits are substantial as this essay further elaborates on.

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehical will be passenger. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

Recently, technological advancement has developed into various fields around the world. It is believed that transportation vehicles will be driven without drivers in the near future. There are pro and cons to this huge change. I will discuss on the advantages and disadvantages of this shift.

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Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence in people’s behavior. What is your opinion?

Whereas some people agree that the increase in violent scenes that we watch on TV and Computer games are affecting our community, other groups believe that is not impacting our feelings and behaviors. This essay believes that, nowadays, violence has become more common in TV and video games. As a result, it generates a negative effect on society's feelings and behaviors. This is because, children have been getting access to violent video games since an early stage of their lives, therefore, they could interpret violent scenes as normal. On top of that, we have noticed an increase in violence through TV, mainly news TV shows, resulting in a negative impact on TV consumers's feelings.

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Advertising are becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is it a positive or negative development?

In the modern era, with the progression of technology, the notion of advertising is getting more and more familiar. In my point of view, this is a positive development for humankind.

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Compare new and old generation's interests you can mention. Advantages and disadvantages of their interest.

Old people and youth generations have many interests that perhaps have a scant number of differences together. In the modern world, many interests have been changed between these generations. The greatest benefit of these hobbies is sharing their ideas experiences and knowledge of different hobbies. On the other hand, we can observe that challenging of culture and lack of mutual understanding are the significant weak points.

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The best way to help under-achieving pupils is to have compulsory after school activities which they must attend. This way they will become more involved in schools and their grades will improve. To what extent do you agree?

School plays a crucial role for students. Some say that low-grade pupils should go to tuition classes after completing school periods and it will develop student's involvement towards school and academic scores also. Therefore, I strongly agree with this statement and I clarify some facts behind this decision.

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Write about following topic: Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Many people argue that in any education levels, from primary school to universities, school seems to allows a lot of times for students to learn theoritical/facts and not enough time on practical skills. I personally agree with this statement because I believe that practice plays as a big role in overall understanding. However, I also believe that theories are important to understand the foundation of topics.

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As a part of their education, many students work at a company for a short period of time without a salary. Are there more advantages than disadvantages to this?

Some students of university goes to company for part-time job without salary, this is also supported by the education system and universitites. This essay will discuss both benefits and the drawbacks of this concept.

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Test date 1/12/2018 Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in groups while others believe that it is better for them to study alone. Discuss both views and give your own opinion?

In the contemporary era, education has become a broad issue in the general public. A large number of population argues that it is more efficent for pupil to work in groups. However, it seems to me that learning lonely is more supervior. The following essay will shed light on this view.

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In many countries, overweight and unhealthy children pose a problem. Some people say it’s the government’s responsibility to solve this. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this day and age, obesity in kids has become a broad issue in the general public. Some people believe that it is the athorities accountability to resolve this. However it seems to me that, this is also the responsibility of parents the following essay will shed light on this view.

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