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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Nowadays, many people prefer to seek medical advice on the Internet instead of seeing a qualified doctor. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or a negative development?

In this day and age, there is a divisive opinion in society. Where some folks tend to look for medical treatment on the sites. However, others choose to seeing a qualified doctor. Based on my perspective, it will be positive development for in recent years along with this letter I am going to discuss the reason of this phenomenon before arriving at the sum up.

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As the internet becomes more popular, newspapers are becoming a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Nowadays, paper news has been disappearing in the world. Some people would suggest that newspapers will be completely replaced to online news, while others argue that newpapers still have demand in some people. I partly agree with the latter view, because conventional press way have a crucial role in worldwides.

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There seems to be increasing trend towards assessing students through exams rather than Continual assessments. What are advantages and disadvantage?

Taking an exam is an inseparable part of educational system, so the manner of holding it is a controversial issue. The cons and drawbacks of evaluating pupils through tests will be debated in the following essay.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might be this case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Individuals in a few mother countries believe having a personal residence is vital than hiring a one. This might be because a self-home gives a self esteem and sense of own personal space to family. I think it is a positive situation as you don’t have to pay rent, don’t have to stress out for debts.

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The floor plan shows changes made to a home during a 6-month period.

The blueprint illustrates the pertaining to the changes of home in 6 months.

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As the internet becomes more popular, newspapers are becoming a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

The development of technology and its impact on diverse spheres of lives is undeniable. The internet, as one of the most practical tools , plays a key factor in modernizing societies in which spreading news is one of that. Considering all the drawbacks of the internet, this essay will discuss about my orientation toward the online news.

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Some people believe that robots are important to human's future development while others believe they are dangerous. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The debate exists between the future prospects of society through development of technology. Although some consider the robot's evolvement as a nessecity for successful future, I believe the risks of them completely erradicating human kind are far greater.

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Social media is becoming increasingly popular almost all age groups however sharing personal information on social media website does have risk do you think that the advantages of social media overweight disadvantages

It is often argued that using social media with share personal data on the online website will have a risk. Some people think it can be benefit, whereas someone not. I will show both sides of this issue. One of the most important advantages is that communication in online world brings in abundance of knowledges and solutions since people will have a chance to get exposure to a variety of choices, which is beneficial to them when they are introduced into the real life. For example, according to the latest research conducted by the students from Bangkok University, it revealed that it become easier for 80% of people in Thailand who use Facebook for work is help when they have prior experience of interacting with difficult problems. This demonstrates that social media plays a major role in addressing this issue which eventually will benefit the citizen.

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Topic: In many countries, there is a growing gap between the technical skills of younger people and those over the age of fifty. What problems does this cause, and what solutions could minimize the problems?

Technical gap refers to the difference between the technology that each generation encounters. It is an undeniable fact that the gap in technical skills between older individuals and generation Z can lead to some harmful consequences; however, several steps can definitely be taken to tackle the problem.

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In many countries,there is a growing gap between the technical skills of younger people and those over the age of fifty. What problems does this cause, and what solutions could minimise the problems?

Evidence suggests that all over the world, the wast majority of elderlies are not able to work with new technological progresses as much as younger generation. Although there are specific root causes behind this phenomenon, effective solutions can be adopted to remedy this situation.

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If you have 1 hour of free time, do you choose to read or exercise?

Nowadays as an employee we don’t have much time to do activities such as reading or exercise . Both of these activities have benefits for you. Reading a book gives you more information and new knowledge. Exercising helps you to lose weight and get a firm body. If I have 1 hour of free time , I will read books because of these following reasons.

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Some people believe that children that commit crimes should be punished. Others think the parents should be punished instead. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people think that children should be punished who commit crime, meanwhile, others believe that parents need to be punished instead of their children. Although, youths are punished for their crimes, parents are responsible for their kids.

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People can live and work anywhere they want to choose, because of improved communication technology and transport. Do the advantages of this development outweigh disadvantages?

It is sometimes argued that individuals are supposed to live and work in their favourite places due to the improvement of transport and communication facilities. In my opinion, I hold the view that the advantages of this development is far outweigh the disadvantages.

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Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do agree or disagree?

The protection of environment plays a significant role in the natural world. It is, therefore, not surprising to see how it has caused a controversy among people about whether people actions cannot develop the environment, and only corporations and governments actions can make a huge difference. Some people firmly support their argument, while others adamantly object to it. I have solid reasons to agree with both of two which are a single person power is not enough to improve and a single person power can influence others.

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Some people say that it is necessary to use animals for testing medicines intended for human use. Others, however, think it is cruel and unnecessary. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There are controversial perspectives heating up a debate over the fact that animal-based testing has long been the centre of criticism. In my opinion, while the former is valid to some extent, I would slightly consider myself an advocate of the latter.

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Being a celebrity- such as famous film star or sports personality – brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?

Some people might consider that being a celebrity has more perks and less problems. However, I believe the advatanges the fame has do not worth all the struggles that come with it.

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In many professional sports, there is an increase in the number of athletes using banned substances to improve their performance. What are the causes of the phenomenon and what are some of the possible solutions?

In many branch of sports, the numbers of athletes who got caught using illegal drugs to increase their ability is on a rise. This essay will suggest that high pressure to win competition makes athletes willing to take the substance. This can be prevented by implementing rules that require them to take drug tests before the competition and punish them if they have violated it.

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Having more money and less free time is better than earning less money and having more free time. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

Some people think that more money and less leisure time is better than making a little bit money and more free time. In my point of view, most important thing is here is people's lifestyles because while working a lot is a really stressful thing for some people, for others it can be not a very concerning thing.

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In most countries，prison is an effective solution for the problem of crime. Some people think a more effective solution is to provide a better education. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

It is unfortune that in the midst of vast progress in every field of life, there are still many existing crimes and even a growth of juvenile dilinquency. Some people say stringent punishment and prison are the solutions, however, I believe education is more effective in the long run.

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Many employers are employing people with good social skills as well as good qualifications. Do you agree or disagree that good social skills are as important as good qualifications to succeed in a job?

A lot of people consider the people who have the good education background, working experience as the key point to get good wellbeing job, but some of them usually neglect the importance of social skills. Despite some people believe the working ability is the most important thing. The following essay will illustrate two of principal reasons why I personally believe that people with good social skills are as vital as good qualifications to be successful in a job.

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