IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 228

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Mmany people are now opting to provide technology companies with their personal data in exchange for access to software. do the advantages of this outweight the disadvantages.

Relationship with family, friends, and colleagues play a crucial role in achieving individual happiness, often more so than career and fortune. I firmly agree with this statement as strong interpersonal connections provide emotional support, foster a sense of belonging, and contribute to an overall fulfilling life.

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In many areas of work, robots are being given more roles. Is this a positive or negative trend?

It is increasingly common that robots are penetrate significantly in human life both formal and informal environments. I believe that the role of robots has positive and negative impacts on human activities; it will help homeowners to do several tasks. On the other hand, industries that are addicted to robots will contribute to decreasing number of employment jobs.

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Many people are afraid to leave their homes because of their fear of crime. Some people believe that more actions should be taken to prevent crime, but others feel that little can be done. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The number of crimes has increased significantly in the last century to the point that citizens are concerned about the level of safety outside their home.Some people believe that governments should take action to prevent or even minimise this phenomenon.While others believe that there is not much effective solution , unfortunately.I believe that the government can solve this phenomenon by increasing the awareness of committing such unpleasant actions.

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Some people believe that children who commit crimes should be punished. Others think the parents should be punished instead.

On of the widely discussed issues nowadays is children's crime. There are different opinions, about punishments who makes the crime. However there is no absolute agreements on whether parents should be punished their children's crime. In this essay i will discuss both of them and give own opinion.

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Some people think that mobile phones should be banned in public places like libraries, shop and on public transport, others argue that people should be free to use their mobiles wherever they like.

To use the of mobiles phones in public places is nowadays on of the widely discussed issues. Now people are beginning to realize that many adults, especially teenagers to spend an extended time in the internet using their phone, when they are in the public places. In this essay, i will discuss some reasons why we need to banned to use mobile phone in public places.

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Most high-level positions in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50persent female. Companies should be required to allocate a certain percentage of these positions to women. To what extend do you agree?

Nowadays, many companies allocated higher positions for men only, despite the fact that workforce in many modern countries is more than 50 persent female. Therefore, companies should distribute a fare amount of these kind of positions to women and I eagerly agree with this statement.

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One way to solve problem of congestion in cities is to build sky trains which run overhead rather than on or under the ground. What are the advantages and disadvantages of using this solution to solve congestion?

In order to adress the busy traffic issue, instead of funding overground or underground trains, investing in airborne trains is more logical solution. While sky trains both swift and are able to carry many passenger at ones, their cost is too high and its engineering requires advanced techniques.

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In recent years, the structure of a family and the role of its members are gradually band changing. What kinds of changes can occur? Do you think these changes are positive and negative?

In recent times, the structure of a family and the role of the members in a family are changing. The changes are families are becoming smaller, and the elderly of families are no longer taking care of children. I personally believe that these changes are negative because it reduces the bond among the members and in the time of need there is no one to help them.

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It will be better for both society and individuals is driverless cars - cars can drive themselves- become more widely used. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The given topic is highly controversial. However, if a glance is taken at the pros and cons of this aspect, it is irrefutable to say that there are a lot advantages if cars can drive themselves without humans. So, I perceive that it should be considered a positive development for both society and masses and hereby give the following arguments to support myself.

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Do you think people should start their work early age for so that they can lead a happy life after retirement?

Because of longer life span people need to work till older age. Thousands of individuals considere that they should hared work from early age as a solution. I deeply agree with this statement that it is not only beneficial fore people but also for the society. I will discuss details in the following paragraphs.

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"These days people succeed in their profession because they are good communicators and not just experts in a particular feild". Discuss the reasons and why is the case. Give reasons to your answers and include ny relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Many people believe that individuals who are success in a particular field is due to their good communication skills and not just expertise. In this essay, I would like to discuss reasons for this perspective.

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In many countries paying for things using mobile phone (cellphone) apps is becoming increasingly common . does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages.

Purchasing goods via mobile applications is getting more widespread among people in a lot of societies. The advantages of this fact outweighs the drawbacks and we will discuss three compelling of them in this essay.

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Some people think that the education system should only focus on preparing students for employment, while others believe it has other important functions. Discuss both sides and then give your own opinion.

Some people believe that the education system should only prioritize preparing students to secure jobs while others believe that it should have other important responsibilities. I personally believe that while preparing students for the job market helps to grow necessary skills in them, the primary goal of an education system should prepare students to become good human beings.

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Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations. Discuss both these point of views and give your opinion.

Nowadays people are so occupied such they spend their whole life working at one place even without realising. Hence, some pupils argue that it is important to explore different work environemnts than spending many years of your life at single organization. I will dicuss the positive aspects of working at a workplace and at different workplaces ina lifespan, in upcoming paragraphs and later will come up with my opinion on this statement.

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is in some countries university students live at home with their family while they study, although in other countries students attend university in another city. It is undeniable that students live at home with their family while they study in university has become an essential part of our life. However, there is no absolute agreeement as some people find students attend university in another city beneficial, while others consider everuthing associated with students attend university in another city negatively. Surely, there are both pros and cons to living away from home during university, bit i believe advantages outweigh disadvantages.

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A lot of places in the word rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern word. Do you think that benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?

In many parts of the world tourism significantly depends as the main revenue, although, if not controlled appropriately, it can lead to numerous of problems. Tourism can be benefitial to local business, but on the other hand negatively affect countries values. This essay will prove that the advantages are grater than the disatvantages.

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Healthcare should not be provided for free regardless of a person's income. The health of a person is in their own hands and they should, therefore, be held accountable for that. Do you agree with this opinion?

The notion of free healthcare should be restricted and people are responsible for their own healthcare, has sparked cosiderable debateamong public. I disagree with above argument and In my opinion, healthcare should be free and every person should have the access to it, and in this essay, I will explain my perspective.

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some people dislike changes in tpheir society and in their own lives, and want things to stay the same. Why do some people want things to stay the same? Why should change be regarded as something positive?

There is no denying the fact that some people have fear to change in their society and own life and want things to stay the same. This essay will discuss the reasons beyound this phenomenon and why often consider change as positive impact.

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Some people believe that it is wrong to keep animals in zoo. While others think that zoos are both entertaining and ecologically important. Discuss both views

There are split opinions regarding the zoo in which animals are kept. Some believe that it have benifits to animals as these zoo are ecologically important, whereas, another group of thinkers support that it is wrong for the animals as they do not have freedom. However both have their own pros and cons. Therefore, before commenting on my decision both opinions would be discussed.

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The age of information technology has taken a lot of people by surprise. While, it has become a way of life for some, others know very little about it. Eventually we will have a polarized society and this will lead to serious social problems. Form an opinion based on the info above and write a well-reasoned essay.

Nowadays, most teenagers are struggling to enjoy their life due to all the expensive things. Thus, some peoples suggest they take a part-time job after-school to fulfil their needs, and importantly, to build an understanding of the work environment, tough character and discipline habits. However, some other people prefer to enjoy a short teenage time to do fun activities or just relax their minds while taking a rest right after school. In fact , these both views are true for some relevant families, that depend on their economic condition. Therefore, I agree with both views. However, in fact teenagers with take jobs will have better characters than others. This essay elaborated on my opinions

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