IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 280

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people believe that the experiences children have before they go to school will have the greatest effect on their future life. Others argue that experiences gained when they are teenagers have a bigger influence. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

Some suggest that the childhood memories before going to school have the most impact on their life while others say the juvenile experiences have a greater influence on their life. In this essay I will present both sides of view with my opinion.

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Many countries are experiencing serious problems with their environment, with pollution of their land, water and air. What are these problems and how might they be reduced?

Ecological problems, associated with pollution of natural resources, are becoming one of the primary issues of many nations. The main problem this causes is rick of health diseases and the most viable solution is to inform people about consequences of it.

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Topic: In many countries, more and more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent years, there has been a growing debate about individuals in many regions choosing to move out from their parents to live alone than in previous decades. This has gained significant attention due to its impact on the mental state of teenagers and young adults, making it a subject of considerable interest and discussion. In this essay, I will argue that while living with your family or relatives can be quite beneficial to some, other important aspects should be considered, including financial independence from a younger age and ability to be responsibe in many sectors in life.

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Is some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

While it is widely claimed that children in some cultures were taugh to work hard in order to achieve anything, others argue that this message is potentially a misleads towards youngster in definitive results is hardworking. Both points of view and reasons why I agree with the latter statement will be elaborated on in this essay.

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All criminals should have access to education and rehabilitation programs while in prison. To what extent do you agree or disagree on this IELTS topic?

Criminals are undoubtedly judged negatively by all the community, whereas this resentment can lead them into inhumane behavior or lack of attention towards the criminal. In modern days, there are bunch of education and rehabilitation programs that are designed for all criminals while in prison. Hence, in this essay, I would discuss why we should agree that criminals should access these programs in their detention time.

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Large companies use sports events to promote their products. Some people think this has a negative impact on sports. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Big companies take the chance to market their product in several match events will give bad effect to sports. I do not agree with this statement because the committee already have the minimum standard of the products that support the games and the player will get free products and discount.

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Nowadays, more and more people don't wear their national clothes, and the clothes look almost the same all over the world. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

These days, the fashion industry has been developing tremndously than ever before due to the globalization. As a result, a large number of people wish to wear other nation's attires than own territorie's dresses even if look almost the same. However, I think this is a negative improvement and this essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money.

In the Contemporary era, the financial stability of an individual is a paramount factor which decide his happiness. There is a contradiction over the society, as some are claiming that living with what they received is more intellectual, while others contend on the notion that combating with the negative impacts may help to console the pressing issues relating to us, rather than bearing them up. Both above viewes along with my stance in favor of the later opinion will be discussed in the following ppassages .

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar which cause many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to enourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

These dyas, people's buying capacity has been increasing tremendously than ever before. However, many people say that an overdose of sugar is being on food and drinks products by large number of manufactures, henceforth, increasing the price of sugar-based on the products that can lead to reducing of consume sugar levels. Hence, I partially agree with this statement for the following reasons.

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Some companies have uniforms for their staff which must be worn at all times. What are the advantages for a company having a uniform? Are there any benefits of having a uniform for the staff?

Most companies have their employees work in uniforms. This is of benefit to the company as it depicts a standard, sophisticated and well-organized work environment. It can also save the workers from the risk of ruining their clothing as well as curb the intimidation from the staff who are more financially buoyant. I will elucidate these advantages of dressing same for the employers and the employees.

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Many people want their country to host an international sporting event. Othour er believe that international sporting events bring more problems than benefits. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

Sports events are an important part of our cultural life. Where should we hold international competitions? Some people desire their country to host ones, while others believe that sporting events bring more problem than benefits. I support the first opinion, we will discuss this social issue further in the essay.

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There is a lot of pressure on young people today to succeed academically. As a result, some people believe that non-academic subjects, such as physical education and cookery, should be removed from the school syllabus so that children can concentrate on academic work. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Nowadays, the number of students who try to achieve academic success in order to get into a well-reputable university and secure a well-paid job is increasing. Some people argue that non-academic subjects should not be taught so that students who are young learners can concentrate more on academic subjects. However, I disagree that non-academic subjects should be removed from the school syllabus.

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Some say that rich countries should help poor countries with trade, health and education. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your experience.

Unfortunately, our world is very unequal. Many countries have low levels of welfare, education, and healthcare. Some people believe that rich countries should help poor countries, while others adhere to the contrary opinion. I support the first thesis, we will discuss this social issue further.

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In many countries tiday, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and tv shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

The popularity of crime related novels as well as TV shows is arising day by day. The main reason behind this popularity is because these novels and TV shows, contain voilence, which attracts people's attention. However, I firmly believe these crime shows and novels are wrong influence

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A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is a debatable notion that some people believe that animals should be treated as well as humans, while some argue with this opinion and they see that people should exploit animals to meet their needs and demands. This essay will highlight the merits and demerits both of views in the following paragraphs as well as state my opinion toward this controversial topic.

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In many countries, traditional foods are being replaced by fast foods. This has a negative impact on families, individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no denying the fact that food is not only for eating , but also it is art and tradition. While it is a commonly held belief that traditional foods are being to replaced by junk foods, there is also an argument that it has a negative impact on families, individuals and society. In my opinion, I consider that I agree that traditional foods had it value and should not be replaced by unhealthy food.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes relatively large number of young adults, comparedd with the number of the older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the advantages?

A demographic situation is one of the crucial indicators of a society structure. We can illustrate it using a population age pyramid. Some people believe that a large percentage of young people of the population is the favourable factor for a country. I partly agree with the statement, we will discuss this question further.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Children’s using smartphones habit is now one of the most controversial issues that people like to debate. I believe that drawbacks of using electronic device outweigh its benefits.

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Some cities create new housing for thier growing population by constructing a samller number of high-rise buildings.Other cities create more of Low-rise buildings whcih solution is better in your opinion.

We live in an age when there are some cities which create new housing for their residents by constructing a smaller number of high-rise skycrapers. To my way of thinking, I personally view those living in vertical city will expose further benefits than those who live in rural areas.

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Some students decide early in life to pursue vocational careers that involve cooking or baking. For them, it is better to study their chosen occupations in high school rather than regular subjects. To what extend do you are or disagree?

With an extensive pressure of development of a career at an early age, some high school students started to pursue taking classes which are exclusively related to their future job, not following general curriculum. However, I firmly believe that they should prioritize schools’ curriculmn at all cost for their better choices of future plans.

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