IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 281

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Art classes, such as painting and drawing, are as important to a child's development as other subjects, so it should be compulsory in high schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that high schools should impose art-based subjects as major subjects because of positive effects on child's development. While there may be certain argument against this suggestion, i still wholeheartedly agree with it for several reasons.

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Art classes, such as painting and drawing, are as important to child's development as other subjects, so it should be compulsory in high schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people are of the opinion that there is an obligation for classes relating to art, namely drawing and painting to be added to high schools' schedule as their importance to evaluation of a child personally, I partly agree art classes are obligated to be taught in high schools and will discuss why in this essay.

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Art classes, such as painting and drawing, are as important to a child's development as other subjects, so it should be compulsory in high schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

In modern era, there are argument between people of the importance in art classes, for instant, painting or drawing to the children’s development like other subjects and it should be compulsory in high schools. This writer argues with this statement because the benefit it can have on students like stress release or improve creativity in other subjects.

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SOME PEOPLE THINK IT IS IMPORTANT TO SPEND MONEY ON ROADS AND MOTORWAYS THAN N PUBLIC TRANSPORT SYSTEMS SUCH AS RAILWAYS AND TRAMS. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?

IN AN EVER-PROGRESSIVE SOCIETY, WHETHER IT IS SALIENT TO USE THE BUDGET ON MOTORWAYS AND ROADS THAN ON THE SYSTEMS OF PUBLIC TRANSPORT OR NOT, IS A CONTROVERSIAL DEBATE. IN LIGHT OF THIS, I AGREE THAT ROADS AND MOTORWAYS SHOULD BE SPENT MONEY ON DUE TO MITIGATE ACCIDENT RATES AND SAVE NATIONAL EXPENDITURE ALONG WITH TIME. ON THE ONE HAND, IT IS VITAL TO UNDERSTAND THAT SPENDING EXPENSE ON REFURBISHMENT OR CONSTRUCTING ROADS AND MOTORWAYS CAN ALLEVIATE ACCIDENT RATIO. TO BE SPECIFIC, BEATEN PATHS OR POOR QUALITY ROUTINES MAY DETERIORATE THE ABILITY OF VEHICLE CONTROL, UNDIRECTLY LEADING TO TRANSPORT INCIDENTS. THEREFORE, UPDATING ROADS OR CONSTRUCTING THE HIGH-END QUALITY ROADS COULD ENHANCE DRIVER'S CONTROL. AS A RESULT, PEOPLE WOULD HAVE A LOWER CHANCE OF FACING ACCIDENTS. TAKING DUONG LE STREET IN VIETNAM FOR INSTANCE, SINCE THE VIETNAMESE GOVERNMENT CONDUCTED SOME REPAIR PLANS, THE TRANSPORT INCIDENTS ON THIS ROAD HAVE WITNESSED A DECLINE OF ABOUT 50%. ANOTHER FACTOR WORTH CONSID...

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Art classes, such as painting and drawing ,are as important to a child's development as other subjects , so it should be compulsory in high schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

A common trend accuring in the modern days that schools are inclining towards focusing on academic subjects rather than artistic classes. However , the major of individuals felt that art lessons should be added to curriculum due to it's profound impact on child's improvement. This essay totally agrees that subjects relate to artistic fields should be paid more attention by schools.

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Some people think it is more important to spend money on roads and motorways than on public transport systems such as railways and trams. To what extent do you agree and disagree?

Many people are of the opinion that spending property of government on roads and motorways is more essential than public transport. It is the writer's disagreement that public transport should be carefully invested.

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Some people think women should be given equal chances to work and excel in their careers. Others believe that a woman's role should be limited to taking care of the house and children. Which opinion do you agree with and why? Include specific details and examples to support your choice.

We've all seen that a great deal of invents in history were made by women who were free to continue their studies and never been stopped by their husbands. It's truely wrong to think that women should be limited to the kitchen and raising children. Women are as capable to be decisiveness as well as men and there's no difference between the systematic of their brain. However, in today's world unfortunately there are still a small group of men who believe that women should be restricted in the society.

