IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 281

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishments' is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? what sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

One of the primary essential thing that can be done to kids is teaching them to understand the distincts between what is good and what is bad. I strongly agree that, various forms of punishments such as banning the usage of items they like playing with most and rewarding for a good deed are major things that can be done in order to rectify childern's bad behaviours by either the educators or the guardians though guiding and counselling might also assist some kids.

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Many countries are experiencing serious problems with their environment, with pollution of their land, water and air. What are these problems and how might they be reduced?

Nowadays, some countries suffer from contamination in multiple aspects, such as, environments, water, and air. Pollution is defined as a negative and harmful influence that occurs in our nature, usually it is caused by human beings, according to some scholars. This essay will discuss the consequences and solutions of this phenomenon.

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Some claim that children are more aware of environmental issues than older adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that children under 18 years old are more conscious and informed of environmental problems in contrast with adults. I agree with this statement , owing it to the fact that children are actively being notified of current ecological issues in school . Meanwhile , the elderly people are too occupied with their jobs and are proved of making the damage to environment.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledgs

Risks are essential for successful life. While one group of people believe it is the best idea having risky situations in either professional or personal lifestyle, other think it is usless activities which lead to dramatic circumstances. I personally support those who are agains potantional drawbacks of it and I am going to explane the reasons.

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development.

Global population is increasing trend all over the world due to the higher birth rate and relocation being a normal phenomenon. However, the influx of people from rural areas to the cities has its pros and cons. This essay will analyse this topic from both points of view and present my opinion.

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Some people feel that with the help of technology, there is little difficulty in solving complex mathematical problems. Therefore mathematics is no longer a mandatory subject at schools and colleges. To what extent do u agree or disagree? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant example from your experience or knowledge.

These days a group of people think that with the advanced technology developing it will take place of alot of things. So, some people think that math subject is no longer needed as a subject in the education system, while other believe that it will always be esseintial in universities. This essay will discuss both sides and draw my personal conclusion.

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing

In some countries, people who live in villages migrate to cities, so the number of people in the countryside decreased. In this essay, I will discuss both views and my opinion at the end.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

If someone asks children what do they usually do during their free time, most children will answer they do everything by smartphone. Such as playing a game, watching Youtube and using social media like Instagram or twitter. This phenomenon became too common now, but I think it's negative and we need to change this tendency in a different way.

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People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment—doing things they like to do—rather than doing things they should do. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

According to statistics, by expanding the use of social networks, people become more lazy. I agree that nowadays people are more focused on doing what they want rather than doing what they really should do. In this essay, I will discuss this theme with two reasons and give some examples.

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Excessive sugar consumption causes many diseases. Some people think that it is the government responsibility to limit people’s sugar consumption while others think that it is the individual’s responsibility to limit the amount of sugar they eat. Discuss both views

Too much consume sugar can lead to many diseases. Some people argue that the government should take responsibility to limit people's sugar consumption. On the other hand, some people think it is more like to individual responsibility. I think it is both, between the government and the individual can work together to decrease the numbers of diseases that was caused by sugar consumptions.

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It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. What are the advantages and disadvanatges to this?

Having a year is beginning to more popular among young people however it can lead to negative effects as well as positive and this essay is going to examine both the advantages and disadvantages of graduating.

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

These days, a lot of people who live in countrysides are moving to cities and population in the cities keeps increasing. This phenomenon was revealed as a serious societal problem in the news for a long time and I also think this is negative for the nation's development.

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Nowadays, many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Do the advantages of being self-employed outweigh the disadvantages?

There are trends of increase number of peoples being self-employed instead of being employee in company. while being self-employed are benefits on work-life balance, others concern the financial stability compared with employment by enterprise. From my point of view, there are more drawbacks to being self-employed than being employed by companies.

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Although the prices of fuels have greatly increased over the last decade or two, it is argued that further increases in fuel prices are the only way to reduce world consumption of fuel and lessen pressure on the world’s fuel resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, the costs of fuels have rapidly increased over the span of ten or twenty years. Hence, it is debated whether the next rises in fuel prices are the sole option to solve a problem of overconsumption of fuel. As far as I’m concerned, i believe that issues with international fuel resources can be easily tackled by other measures, such as alternative energies and eco-friendly behavior.

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In some countries, children under 16 years old are not allowed to leave school by law and get full-time work . Is this a good or bad thing ? Discuss your opinion.

Owing to the issue which kids under 16 years are prohibited from leaving school by law and getting full-time work in some nations, leading to some communities think that it has inequality perspectives. I arguably assume that it is a pivotal policy by governments to reduce substantial problems in the future, which I commence my argument on in the following paragraphs.

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Differences between countries become less evident each year. Nowadays, all over the world people share the same fashions, advertising, brands, eating habits and TV channels. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

In the present day, people around the world majorly share the same preference in various aspects, such as fashions, brands, eating and buying habits, also TV channels. This newly habit has already made lessen differences between countries each year. Therefore, I believe that this phenomena will gained more disadvantages rather than its advantages, which will be discussed in the following essay.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

When it comes to whether the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals, some people agree with the opinion, whereas others think that there are more important environmental problems.

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Many students choose to take a gap year before starting university, to travel or gain work experience. Do you think this is a good idea ora waste of time?

A trend of gap year become more and more popular because many students take it before starting to go to college, travelling, or gaining work experiences. Some people might wonder is it a good idea or just waste of time. Personally, I think it is not wasting of time at all. Otherwise, students can take benefits from it, such as know about her or himself more deeply.

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in many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. some people say an ageing population creates problemds for governments. other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. to what extend do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages.

Life expectancy of human beings is improving in many nations around the world when compared to many years ago. Some individuals are of the opinion that having larger proportions of elderly people will cause more issues to the government. However, this essay will discuss the advantages of having more ageing population in society.

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Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some believe that competing in different daily activities such as work and school is a good sign, while others think people should show more cooperation rather than competition. This essay will show that although competition extracts the best performance from individuals, cooperation increases their Productivity.

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