IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 231

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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These days, too many people maintain their health by relyin doctors and medicine, rather than by following a healthy life. To what extent do you agree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.

In order to maintain their health, people usually rely on doctor treatments and medicines nowadays instead of maintaining a healthy lifestyle. I totally agree with this statement because there are misconception where healthy lifestyle can be achieved by consuming medicine regularly but they still maintain unhealthy lifestyle due to enjoying life misconception.

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In many cities, young people prefer shopping as a form of leisure activity. Why do you think this happens? Is it a positive or negative development.

In the majority of big towns, teenagers consider buying something the best action to do in free time, because for youngers is the best choice to spend time with friends quietly and without think much what they have to do. Moreover, the setting, when the majority of shops are located, is so suggestive and especially in the centre of the city , the town heart. In my opinion is a good activity because youngers can discover part of the city, walking in the shop streets, and inderectly can observe the history of towns. For example I have been in Dublin for 15 days in a study holiday and after doing a lot of activities, my group and I had some free time so we went to the main street to go shopping, while we moved from one clothes shop and another ,in the sinner of small road near the shop, I heard a strange melody and ,moving in music direction, I found a fantastic group of street musicians with really traditional clothes who sang the best music I have never heard, after they explained so...

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Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home ,leisure and work activities. To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweight the disadvantages?

Over the years, we have experienced a massive developement in the department of information technology. This essay exermines arguments surrounding claims these advances are more beneficial than their disadvantages. As evidenced by social media platforms and internet news platforms

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Some people believe that success in sports depends on physical ability while others believe that there are more important factors involved in success in sports. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

It is argued by some people that one of the most momentous reason for achieving success in sports is physical situations.On the other hand,some people believe that there are various significant aspects to gain succeed in compititions.This essay will discuss both sides of the argument and I will also present my own idea.

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Everyone should stay in school until the age of eighteen , considering the significance of primary & secondary level education in a learner's life. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

There is an opinion regarding the significance of the level of education that believes in the importance of staying in school until the age of eighteen. In this essay, I elaborate why I agree with this statement by arguing that the benefits of a longer education reside on a better job perspective and a more critical mindset.

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Some people say that physical education classes are an important part of a child's education. Others believe that it is more important to focus on academics during school time. Discuss both views, and give your opinion.

Some people would argue that having regular sport's sessions is beneficial for students, as opposed to some who believe that they should merely focus on their theorical lessons. Although, having more time and energy for studying might lead to more academic-acheivements, however, I believe that physical and mental wellness is the primary priority and outweigh the success in exams.

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Many people aim to achieve a balance between work and other parts of lives, but few people achieve it. What are the causes of the problem? How to overcome it?

There are many people who wants work-life balance but a few number of people succeed in this . The main cause of this problem is that overloaded stress at work and there is a viable solution to this cause is that to strictly allocate time to family and work.

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Many people claim that ordering food is a better option than preparing it themselves. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Some people want to order food rather than doing it by hand, and they think it is a better option.I mostly disagree with this statement and believe it is not the healthy way of nourishing, but also sometimes it has its own upsides.

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Some people think that homework is necessary for students, while others believe it puts too much pressure on them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many people reckon that homework is necessary for students, but there are also objections that in others believe homework is considered as an extra pressure on students' shoulders. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument before presenting my opinion.

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It is thought that advertising has a strong influence on consumer behavior. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, advertisements are ubiquitous. Indeed, many of them encourage people to purchase their products, and also it is argued that ads can affect the behavior of consumers. I completely agree with this opinion, and I believe that it is due to advertisements’ strategy of pulling in the audience.

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Many people argue that learning foreign languages should be compulsory in schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, many schools are teaching foreign languages as an essential subject. Plus, some people claim that this tendency should be required in all schools. However, I do not agree with this statement because, while learning other non-essential languages at school, students might have burnt and stressed sometimes. Nevertheless, we should consider that multilingualism can give great opportunities while searching for a job.

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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their tranining. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss bıth views and give your opinion.

Some people argued that professionals should stay and work their home country while others believe that if they want to work foreign country they should be. I strongly believe second statement and this essay I will try to explain why.

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In some countries the average wight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes if these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

In this fast paced society as everyone is running behind money which is resulting in poor health conditions. This trend seems to be more prominent in developed nations as money has taken the first place in every indivdiuals's life. In the impending paragraphs, we will dive into the reasons behind this problem and some measures which can be possibly taken to reduce it.

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Space research costs billions of dollars. Some people believe that the money should be invested on more practical projects here on Earth. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

The investments on exploring the space are constantly increasing, however it seems more reasonable to use the same amount of money for projects on planet Earth. In this essay, I explain why I agree on this statement by exploring two main argumentations: the expedictions in the space are not for the benefit of the world population but the the ecological impact concern everyone.

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Walking is known to be beneficial for health and yet fewer and fewer people are walking these days. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to tackle this problem?

school has a limited money to spend either on teachers or computers. Therefore, it is considered by some that having good teacher is necessary for schools, while there are others who believe that authorities should installed computers in schools. Despite this, I opine that teachers are helpful for the students if school spend money on conducting seminars related to teaching .

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Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that children should be taught by their parents about being good citizens of the country, while others think that the ideal place to educate these children is educational institutions. This essay will discuss both views and state my opinion.

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Many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside. Others believe that there are health benefits of living in cities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The large number of population consider living in the outskirts very healthy although there are some who prefer the city lifestyle. Despite the accessibility of healthcare facilities in towns, I believe the rural life is much better as there are plenty of healthy foods.

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Some people believe that participating in competitive sports can be beneficial for children, while others think it may have negative effects. What are the advantages and disadvantages of children participating in competitive sports?

Although competitive sports are thought by some to be a useful experience for children, other people consider that it can be detrimental. Children can learn to value competition and gain self-confidence from taking part in sports but there are also drawbacks to be taken into account.

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Nowdays people make new friends throught social network and internet chat groups. some people think this is good. Others think that face to face interaction is essential. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowdays, interaction varied in multiple ways which makes the individual choose the best way. The argument between in person communication and online interaction is oversophisticated. While this essay will propose the different between social network chatting and in person interaction, for several reasons in person communication surpasses social media interaction.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In contemporary times, is true that some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. I think there are several reason for in this case and its effect depends on how children spend time on their smartphones. This essay I will try to explain both sides.

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