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In some countries today, people are having their first child when they are older. What are the reasons for this? Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

While it is widely claim that people nowadays having their first child late compares with previous generation that tend to own a family in their younger phase, others argue that . Both points of view and reasons why I will bring positive effects will be elaborated on in this essay.

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the number of students studying science is constantly declining. what do you think are the causes and effects on our society?

In recent years, it is observed that science subject is becoming unpopular among students, due to the low financial income paid for science compared to business or finance . As we rely on new technologies to grow our system, it could pose challenges for the society as without newcomers in the field, there would be less novel innovations to serve the future needs of mankind.

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Many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside. Others believe that there are health benefits of living in cities Discuss bth views and give your own opinions

It is becoming increasingly prevalent for individuals to hold the view that community living in rural range will have a healthier behavior than community who live in urban space. In contrast, sceptics believe that there are several health advantages for city inhabitants. This writer argues that having a healthy behavior is much easier when living in the countryside because of the unpolluted environment and fresh foodstuff supplements.

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many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside. others believe that there are health benefits of living cities Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

It is becoming increasingly prevalent for individuals to hold a view that people living in rural areas will have a healthier lifestyle than people who live in urban areas. Incontrast, sceptics belive that there are several health advantages for city inhabitants. This writer argues that having a healthy lifestyle is much more easier when living in countryside because of unpolluted environment and freshfood suppliment.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

As human behavior has changed to a large extent, advertising methods to attract both prospective and current customers are necessary to evolve. I believe that this is a beneficial development, as businesses can maximize their potential through diverse advertising approaches.

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Parents are the people who live with us for long time. In your opinion, what are the qualities of good parents?

Parents are the people who live with us for long time. There are old long saying goes "heaven no parent is ever wrong." However, from my perspective, parents are not absolutely correct in anything. They should know what the qualities of good parents are. Therefore, I will explain three qualities of good parents.

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Some people say that the governments should pay for health care and education but others think that this is not the govrnment's reseponsibility. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Things that should be covered by government or public are discussed at the moment. While some individuals argue that the health protection and education are not the governments responsibility, I side with those who believe that those things should be controlled by the governments.

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One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Medical treatment is a crucial thing to make people’s lives be expanded, so some believe that continuing medical development allows them to live longer and healthy lives while others disagree with it. I personally argue that the merits slightly outweigh the downsides following reasons that I will mention in this essay.

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Future plans to design prisons for learning and working, with bigger cells containing computers that will enable study and communication, have been criticized for trying to turn prisons into "holiday campus" and "wasting taxpayers' money". To what extent do you agree or disagree with these views?

According to the prompt, in the future, the design of prisons will be equipped with some computers that enable the people inside to study and communicate with others which can boost them with learning and working. However, some people believe that this plan will only wasting money furthermore by using the tax that people pay. This essay will explain why I believe the drawbacks of filling the emptiness on the jail are outweighted by the positives when compared to preparing some tools for those who fined by the law.

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There have been major advances in technology over recent decades and this has led to significant improvements in people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent decades, with the rapid development of The Times, technology has developed rapidly, which has had a significant impact on society. In my opinion, these advances have really brought about substantial improvements in people's lives.

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Public health is becoming an urgent issue nowadays. Some argue that government should create nutrition and food choice laws to improve public health, while others believe that it is a matter of personal choice and responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is unfortunate that in the midst of vast progress in very field in every field of life, there is a growth of health issues. Many people believe that laws can improve public health by influencing people's choices of food, I partially agree with this point of view, moreover, I personally reckon that individuals should also make wise decisions and take the responsibilities of their own health and well-being.

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Some people think that new houses should be built in the same style as older houses in the local area. Others disagree and say that local authorities should allow people to build houses in the styles of their own choice. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Certain individuals believe that maintaining a similar design of all houses in a locality is a better idea than allowing any new architectural manuever. Both opinions have different reasons which will be explored further in this essay. From my perspective, people should be allowed to make houses in any manner they desire.

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In some countries, owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Buying places where to live have become one of the most appealing luxuries. This is explain mainly by cultural reasons that have been inculcated generation by generation as well as the popularization of investing in different fields. From my perspective, I consider that it has drawbacks and benefits, and in this essay, I will explain my reasons in detail.

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