IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 209

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Do the dangers derived from the use of chemicals in food production and preservation outweigh the advantages?

Nowadays, chemical elements are an integral part of our foods. It is argued by some that the utilized chemicals in food production and preservation may cripple. In this essay, I will consider difficulties in daily life or fatal consequences as one of the main drawbacks and longer life span of foods as one of the primary benefits.

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Food can be produced much more cheaply today because of improved fertilizers and better machinery. However, some of the methods used to do this may be dangerous to human health and may have negative effects on local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Fruits and vegies are being sold cheap these days, for the reason that many chemicals and good machinery are used. Even so these techniques has many dangerous outcomes to peoples health and local communities. I totally agree, these techniques to produce food are very harmful to our health.

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In many countries people are now living longer than over before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benifits if society has more elderly people.

There is a tendency for elderly people to live longer than they were in the past. The essay will first demonstrate that the earlier someone learns an additional language the more likely they are to master it and that it brings added cognitive benefits, followed by an analysis of how the primary disadvantage, namely confusion with their native tongue, is not valid.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

It is believed that youngsters should learn a second language at elementary school. This opinion has both advantages and disadvantages, the benefits are more significant.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: As the internet becomes more popular, newspapers are becoming a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 250 words.

The advancement of technology has changed the way people reading wide information, leaving the newspapers and moving to online instead. I firmly believe that online articles and magazines become more effective and cheaper than the paper media. This essay will elucidate about the reasons and agreements of which newspapers have been changed to online.

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In many cities the use of video cameras in public places is being increased in order to reduce crime, but some people believe that these measures restrict our individual freedom. Do the advantages of video surveillance outweigh the disadvantages?

There is no doubt that the number of video cameras in public places has increased in recent years. This essay will explain drawbacks and benefits of the phenomenon and will show why I support the modern practice.

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Some university students are in favor of studying different subjects rather than focusing on one main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

There is a great deal of debate concerning the courses learned in higher education. Although some people are keen to studying more than one language, In my opinion it is beneficial to study a variety of subjects.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

People have varying opinions about whether music can be used to make individuals from different cultures or ages unite. I completely agree that music can unify people.

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Should education and healthcare be free of charge and funded by the government, or should it be the responsibility of the people to pay for these services?

It is development country’s growth largely depends on how educated and healthy its citizens are . The burgeoning population and the lack of funds often make harder for the authority to bear the expenses of their needs , especially in education, housing and treatment. I believe that an effective solution would be to divide the expenditures between the government and the individuals.

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Some people think it’s better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it’s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Friends are the integral part of our life. Many individuals believe that having friends with similar thinking is the wisest choice, whereas others are fine to have pals who have different views than you. Both sides will be discussed in this essay, before giving any conclusion. However, I am in solidarity with the latter view.

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Some people believe that children of all ages should have extra responsibilities (for example, helping at home or at work). Others believe that, outside of school, children should be free to enjoy their lives. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Childrens are so present in our society and for this reason some part of the population consider needed that kids in differents ages must have extra activities in addition of school, others think that, in their free time children just need to enjoy their lives, from my perspective, kids only have to live their lives. The childhood is a time in human development with a great relevance, everything that happen in this period might reflect in an adult life of the citizen, and for this reason is very necessary that kids have a healthy childhood as way to have a satisfactory development, in concerning to this, after school kids needs to have time to explore activities that will improve their intellectual growth, such as, playing with others kids, because play is a efficient way to improve their communications skills and ways to relate to the differents kinds of personalities, moreover, if children not have any extra responsibilities, they will have enough time to study and do the homework...

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behivour to children?

Positive and negative feedbacks have to be implemented in young people in order to show them the importance of having appropriate behaviours and the consequences of having those that are inappropiate. Then, I staunchly believe that children and youngsters should be rewarded and punished according their performances, respectively. In this essay, I will explain my reasons in detail and how the proffesors and parents should manage the punishments.

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It is common nowadays for each member of the family to have their own peace of modern technology. Some people think this will lead to a breakdown in family relationship and communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that these days it's more than likely for all the family including kids to own their personal technological device, However, some people believe that this will result in a lack of communication. In this essay. I'm going to discuss this situation and give my opinion on it.

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Some people think that the development of technology helps to reduce crime, while other people think it encourages crime. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In this era, technology has grown tremendously, and people some of them think, it can protect them from the criminals, while others argue that advanced technology development has led to create a new issues among the public. This essay will discuss about both the views and from my perspective, it can protect people from jeopardy.

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Some people say job satisfaction is more important than job security. Othersthink people cannot always enjoy their jobs, so having a permanent job is more important.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

According to some people, high salary is much important than job satisfaction. Although it is undoubtedly the significance of high salary, I firmly believe that choosing only jobs with a higher salary would be a mistake. Job satisfaction is on of the goals that we should achieve in life.

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Some people believe that there are various reasons that can motivate a person to keep working for the same company whereas others say that money is the main reason which gives motivation. Do you agree or disagree?

In my opinion, to agree or disagree with the allegation that Some people consider that there are various effects that can motivate a person to keep working for the same company whereas others say that money is the main reason which gives motivation. is an important issue to discuss. First, I will present some arguments supporting this explanation, after which,

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Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal informations such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. some people say that this information may be relevant and useful, others disagree. discuss both views and include your opinion.

It is debatable whether candidants should disclose personal information about themselves . In my opinion , I believe that it depends on the specific information that their required to say . in this essay , I will further elaborate my view in order to reach to a logical conclusion .

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In the 20th century, contact between many different parts of the world developed rapidly through telecommunication and air travel. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Although the improvement were there in the 20th century internationally due to the introduction of variety aeroplanes as well as new and fast processor cellphones, on the other hand, this can cause death of people especially due to the disappearing and emergency landing of the flights.Therefore, I do believe that benefits of this may outnumbered the drawbacks.

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Many people say that globalisation and the growing number of multinational companies have a negative effect on the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.

Certain individuals believe that global companies do more harm to the nature of the host countries. I completely disagree with this opinion and there are many potential upsides of establishing multinational companies which will be discussed further in this essay.

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some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification.

There is a great deal of debate on whether it is beneficial to study non-academic subjects along with major courses. Although some people believe it is essential to focus merely on their major qualifications, I support the view of studying other subjects.

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