IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 231

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

People are arguing whether history or Science and Technology is the most important subjects in school. In my opinion, every curriculum is important for us to know about, but history is the fundation among them.

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Many feel that the common educational system of teachers and students in a classroom will be replaced by the year 2050

Development in educational system occurs all the time. With a rapid rise in technology also brings about the changes in nearly every level of schooling system. In this essay, I will argue on a topic of why teachers and students being in classroom should not be replaced by the year 2050.

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The pictures illustrate the way how plastic bottles are being recycled. It is a plastic circle that never ends up.

The pictures illustrate the way how plastic bottles are being recycled. It is a plastic circle that never ends up. These are nine steps, shown on the diagram, from collecting bottles to producing daily routine products, provide convenient opportunities for humanity.

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The topic of this: Currently, most students are studying only mathematics and the world language, English. What do you think its advantages more than its disadvantages?

Nowadays, people argue that most students are studying only mathematics and the foreign language is English. This essay will discuss why I think its merits outweigh the demerits.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for qualifications. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People tend to take part in other classes rather than just learn their main subjects. While others think that they are wasting their time on campus. I completely disagree with the later opinion and support young people learn about other subjects.

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Female unemployment rates in the four countries of the UK.

The given graph compares England,Wales,Scotland and Northern Ireland in terms of how many females were unemployed from 2013 to 2014.

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In some countries, more and more parents have begun to teach their children at home rather than send them to school. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

In many countries, the number of parents that homeschooling their children have increased. While this will help the parents to monitor their offspring intensively, hence the kids will lose the opportunity to learn about social ability by befriending the same age group. Thus, this essay will discuss whether the benefits of this outweigh the drawbacks.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are reasons for this? How can people research this?

It is an undeniable fact that exploring the history of the one's own premises they live in increases day by day in a few regions. Nowadays, this trend of discovering is growing with the time. This essay intends to discuss reasons with satisfactory illustrations and soultion to discover properly before coming to a final conclusion.

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Nowadays, people travel to other countries for a holidays. Why people do so? is this a positive or a negative development for the countries they travel to?

These days,more and more people are having a trip in other nations.In other words,going to travel in holidays has risen dramatically in other countries.In this essay,I will address some reasons for going travel on holidays and also I will explain some positive and negative aspects of this decision.

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The best way / the only way to reduce poverty in developing countries is by giving up to six years of free education, so that they can at least read, write and use numbers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a controversial perspective heating up a debate over the fact that donating six years of free education is not the most optimal solution to decrease poverty in developing nations. In my own opinion, I would not consider myself an advocate of this idea.

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Some people believe that entertainment such as film star pop musicians or sports star are paid to much money Do you agree or disagree? Which other type of jobs should be highly paid.?

For many, popular musicians, actors or sportsmen are overpaid. I disagree with this view on the grounds that these people give up on many freedom in order to be famous. I would argue that experts working in education and veterinary medicine must earn more.

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Mixed—cam 16 In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

In several parts of the world, the great number of individuals are being highly passionate about the record of the accommodations where they reside. In this essay, we will unveil the causes of this trend, and the ways which people may access to this information.

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Many countries today are experiencing high levels of migration from rural areas to cities. What are the causes of this trend, and what effects does it have on the existing city dwellers?

Nowadays, in many parts of the world the population of cities is increasing in the result of leaving the villages toward them. This trend has main causes, and also the considerable damaging effects on urbanization.

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Discuss the importance of art education in schools. How does exposure to art impact students' creativity and overall development?

Art in a broader context – is an integral part of our life and everyone finds the beaty of art everywhere. That is why it is highly necessary to explain to your generation how to understand art and why it is so important, especially for the comprehensive development and just for imagination. Let us deeply understand the whole influence of art education for children.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

Some people tell children that they can do everything if they try hard enough. In this message, there are both advantages and disadvantages.

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Most high-level positions in comapanies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50 percent female. Companies should be required to allocate a certain percentage of these positions to women. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Despite there are 50 percent women in the whole workforce, most higher positions in organizations are hold by males. Some argue that organizations should allocate a certain percentage of higher positions for women. I completely disagree with this viewpoint, because higher positions require high-level skills and expertise, and if it is decided by gender, it would not be appropriate to the position.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Disscuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Advertising is really effective to lead people to buy their things, otherwise there is another opinion that it is so common that it is no longer effective.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

These days, many advertisements focus on emphasising that the products are new. Even though It is helpful to catch people's attention, I believe it can make the opposite respond. In this essay, I will discuss why many companies focus on emphasising “new” and show my opinion.

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Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that it is helping the poor by giving them money but some people disagree. In my opinion, it depends on what type of the problem is. Money is helpful but it is a short-term solution, however, in the long run, it is not ideal. If a problem needs to be solved, the source of the problem needs to be solved.

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Some people think that it is best to accept bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss botр these views and give your own opinion а

Some individuals assume that it is right to just accept an inferior situation, like an uncomfortable job or getting paid less, while others believe that you should take actions to improve your current state. Even though taking in a bad scenario could save you some energy, you will miss a ton of opportunities by doing nothing.

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