IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 230

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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It is better for college students to live in schools than live at home with their parents. Do you agree or disagree

There is an ongoing discusstion regarding whether college students should live on campus or stay at parent's house. While living with their family members has plenty of advantages, I strongly agree with the opposite opinion owing to the opportunity for independence and an environmental conducive to study

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Some people think that cars should be banned from large cities.

It is argued whether most cities should adopt the system of banning private cars or not.I support the first point of view and sure that it would have had a more positive effect.

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some people think that competition at work, at school and daily life is good thing. othersbelieve that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

no one can deny that some people think that competition is a good thing. While others believe that we should try to cooperate. it is important to admit that both views have their own benefits. In this essay, I will discuss the possible reasons that support each view, and what benefits they bring to society. In my opinion both views is a good thing and I would like to explain why I support both.

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Many museums charged for the admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museum outweigh the disadvantages?

Undoubtedly, museums are necessary to keep safe in the today's world. Multifarious museums have a particular entry fees but some of them do not charge any admission fees. In this essay, I will discuss that merits of entry cost to museums outweigh the demerits in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Many people feel that urban environments are more unhealty than they have ever been. What do you think are the main causes of this problem? What measures can be effective tackling this problem?

Nowadays, more people feel that city areas show more unhealthy atmosphere than it was. From my perspective, it is caused by higher levels of pollution produced from vehicles also raising of waste as a result of increasing the population density. To tackle these problems, people should choose to use frequently public transportation and try to limite the production of waste or trash.

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In the past, people usually lived in the same places for their life, but currently people change their places and live in different places during their life. What is the reason of this? Is it positive or negative development?

In the past, people tend to lived in the same place for their life, while nowadays people actually prefer to change their home and live in other places during their life. This essay will discuss the cause of this statement, and I think it has a positive development.

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These days many kids spend a lot of their time playing computer games instead of doing sports. What is the cause of this? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, children are paying more attention on video games than pyhysical activities. There are several roots contributing to this matters. I believe that this trend has negative developments on younger generations.

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Comuters are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a posetive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negeative consequences.

Without adoubt, computers, in recent decades, have played a crucial role in our lives. However, while some individuals believe that this is a beneficial change, I agree with those who argue that using computers has a determental outcomes because it effects on physical heath and also buying it needs money.

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Marriages are bigger and more expansive nowadays than in the past. Do the advantages of this overweigh the disadvantages?

One action that can help human continue their generation is marriage. In this contemporary era, the cost of wedding parties become more compared to the past. Although, some consider this action as a good point , I advocate that this may cause some problems to brides and grooms. This essay will explain about pros and cons and ends with a logical conclusion.

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Some people think sports games are important for society, while others believe they should be taken as leisure activities. Discuss both views and give your opinion

There is an inconclusive debate about whether sports games an important social activity or it is just individual free time activities.Both of these views will be discussed in detail before the conclusion is reached.

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In many countries, teenagers are encouraged to do part-time jobs. What’s the situation like in your country? What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of doing part-time jobs?

The majority of parents believe teenage age is the best phase for the teenagers to learn how to achieve something they want by working and struggling on their own. This phase is important to build their mindset as the basic principle to achieve something. That is why in many countries, teenagers are encouraged to do part-time jobs or forced by their parents.

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Some people think that social media websites are a great way to create networks whereas others think that personal meetings are the best means to have a social network. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Increasing popularity of social media has sparked a debate about whether it is the best way to meet others or face-to-face meetings are still more effective than social media platforms. This essay will examine both edges of the discussion and present my stance on it.

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The government is responsible for protecting a nation’s cultural identity. Some people think it is the government’s duty to ensure that new buildings are built in a traditional style. To what extent do you agree?

The government is accountable for protecting a country’s cultural identity, this statement develops people’s belief that new buildings should be constructed in traditional styles. In this essay I will explain why I tend to disagree.

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Some people believe that we cannot learn anything from the past for our life today, while others believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand human's life. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

It is a longstanding subject of debate weather one should learn from history, or it is no longer relevant in contemporary society. This essay will discuss both the perspectives in detail and provides a comprehensive opinion.

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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourist who visit such places?

Nowadays, people do not have a lot of barriers in travelling and can visit almost any place in the world. Because of it, people are starting to choose spots where conditions are tough, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. Surely, there are some pluses and minuses of these trips which will be discussed in this essay.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self- employed?

Currently, most human beings prefer to become entrepreneurs, compared to working for a factory or other companies. There are some causes likewise flexible working and they would be spending more time with their family than jobs on the office. While, some drawbacks are businesses not successful because of lack of experience.

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In some countries, more and more people are hiring personal fitness trainers, rather than playing sports or doing exercise classes What is the reason for this Is this a positive or negative development

A particularly interesting scene can be found in most developed cities which is more and more fitness centers are opened for people with substantial economic income. They promote living a healthy lifestyle through the use of gyms. People are encouraged to purchase personal fitness trainer service inside and they claim that fitness trainers can help them to target specific physical problems they aim to solve more efficiently when comparing to the result from playing sports or doing exercise classes.

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Bullying is a big problem in many schools. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Bullying is an action which many students do to their peers and it makes several schools facing a new issue regarding with the crisis mentality and morality. From my poin of view, it is happened due to the inequality between the students, and the best solition which can tackle this problem is by giving special subject focused on moral learning and how to be tollerant each other.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people prefer traditional treatment to modern medical, so they may not tend to consult a doctor when they fell ill. I think that this trend, which may not be new because throughout several historical period societies had been relied on this kind of treatments, can pose significant damage to our health instead of be a solution for health problems.

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Some people say that music , art, and drama are as important as other school subjects, especially at the primary level. Do you agree or disagree?

I agree that music, art, and drama are crucial subjects in schools and should not be underestimated. This essay will explore several reasons supporting this view.

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