IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 237

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people are off the opinion that giving a good first impression at an interviewer is the key securing a good job. To what extent do you agree?

It is argued that the first impression of an employee in the interview is not helping obtaining the job. This essay is strongly disagrees with this statement because leaving a good impression consderied to be an essential part of the hiring proccess and taking a bad idea of the worker in the interview can led to losing the job.

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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult such as the Sahara desert and Antarctica. What are the benefits and disadvantages of visiting this area?

Nowadays,It is becoming more and more popular for tourists to visit rare places with tough situations such as Sahara desert and Antarctica.Generally speaking,the majority of people are being encouraged to go to some difficult areas.It is clear that there are a lot of advantages and disadvantages of visiting some regions which includes the least amenies.In this essay I will address several benefits and drawbacks of going these places.

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Developments in technology are causing environmental problems. Some think the solution is for people to adjust to a simper life while others believe that technology itself can solve these problems. Discuss both views and give you opinion.

The technological revolution nowadays is the reason of the environmental deterioration, and some believe that simplifying living standard is the solution to this issue whle other people think that environmental issues can be solved by using technology itself. i personally support both idea as modern life can consume a lot of the world's natural resources, and that technology could be part of the solution as well.

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In many countries today people are living in poverty. Why is this the case. And what can be done to solve the problem?

Extreme poverty is one of the economic crises in many countries today. Major population of the world is either on the poverty line or below it where they don’t have access to even the basic amenities of life such as food, shelter, clothing, primary health and primary education; which all are needed to live a normal basic life.

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In many countries, the no. of animals and plants is declining. Why do you think this is happening? How can this issue be solved?

It is true that the proportion of flora and fauna in different parts of the world is dropping significantly. There are many reasons for why are we facing this problem and steps can definitely be taken to tackle this problem.

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In many countries formal exams are used to assess students’ ability and to judge the success of their education. What are the advantages and disadvantages of using formal exams to assess students’ abilities? Do you think the benefits of using formal exams overweigh the drawbacks?

Formal assessments are being held in various countries to evaluate the efficiency and proficiency of students in their educational journey. While such exams have their own methods of assessment, they come with their own set of benefits and drawbacks. This essay explores the advantages and disadvantages for utilising formal exams worldwide and how benefits outweigh the limitations.

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Some people say that time and money spent on music classes in schools are not necessary. Instead, children should be learning useful subjects such as science and computers. Do you agree or disagree?

In my opinion to agree or disagree with the description that Some people say that time and money spent on rap classes in schools are not necessary. Instead, offspring should be learning useful subjects such as science and computers.is an important issue to discuss, first I will agreement supporting this explanation after which some aspects against it will be discussed. To begin with, despite my disagreement, a category of individuals advocate that pupils must acquire artistic subjects in order to conserve their cultural identity. This is because when youth study these syllabi, they acquire an in-depth understanding of their civilization along with the evolution that their country has witnessed over the centuries. For instance, in Egypt, educational institutions are keen on introducing history subjects to the current generation in order to obtain a comprehensive view of their Pharaonic civilization and how music influenced their culture. Thus, what can be said is that, according to...

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In some countries university students live at home with their family while they study, whereas in other countries students attend university in another city. Do you think the benefits of living away from home during university outweigh the disadvantages?

Some university students like to attend university close to home and live at home with their family, others like to choose to study away from home and live in another city. Surely they all have several reasons for the choice. However, in my opinion, living away from home is better for a university student.

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Topic 2: These days many families move to other countries for work. Some people believe that the children in these families benefit from this move. However, others believe that it makes life more difficult for the children. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

there is no denying the fact care childern is vere importnat,while commanly held belife that must riseing thier children in your homedwon and some people prefer rise them out country,I will discuss both other hands and drew my personal in this esay.

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Some People say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History.

History and Science and Technology are the compulsory subjects that every students study at primary school or upper stage of the school. There has been a growing argument that some people put emphasis on the importance of History rather than Science and Technology but some other claimed the opposite thing. From my personally perspective, since there are the clear reasons why those subjects are applied into the curriculum all over the over, both are equally important for students to study.

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Some people think that the increasing use of computers and mobile phones nowadays has unwanted effects on young people's reading and writing skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Technology is flourishing by leaps and bounds around the world. Some people say that youngster's reading and writing skills are affected by over using of computers and mobiles. therefore, I completely oppose this statement and I will clearly some facts behind this decision.

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In their advertising, business nowadays usually emphasise that their productss are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

It is true that businesses frequently promote their "new" products in their advertising in recent years. There are a variety of reasons why companies are likely to introduce their new products in this way, and I believe that this is a negative development.

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It must be a woman who stays at home to care for children. Men are not suited to this kind of work. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

People varies with their opinion about whether mother's are well able to take care of their children, whereas fathers are not suitable for it. From ancient times, women were recognised as good home keeper and carer and men were the earner. However, I am partially agree with the above statement which I will be discuss in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Population in cities is growing rapidly. What are the effects of it? What solutions can you give to maintain a good quality of life in urban areas?

In currentIncurrent society, increasing the number of citizens is causing several drawbacks, in order to keep the standard of dwellers in city areas, I decide to give both comments about the solutions

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Population in cities is growing rapidly. What are the effects of it? What solutions can you gift to maintain a good quality of life in urban areas?

Incurrent society, increasing the number of citizens is causing several drawbacks, in order to keep life-standard of dwellers in city areas, I decide to give both comments about the solutions

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A tendency of news reported in the media about problems and emergencies rather than positive developments is more harmful to the individual and to society. Do you agree or disagree?

Reporting about problems and emergency situations more than good news have a huge negative impacts on the nation. However, this essay totally agree with this statment and will illustrate how negative news effect individual minds and destory the people trust.

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The pictures below show how tea is produced. They also illustrate the process of making a cup of tea. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

This picture illustrates the process of making tea products and making a cup of tea. In general, there are 18 stages of producing tea from sowing tea seeds to drinking and enjoying.

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Some people find it difficult to manage their money. How could the government help prevent debt problems and support such people?

Managing money is essential for living a successful and hassle free life, but a lot of people still to this day have a difficult time with managing their money and usually leads to debt. This problem could be solved individually, but in my opinion the government also has a role in this problem. Therefore, it is important for the government to take action on preventing debt and supporting such people.

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After graduating from high school, some young people decide to start working right away instead of going to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this?

It has been evidently seen that most youngsters prefer to start working immediately after finishing secondary school without going through a tertiary education. There are pros and cons to this which I will be discussing in this essay.

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Many parts of the world are expecting an influx of people from the countryside to urban areas, which leads to overpopulated cities but scarcely populated rural areas. In my opinion, this development is having many negative impacts on both urban and rural areas.

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