IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 229

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Todays schools should teach their students how to survive financially in the world today. to what extent do you agree disaree with this statement?

One of the wildly discussed issues nowadays is in the present time schools should educate their pupils how to pull through financial sense across the globe these days.

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In many countries, the government spends a large amount of money on the arts. Some people agree with this. However, others think the government should spend more on healthcare and education. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

In some nations, investment has become a momentous decision between arts or healthcare and education. This essay will explain both perspectives and why I believe that allocating the government's budget on healthcare and education brings up more benefits especially for society.

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Some people get into debt by buying things they do not need and can’t afford. What are the reasons for this behavior? What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?”

In our century it is too easy and available to borrowing money from each banks and staying giant debtor for your own country. And it is one of the main causes why around 85% of residents get into debt and buying unusual items or doing nonsensical actions with this borrowed money.

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The movement of people from the countryside into the cities is happening in many parts of the world, resulting in the problems, especially in cities. What are the causes of this movement, and how can it be reversed

In many regions of the world, migration from rural areas to urban is culminating in some challenges, particularly in developed residential areas. The reasons of this shift are closely tied to a lack of job opportunities and insufficient amenities. However, there are particular measures to tackle this issue.

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In today's world, people spend a lot of money on appearance because they want to look younger. Why is this happening? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

It is true that appearance is spent amount of money by people who would like to have youthful look in the modern era, In my opinion, there are two reasons behind this phenomenon, and I believe that this have a negative effect on their health.

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In their advertising businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negetive development?

In recent decades, the advertising industry have the access to outshine their items via technology. Although, through outstanding packaging of a product, the owners play with the psychology of consumers by noticing the behaviour customer. In my perspectives, it is impacting in a negetive way, as the product turn out to be really different in reality. In further paragraphs I am going to elaborate on my views with relevant examples to support them.

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Nowadays people use bicycles less as a form of transport. Why is this the case? What can we do to encourage people to use bicycles more?

It is widely noticeable that people use bicycles as modes of transportation these days as a consequences of possible factors such as weather and conveniences, others argue that this concerns can be easily resolved with the aids from both the government and the locals either with financial support or transport services will be discussed further in this essay.

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Many criminals reoffened after they have been punished. Why do some people contribute to commit crimes after they have been punished, and What measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

Punishments are proven to be the resolution and the realisation for criminals. However, there are some criminals who still commit offence even after getting punished. There are can be numerous reasons for this behaviour like developing fearless and careless kind of a attitude which can be discussed in upcoming paragraphs with some methods to resolve this issue.

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Scientists agree that many people eat too much junk food and it is damaging their health. Some people think that this problem can be solved by educating people, while others believe that education will not work. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

This essay is going to illustrate whether education is a useful method to change peolple mindset on the topic of eating junk food. Personally, I think education only have a small impact to tackle this problem due to the formed habit.

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Some people think that getting a degree from university is the best way to guarantee a good job, others believe that it would be byeee to go straight into work and get experience instead. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Developing relevant expertise is essential to be sucessful in any profession. A large number opf people believe that obtaining a degree is important while others think that getting experience play vitral role in this .Although , a lot people say that getting experience is more important,but I to me degree comes before experience and in the following paragraphs i will discuss both perspectives and will explain how it is important.

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Some people say that the best way to teach children to behave well is to punish them. Others argue that rewarding and praising children is a better way to teach them the difference betweeen right and wrong. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There exists little dispute over the ways to improving youngsters actions. While some people hold the view that punishment makes them to adopt more appropriate manners, many, myself imcluded, tend to adopt a more robust in favour of praising is more beneficial for them to distinguish good from evil.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The small proportion of children surfing on their mobile phones for a long period of time. Presumably, this happen because of the digitalization. Furthermore, I believe that this kind of practice is more negative as is cause mental health issues despite the fact that children can learn new languages which is positive development.

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Some people believe that it is better for children to grow up in the countryside, while others argue that living in cities is more beneficial. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Upbringing of a child is very sensitive issue now a days. Parents should take into account a lot of factors while choosing the place for upbringing of a child. Although ,many people argue that village is suitable place for that but I absolutely disagree with this. .In the following paragraphs I will discuss the point of view of both types of people and will try to describe how it is eventually important to prefer cities over countryside.

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More children in developed countries are becoming overweight. This is a serious problem for wealthy countries. Discuss some causes and effects of this problem. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

For last decades, obesity in kids have been increased Particularly in affluent countries. There are widely concern about this challenging. I believe we must first address it is root causes. in this essay will explore the causes of obesity among of the childeren and examine its effects on them.

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Labour-saving devices such as dishwashers and communication tools such as computers are supposed to make our lives easier. However, some people argue that these devices only make them more difficult. Does modern technology reduce or increase stress? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the contemporary world of globalization, where technology is taking over repetitive work, some people argue that the technology makes their lives more difficult, while others are against this notion. This essay will discuss why technology makes lives much easier than it used to be without them.

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Deforestation is considered one of the major environmental problems. What are the causes and effects of deforestation? What solutions can be put in place to address this issue ?

Nowdays deforestation is considered as a one of the main ecologically issues.This essay will discuss how infrastructure and agriculture are the main cause of this problem,and the most viable solutions are regenaration and substitution the material with

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‘It is important for foreigners to know something about the history and culture of the country they live in.’ Discuss. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the contemporary world of globalization, people are migrating to new destinations for better lifestyle but do they need to learn about the heritage of a country? This essay will discuss why it is important for such people to know about the country where they live.

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In many countries, paying for things using mobile phone (cellphone) apps is becoming increasingly common. Does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and includes relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is irrefutable, that usage of Technology has changed the lifes of human beings. It is quite often in these days that people, in different countries are using their mobile phones for paying bills or other things instead of using money or cards. It has several benefits and will be discussed further in this essay.

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Some people think that online education is better than traditional classroom-based learning. Do you agree or disagree?

It is considered by some that online education effects students more than traditional classroom-based learning .In my opinion, online education can bring benefits to students ,but sometimes they still need to have face-to-face education.

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Some people think children have the freedom to make mistakes, while other people believe that adults should prevent children from making mistakes. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

One of the most controversial issues today relates to children's education. While some people trend towards the viewpoint that children make some mistakes is acceptable, others support the opinion that parent should take good care of children from making mistakes. In this essay, I am going to examine both points of view and provide my own opinion.

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