IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 210

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

While it is widely debatable that there are a number of people preferably choose to do same routine as to avoid changes, others argue that changes provide numerous positive outcome for us. Both point of views and opinion toward the aforementioned controversy will be further discussed in this essay.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, with the unprecedented development of the Internet, more and more children get access to networks using their smartphones, some of the kids even spend many hours on them every day. However, most of the time, it is not the children's problem that makes them so addictive to smartphones. Actually, most of the youngsters who often play with their smartphones have their parents too busy to spend time with them, they have no choice but to use smartphones for fun. In addition, most of the games and apps on the phone are always designed to make people get addicted to them, even adults may fall in love with them and spend lots of time on them. Undeniably, the development of kids spending too much time on smartphones is negative and should be aware by more people.

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Whether or not a person achieves their aim in life is mostly related to luck. Disagree or agree with this?

Success is believed to be depended on luck by many individuals, whereas others are on a contrary with that statement. The writer of this essay disagrees with luck brings success to human as earnest attempts coupled with a working attitude are the two truly main factors, which aid people reach to their goals.

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Will see homeless people in the society, few people support them with food and money and few are against. What is your opinion on this.

Nowadays, the number of stateless people is increasing in the community and some families are giving them food and money to help them, while others are against them. I completely disagree with the first view because most homeless if they get money and amenities from others don't go to look for jobs for them. In addition, the government should keep a role that allows homeless people not to take anything from people.

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In some countries, younger people are neglecting their right to vote. What problems does this cause and what are some of the possible solutions?

Youths in some countries are not bothering for their polling rights . Either because of neglect or unavailability for voting . This can lead to the formation of governments which do not emphasize on issues of the early adults . As a result, the new generation can leave their nation to their choice . This may be managed by educating them about politics as well as using modern technology for voting

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It has been noted that many people who had a big impact on the world gave themselves completely to their work and did not bother with the idea of “work-life balance”. To what extent should people try to have a good work-life balance? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays the number of working hours increases significantly. It is argued that many individuals who had a good achievement on the world they usually give themselves to their job and they do not care about the idea of work-life balance. This essay will explain why it is important to have a work-life balance.

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Too much emphasis is given for education of the young. More government money should be spent to free time activity of young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

At the present time, education and other activities play a crucial role in youngster’s life. Some folk believe that the government should spend their money on education. On the contrary, some people think that higher authorities have to spend money on extracurricular activities. The views will be given regarding this matter in upcoming paragraphs.

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Global warming is one of the biggest threats humans are facing in the 21st century and sea level is continuing to rise at alarming rates. What are the causes and some possible solutions to global warming?

Nowadays, one of the biggest people's concern is the global warming and growing of sea level at warning level. This is mostly because of the way how humanity gains electricity. Causes and possible methods to tackle this issue will be given in the following paragraphs.

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In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while other believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. discuss both views and give your opinion.

IIt is said that, in some nations, extremely high salaries are earned by a few people. Some believe this can be good for a country, whereas others think that salaries should be controlled by the the government and limit the amount people can earn.

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Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People are divided in their opinions regarding necessity of tertiary education in 21-st century in order to attain a successful career. While others believe that gaining employment straight after school is a key for favourable results in occupation,

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such Situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Many public assert that it is better to deal with any situation, while others believe instead of adapting to the situation, it would be a better idea to solve the problems and alleviate the situation. I firmly believe that we should work for improvements and not simply give up in diverse situations, whether we can handle it or not.

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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to cooperate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In this essay I explain my views on why children should be encouraged to be competive and taught to be cooperative. My opinion is that all kids should have the skillset to compete and to be a team player. Due to internet revolution, the world is becoming one global workforce, therefore, it is paramount that children are equipped to challenge and work together with their global peers.

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Nowadays more people are living by themselves. What are the reasons for this? Will this have a negative or a positive impact on the society?

These days,more and more people are making this decision to live alone.In other words,the tendency of living lonely has risen dramatically in recent years.It is obvious that living outside of the family's house includes alot of various reasons and It can also affect on the society well or badly.In this essay,I will look at some reasons of this decision and I will express some positive and negative aspects of this action.

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Some people think that mobile phones should be banned in public places like libraries, shop and on public transport, others argue that people should be free to use their mobiles wherever they like. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Whilst, a number of people believe that mobile gadgets should not be allowed to use in public places such as libraries, stores and on public transport, others and i say that individuals should be free to exploitate their phones everywhere. This essay will look at both notions.

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In some cities public parks and open spaces are being changed into gardens where local residents can grow their own fruit and vegatables. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Local inhabitants who live in some urban areas are changing public parks and open spaces into gardens to grow their food and vegetables. Although there are cons, I believe that there are more pros.

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Nowadays online shopping has become more popular than in-store shopping. Is it a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, online shopping becomes more popular because internet becomes available for everyone, making it possible to purchase any necessary thing

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In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing What do you think are the main causes of crime How can we deal with those causes

Recently, in many countries, people suffer about the subject of crime. Several researchers prouve that the amount of crime is increasing. These researchers explain that it exist numerous reasons for this phenomenon.

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An increasing number of people are choosing to have cosmetic surgery in order to improve their appearance. Why are more people choosing to have operation to change the way they look? Do you think this a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, more and more people want to have cosmetic surgery to make them more beautiful or handsome. I believe that because of the rejection and exclusion fear they want make these changes in their look and also I argue that this is a negative development in people's lives.

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Some people believe holding sports events are too expensive, such as olympic games,and the world cup. But others think in opponent way. Discuss both opinion, and give your own view.

World-calss sport events such as Olympics are a huge phenomenon. Every four year, a country will be chosen to hold the events. Holding the games can greatly infuence the coutries economy. While some people believe that it has negative effects, other think that countries benfit from such events and it is a chance for them to boost thier economy. I strongly agree with the second idea and an indiaction for it can be the number of job opportunities which are created for the people during Olympic in the holder countries and the growth in the tourisim indutry.

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‘It is always wrong to keep animals in captivity, for instance in zoos’. How far do you share this view?

So controversial is the statement that zoos are regarded as places that limit the lives of animals . I disagree with this view to some extent, and I will explain why in this essay.

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