IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 326

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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How do you reuse old towels? Discuss your opinion and reasons behind it

Nowadays, fewer and fewer people write letters to communicate to each other. Society considers this type of communication outdated, and I am going to describe this tendency in this essay.

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Many people buy unnecessary things and get into debt when they do not need them. why people who buy extra things are getting into debt and discuss possible solutions.

In todays day and age, people tend to hoard many unwanted materials irrespective of their needs which leads them to financial instability. In my opinion, this phenomenon is due to various factor such as peer pressure, social media, inability to let go off their belongings due to emotional attachment. The aforementioned issue will be disscussed in detail in the following passages along with its remedy.

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It is often said that we should work to live, not live to work. Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion.

It is thought by some people that they should work to live while others believe that individuals need to live due to work. In this essay, both viewpoints will be outlined before reaching my opinion.

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In some countries, there has been an increase in the number of parents who educate their children themselves at home instead of sending them to school. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is extra classes of the students.People are starting to realise that their children can have better understanding of the school program with that.Personally,i agree with idea of abilities to study outside school.

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It is universally accepted that eating too much sugar has a negative effect on people’s health. Therefore, some believe that the government should control the amount of sugar people consume. Others think that it is the responsibility of an individual to monitor their sugar intake. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People have different views about who have the responsibility of consuming too much sugar for citizen. Some people believe that the government have its responsibility, while others would suggest that pepole should control about a quantity of sugar by themselves. This essay will discuss this issue from both perspectives and I am of the opinion that the latter views because of intaking sugar is personal choices.

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Some people think that the main factors influencing a child's development these days are things such as television, friends, and music. Others believe that the family still remains more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Television, friends, music, and family is a few factors that involved in a child's growth. These factors has been a debatable issue since there are two different views on the most important factors of the development of children nowadays. One of which says the day-to-day thing that the children experiences such as television, friends, and music are the main factors, and the other says children' families still play a huge part in their development.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that marketing plays a huge role in getting our attention to buy goods while others argue that commercials are not getting attention anymore as it has become so ordinary now. In my opionion, I agree with the first statement. This essay will explain both perceptions alongwith my own point of view.

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Some people see sports only as a leisure activity while others believes sports play a more important role .Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is asserted by some individuals that games are only a way of enjoying their free time whereas others think that sports play a crucial role.Although games are great way to spend idle time,I believe that these play more imperative roles such as physical fitness and job opportunities

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It is universally accepted that eating too much sugar has a negative effect on people’s health. Therefore, some believe that the government should control the amount of sugar people consume. Others think that it is the responsibility of an individual to monitor their sugar intake. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The consideration of healthiness in many societies is increasing and people tend to control their lifestyle and diet. One thing that has been considerating is the consumption of sugar which is proven to have bad effects on health. There are individuals who believe the government should take an action to prevent people from intake too much sugar. However, there is a strong opinion that it is part of individual responsibility to have self-control. In this essay, we will discuss both perspectives on the high consumption of sugar.

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several people assert that the main cause of crime is an economically disadvantged background. However, others say that crime is casued by person's nature.

The casued of crime is a heavily studied topic in modern society. Many experts believe that crime is caused by poverty. However, others believe that crime is a result of a person's nature. Extensive research about these causes has not been able to produce a definite answer about the cause of crime.

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In some countries it is thought advisable that children begin formal education at 4 years old while in others they do not have to start school until they are seven or eight. How far do you agree with either of these views?

In some countries it is thought advisable that children begin formal education at 4 years old while in others they do not have to start school until they are seven or eight. Although education in Azerbaijan used to start at the age of 6, it has been starting at the age of 5 for the last 2-3 years. I am against starting at 5 years old because not all children have the same perception and at 5 years old they are still discovering new things on their own. I am in favor of them going to kindergarten until the age of 6 or 7, because it is stronger for them to start their socialization period there, to build relationships by playing games and having fun. In countries such as the United States of America and China, formal education begins at the age of 4-5, which depends on their cultural, social, and individual factors. In my opinion, this is a punishment for children because they take away the entertainment in their life and it is burdened at the earliest time of childhood. I don't agree...

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Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In the past few years, there has been an ongoing trend about choosing career pathways. Is it better to work in one organization for a long time? Some people claim that it could benefit one’s life quality. However, I believe that having a job in different companies might give life experiences.

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Nowadays young people spend too much of their free time in shopping malls. Some people fear that this may have negative effects on young people and the society they live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

According to some, young folks spend a lot of their valuable time in shopping malls. They feel that shopping keeps their life interesting and acts as a great stress buster. However, it can lead to many downside effects not only for them but also for society. Hence, I support the claim that excessive spending on malls leads to negative effects and I the have following reasons to support my stance.

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Young people who commit serious crimes, such as a robbery or a violent attack should be punished in the same way as adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

It is sometimes argued that young people are supposed to suffer same punishments as adults when break the law seriously. In my opinion, while children should take responsibilities for their behaviours, they are not ought to be punished severly.

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Some people think that individuals today are more dependent on each other. Others believe people have become more independent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion?

Whether or not individuals are likely to depend on each other is such a controversial argument. The writer believes that people tend to count on each other due to several reasons such as higher productivity and maintaining their networking relationship.

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people likes to travel or work in the time between highschool and university studies. what are advantages and disadvantages.

people like to travel or work in the time between high school and university studies, a lot of people like to travel or work before university studies, so in this essay, we will know the advantages and the disadvantages of work or travelling after high school.

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Some people think that it should be compulsory for people to retake their driving test every 5 years. What are the advantages and disadvantages of doing this?

Many people suppose that renewing driving license every 5 years is necessary to those drivers. The following paragraph will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of this policy.

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Some countries achieve international success by building specialized facilities to train top athletes instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In modern society, there has been growing public interest in establishing specialized sports centers which have various professional equipment. There are some people who have claimed that the government should provide sports facilities for ordinary citizens to motivate them to play sports. This is true; however, I also understand that the country should invest money in establishing specialized facilities to train capable athletes to promote countries worldwide.

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according to some recent researches rates for committing crime after a criminal's release is concerning at such high numbers, although unspecified

according to some recent researches rates for committing crime after a criminal's release is concerning at such high numbers, although unspecified. This writer firmly believes that the case resides in the contentment of prison life and the society as a whole of prisoners, which can be resolved by improving facilitites as well as providing treatment for those people.

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Today more and more people wants thing instantly (eg : goods, service, news). Why is this ? Is it positive or negative development ?

In recent years, there have been a lot of people who want things instantly such as goods, services, and news. This phenomenon happens because the greed of humans is increasing and this thing can bring negative development to personal life.

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