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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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In many countries today, if people want to find work, they have to move away from their friends and their families.

Today the vast majority of people want working have to leave their home and leave their friends and relatives. In my opinion,in this question advantages outweighs the disadvantages and i am going to prove it.

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In the past, knowledge was stored in books. Today, people stored knowledge on the internet. To what extent the advantages of this trend outweigh its disadvantages?

Nowadays, due to the advancement of technology, people store their information and knowledge on the Internet, while in the past traditional methods were used.This essay both sides of the argument will discuss and the support will be explained.

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Nowadays, distance-learning programs have gained in popularity, but some people argue that online courses can never be taken as good as those taken at a college or university in person. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this generation, distance-education courses have acquired a huge amount of popularity. Anyhow, few citizens debating that digital lessons are not much as effective as compared with other in-person university subjects. This essay agrees with the statement that online lessons are not useful when compared to the in-person college subjects. First, students can ask doubts and question to the professor immediately. Second, students will also get extra hours to discuss about the program after class hours.

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A big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?

Recent advancements lead to world becoming more competitive. Some believe that getting high wages is more essential than a sense of fulfillment. I completely agree with this strategy, and my strategy will be detailed in further explanation below.

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Some parents, especially mothers, stay at home instead of working, and some people think they should receive momentary compensation from the government. Do you agree or disagree?

It is debatable that due to busy schedules, most mothers sacrifice their dreams and stay with their kids at home and look after them. Therefore, few individuals believe that some amount must be given to mums as a reward for looking after their home and their offspring. However, In my view it is a good idea because of financial crises it is hard for the bread earner to fulfill all the desires. Secondly, the mother should not feel dejected as they get a certain amount to fulfill their wishes without being dependent on others. I will discuss my view in this essay below.

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Write about the following topic: Some people think that we learn best through in-person interaction with a teacher in a classroom. Others believe that online learning is more effective. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, many educational method have been introduced to approach most people at every ages to study. Some people prefer learn in-person interaction with a teacher in a classroom, others believe online learning is more effective. Both of these educational method have their advantages and disadvantages.

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Schools should focus more on the STEM courses and less on the fine arts. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, schools have different courses students can enroll in and these can vary from science, technology to fine arts. Some people believe that educational establishments should focus on science and technology courses than fine arts. However, I disagree, both STEM and fine arts courses should have the same priority in terms of offering courses to students.

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Some people feel that good training courses can make anyone a teacher, while others say that good teachers cannot be produced by simply following a training course. Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion.

Teachers play a paramount role in shaping the future generation.Teaching is a passion anyone who is keen interested towards teaching can become professional teacher in schools , colleges and universities.But these days to work in an organised teaching field government has set certain qualifications to enter into institutions.

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Importance of Learing history has been a topic of widespread debate in contemporary society. Some argue that there is no need to study history and we should cocentrate on the future

Importance of Learing history has been a topic of widespread debate in contemporary society. Some argue that there is no need to study history and we should cocentrate on the future, others, meanwhile, advocate for an opposite aproach and introduce the subject as an vital source for learning. I completely agree with the second opinion and i will discuss it in details in this essay.

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It is believed that children from countries with a high level of unemployment should be offered just with a primary education and not with a secondary education as they in any case will not get a job in the future. Do you agree or disagree?

It is said that children from undeveloped countries should be having only the basic levels of education, as a result of any possibilities that they will not find a job later in the future. However, education does not guaranteeing one for a job and career, it is more about cultivating one to become a well-grown adult. It is disagreed with the topic, and this will be analyzed by discussing the importance that education can bring for children and job and the main purpose of education.

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In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customer travels to large shopping centre and mall to do shopping. Is it a positive or negative development?

Lately, we observed how private, local shops are withdrawn by big chains. Certainly, small businesses should be supported by locals. However, most of people cannot afford higher prices set by private entrepreneurs.

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In today’s competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents go out to work. While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parents’ absence. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In this fast paced economic era, numbers of married womans decided to work along with their husbands to reach family's finanancial stability. Some believe that this approach could benefit children of these families, whilst others state that this generation might experienced various drawbacks such as lack of parental support, emotional support and lonliness. In this essay i will shed some lights about the positive and negative impacts of the given notion.

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Nowadays, instead of locally sourced produce, many supermarkets sell a variety of imported foods from all around the world. Does this advantage outweigh the disadvantage?

These days increasing the very strong local items. All supermarkets sell many products and foods from all around the world. it becomes a country with more cons. In this essay, I will discuss it.

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Today, many people use the internet and smartphones to transfer money to friends, family, and businesses. Is this a positive or negative development?

Transactions of money among people and businesses has been a daily occurrence since many millenia. Although in the past transfering was a tangible activity involving notes and coins, with the advancements in internet and mobile technologies, the physical aspect of fund transfering has now mostly transitioned into electronic means. In my opinion, I believe that this transformation is a favourable evolution due to several key benefits.

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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe that they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

There have been competing views on whether skilled workers should work in the country that trained them. In my opinion, they should be grant a freedom of movement in order to achieve their career fulfillment.

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Some people think that secondary school children should study international news as one of the school subject. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge

Exercise can be useful or cause some mistakes in health. Various people exist in the world, so everyone can not do every exercise, and some exercises can harm the division of people; in my opinion, I agree about this topic, and I will discuss my results.

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In many countries governments are investing in new technology to deal with the public. Why is this happening? Do you think it is an appropriate use of government money?

Nowadays, technology is an indispensable thing in residents lives because of its convenience, that is why many countries from all around the world are prioritizing in developing technology in order to deal with the public. This writer will explain why it is happening and why investing in high-techs like manufacturers and builders is a worthwhile use of government money.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels off sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

High amount of sugar which leads to many diseases is being manufactured in lots of food and beverages and I agree that increasing the prices of them can prevent individuals from consuming more sugar because sugar makes people overweight and the high prices are the best way to decrease sales.

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In many countries governments are investing in new technology to deal with the public. Why this is happening? Do you think this is an appropriate use of government money?

New technology is invested by governments in many countries to tackle with the society. Due to the increasing demand for efficient and accessible public services this will happen in the future. Probably this may be a useful invest in government money.

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In many countries governments are investing in new technology to deal with the public. Why is this happening ? Do you think this is an appropriate use of governments money.

In this day and age, high-tech devices are being invested by the governments to cope with the public. This writer believes that this method will cause negative effects on the dwellers and it will be the foundation to stimulate the reactionary.

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