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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Many people try to achieve success through their career or education. What can success mean to different people? What is your view of success?

Many people work hard to have a successful life. However, the meaning of success is not the same for everyone and it can be different things to different people. In my personal opinion, I will consider success to be either about the workplace, family, and finally personal achievements.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative solutions?

Possessing a house is perceived to be more important than renting one for some people in several countries. In my opinion, this is a negative solution. This essay will further elaborate on the reasons from the point of view of the younger generation.

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Nuclear technology not only offers a lot of advantages but also threatens the world with its danger. The use of this technology should be discouraged. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nuclear technology not only brings merits but also has a bad impact on the nation with its power. I completely agree that nuclear technology should be discouraged because it depletes essential resources and raises serious health issues.

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Modern children are suffering from the diseases that were once considered to only be meant for adults. Obesity is a major disease prevalent among children. SWhat are its causes, and what sollutions can be offered?

Nowaday alot of children all over the world are suffering from several health desorders that once were relevant for adults only. A main of such illneses is an overweight. In this essay I'll try to explain my vision on health problems of modern world and to find some resolves.

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Around the world, people are now living longer than ever before in the past. Some say an aging population creates problems for governments. Others believe there are benefits to society having more elderly people.

Today, in many countries longivity is inreasing than ever before. Somes considired this trend bring more diadvanties tto governments while Others believe there are advantages to having a greater number of elderly people in society.

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Some people believe that University students should specialise in a particular subject, while others believe that they should study a range of subjects discuss both the views and give your opinion.

There is no denying the fact that universities have essential impact in people future. While it is a commonly held belief that University students should specialise in specific subject, there is also an argument that they should study several fields. This essay will analysis this topic from both points of view and express my opinion.

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In many cities around the world pollution levels have risen in recent years. Why are some cities becoming more polluted? What effects does this have? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Most cities around the world, pollution levels have escalated in recent years for many reasons. In this writing will discuss causes and effects in three issues which are construction of infrastructures, factories and traffic problems and overcrowding.

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Some people believe that success is about hard work and determination. Others think that success has a connection with money and personal appearance. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is a contentious debate that success is related to whether arduous work as well as determination or wealth and outlooks of a person. Although success could be achieved easily with money along with personality, I believe that it does not come overnight; people have to work more with strong heads.

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Many businesses think that the new employees who have just graduated from schools lack interpersonal skills, such as working with colleagues as a team. What has caused this and what are the solutions to this problem?

There are a lot of employers assuming that young people after graduation from schools have no enough ability for team working. That's a primery reason to unemployment of young specialists.

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Some people think that living in big cities is bad for people’s health. To what extent do you disagree or agree?

In recent years, the issue of residing in urban areas which is not beneficial to people’s health has heightened the preference of people. From my point of view, I would not side with this phenomenon.

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Some countries have become much richer than others.Richer countries should now help poorer countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some say that advanced countries should support poorer nations. I strongly agree with this statement because of several reasons.

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some people think that is worth researching different minerals in space. Others, however, dissagree. discuss both views and give your opinion

Currently, with the advancement of astrogation technology, many scientists are encouraged to study materials in space by citizens.In contrast, some people think that researchers are wasting time and finances to find an undetected object.Hence, they have a disagreeing trend. In this essay, i

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Poverty is a problem that affects the majority of children these days. Discuss the effects of poverty on society and suggest some solutions to this problem.

Nowadays, it is no longer a secret that poverty has affected many children in various aspects. Whether it was from social perspective or health issue, this problem should be further discussed to find good solutions. This essay will provide my suggestions on how the society should tackle this matter.

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“Groups and organizations form a vital part of people’s lives. Why do people join groups? What role do groups play in people’s lives? Support your opinion with specific reasons.”

Nowadays,many people support the idea of teamwork and groups because it plays important role in humans' community. This essay will explore the fact that impacts people's lives and the reasons behind individuals would like to participate in organizations.

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It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Nowadays, many people used to take a year off between finishing school and going to university. For many people, this situation looks like a normal practice. However, there are both pros and cons of deciding to do this. In this essay, I will discuss some of the reasons why it is becoming popular to have the year off.

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Some people think that manufacturers and shopping malls should sell fewer packaged products while others argue that people have the responsibility to buy products with less packaging. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

It is contentious that commercial markets and manufacturing facifilities should cut back on the products with packaging, whilst some presume that each customer should be responsible for buying less that sort of products dut to urgently environmental issues such soil erosion and water contamination. This author partly holds a belief that this contributes mainly to shopping facilities which are the key production of goods as well as their pivotal roles in atracting people to buy less packaged ones.

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In many countries, children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In some nations, children are working for paid work. Many people think this has no right, while some others argue this kind of work can give the children a meaningful work experience. Although working as children could help them to get a job in the future, I believe that it should be a crime regarding child labour.

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he tendency of news reporters in the media to focus more on problems and emergencies than on positive developments is harmful to the individuals and the society as a whole. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

It is claimed that media are more likely to concentrate on reporting news that contain emergency and negative information but not the positive ones about modernization is dangerous for the society and people. This writer argue that individual should know about negative news in order to raise awareness but will not lead to any harmful consequences because of the media’s notification.

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To succeed in a business, one needs to know math, rather than soft skills and luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Many people nowadays have a tendency to open a company and run their own business, especially when they are born in a well-off family, having a quite considerable amount of money and be swayed or even defrauded by other people. However, some people do not know what abilities they need to pick up to do well in trading . From my standpoint, both mathematics, softskill and good fortune are necessary factors that we ought to anticipate before setting up a business.

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Some think“vertical City”is the best where people live and work in tall buildings.Others think“Horizontal City”is better where there is few tall buildings.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some individuals believe that dwellers ought to prioritize living and working in vertical city, while other people think horizontal city where have few buildings supersedes the vertical one. From my vantage point, although vertical city have some benefits for dwellers, I consider that horizontal city is more comfortable for individuals habiting and working.

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