IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 318

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people say in order to prevent illness and disease,goverments should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems.To what extnet do you agree or disagree?

It is said that governments should pay attention to decreasing the pollution of the environment and housing issues in order to protect citizens from disease and illness.Perhaps,some individuals consider that solution is not useful as these diseases can also be caused by gene.This writer will discuss both views and give my own opinion in this essay.

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Some people say in other to prevent illness and disease, governments should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Housing issues and enhancing environmental quality should be major concerns of governments, aiming to prevent illness and disease. This essay will explain the writer’s opposition to the mentioned belief.

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Some people say in order to prevent illness and diseases, governments should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that governments should relieve housing problems and environmental pollution to reduce sickness and disease. While there are some solutions that may work more effectively such as vaccination, I contend that this is the most suitable way to tackle the circumstance as these are the main factors to cause diseases.

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Some people think that the government should provide free education at every level.However,some say that individuals should pay for their university education. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many people believe that our government should facilitate free education at every stage of study but on the same time, other thinks we must pay our higher studies finance by himself. However,in some cases, it is possible when you have strong and well established family background which pays our university fee but in my opinion, the government must take responsibility by giving free of cost education.

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In some countries, university students live at home with their families while they study, whereas in other countries students attend university in another city. Do you think the benefits of living away from home during university outweigh the disadvantages?

It is widely thinking that students study at the university but also live at home with their family compared to attending university in another city. I believe that the drawbacks of living away their family in university time are eclipsed by the benefits.

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In some countries university students live at home with their family while they study, whereas in other countries students attend university in another city. Do you think the benefits of living away from home during university outweigh the disadvantages?

Living with family and living alone far away from home during university have their own benefits and disadvantages, but in my understanding those two have equal amount of benefits and disadvantages. Living with family can be a method of saving money since we do not have to paid for new housing and it can cut up the living cost, and also we don't have to adapting ourself into a new environment since we have been living with our family our whole life.

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The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The provided diagrams illustrate the changes that have occurred in Grange Park from 1920 to the present.

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Some claim that children are more aware of environmental issues than older adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some argued that compared to the older generations, children are more aware of the environmental issues and I totally agree with the statement. The youth has been very active in advocating global issues and I think because they are exposed to the social media more than the older adults and many countries have included the topic in their educational system.

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Media is increasing in famous people who have ordinary background. Why do you think people interest in lives of famous people? Do you think this is a good why?

There is an increasing amount of media attention on celebrity with normal background and the public shows interest in their daily living. I believe that this is not good as even tho people choose to be famous, they should not be forced to expose their lives and some people tend to spend a lot of money to live like their favourite celebrity.

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Today more countries import food from different parts of the world. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend. Provide specific reason and examples to support your answer

It is considered that these days that most of the countries of the world import eatable from different nation.This essay will discuss the advantages along disadvantages of this notion in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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Today, the life expectancy of people is much higher than before. Older people should continue to be involved in the workforce. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The increasing life expectancy can lead to a more experienced workforce, contributing valuable insights and mentorship opportunities. On some levels it's good to keep older people in as workforce but we should consider their mental and physical health as well. It has been prooved that senior citizens need to rest and be retired after 30 years of working in society. It's not morality correct to force them work after age of 55.

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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Although is it thought by several people that doctors, engineers and professionals from other fields should work in the nation where they practice.others argue that they will work anywhere in this world If they want to. In my opinion, I think these workers must work in their homeland to distribute their nation.

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Prison is the common way most countries try to solve the problem of crime. However, a more effective solution is to provide the public a better education. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (OPINION ESSAY)

Majority of countries resort to prison as the solution to combat crime but some argued that education to the public is a better measure. I completely disagree with the argument because certain criminal offense is so severe that stricter punishment than education should be imposed and awareness regarding crime will not prevent people from doing bad things.

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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Decision making is a process that everyone learns with time and it is one of the best skills that one should possess. Some people believe that children should learn this from their childhood by making their own decisions like what to wear, eat and things they want to keep themselves entertained, but there are some who think that this will make children self centered and selfish. In this essay, I will discuss both of these views and will discuss my opinion as why children should be allowed to make some of their decisions.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages.

Undoubtedly, young generation is the backbone of any country as they are from that age group which helps a nation to run smoothly. In this contemporary world, population of some countries include majority of youngsters as compared to the aged population. This situation has its own pros and cons, and I will discuss both views and my opinion that this situation has more disadvantages than the advantages.

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Some people believe if a police force carries guns, it will encourage the level of violence in the society. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

I disagree with the opinion that the violence in the society will be promoted if a police force carries guns, since the advantages of carrying guns are more than the disavantages.

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People nowadays spend their free time less actively than in the past. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, children are less active in their leisure time than in many decades ago. As a result, many sports lessons must be mandatory in education. However, I am not convinced by the statement for some reasons mentioned in this essay.

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Now a days people are admiring media and sports star even though they don't set a good example. Do you think it is positive or negative development.

Nowadays,media and celebrities play a vital role in creating a brand positioning in the mind of people, However sometimes they show something that is very cringe for the public. I agree with the statement that there is a lot of negative impact of such advertising by television or well-known person.

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the chat below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018

The par chart provides key information about the weekly salary for how families spent in one region between 1968 to 2018.

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Environmental damage is a problem in most countries. What is the cause of this damage? What should be done about this problem?

In fact, nowadays most countries face to environmental damage which are increasing every year. To my mind, there are some reasons in particular, the human factor is one of the main reasons for this.

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