IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 327

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Multinational companies are becoming increasingly common in developing countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Global companies are gaining more popularity among third-world countries. The main advantages of this are that they generate more employment in a country and provide good benefits to employees. However, the major drawbacks are long working hours and unsecured jobs.

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Due to aircraft will pollute the environment and affect climate change, and should not be grounded. Do you agree or disagree?

It’s sometimes argued that since flights produce air pollution with emissions, it’s necessary to remove airplane from transport services. In my opinion, it would be wrong to ban flight services in any country. Airplane is a convenient and indispensable transportation, and it helps people across the country and reach anywhere by only taking a short period of time. Without the services provided by airlines, it can cause a big change in people’s transportation behavior and further damage the global economy.

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Studies have shown that many criminals have a low level of education. For this reason, some people believe that the best way to reduce crime is to educate people in prison, so that they can get a job when they leave. Do you agree or disagree?

A group of people believe that the best option to reduce crime is to educate prisoners in prison. Because the researcher's results have illustrated that many criminals have a low degree of education. I completely agree with these thoughts.

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Some cities create housing areas by providing taller buildings other create housing by building houses on a wider area of land what solution is better?

Some cities prefer to build taller properties for their residents and some prefer to build wider ones. Building skyscrapers and high rises is a better idea in these days, because we are facing problems about space for living and also tall buildings are more attractive for people who want to buy them.

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We live in a world of technology these days. While the internet brings with it clear advantages, the problem in terms of control and security of information outweighs the advantages. To what extent do you agree?

Nowadays, in the modern age, the internet has brought advantages and disadvantages to our world. It makes our life easier. Furthermore, people can do many things without standing from the sofa. Let’s discuss the pros and cons that we have on the internet.

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In many countries, young people are granted certain privileges and responsibilities at the age of sixteen. Clearly parents have responsibility to both care of and prepare their children as they approach this important milestone. To what degree should parents intervene in in the lives of their fourteen and fifteen year old children.

In most of countries teenagers with age of sixteen and more are awarded some superiority by government which makes them to become more responsible about their actions and watch out their behavior properly. It is obvious that as a duty for parents of under the age of sixteen children, they are destined to guide their children how they need to assume their responsibilities correctly.

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The government is spending a lot of money discovering other planets. Some people think that the government is wasting money and should spend more money addressing the problem of the public. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, with the development of new technologies, governments tend to pay money to explore the universe. Some citizens believe that the government wasting money and must spend money on solving community issues. I partially disagree with the statement. In this essay, I will argue my own opinion.

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The US film industry has too much influence on the film industry around the world. Governments have a duty to invest money in their own film industries to protect and develop their cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The dominant film industry in the world is American. Some people see this is a bad thing and think that governments should invest money in their film industries to protect and develop their culture. I would agree with this to an extent however I also think there are advantages to the American films.

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Many people use distance learning programmes to study at home, but others think that it cannot bring the benefits as much as attending college or university. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

People have various views about whether it is adequate to study at home or studying at educational environment is better option .While distance programmes can have significant advantages . I beleive that studying at social environment can contribute to more success in the following feild.

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With the technological development, some people think technology reduce crime, but some people think it encourage crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree and give your own opinion

Some argue thst the technological advancement has caused significant decline in crime, while others considered it as initiation of different type of offence. I totally agree with this statement as although the physical crimes are no longer abundant, But the cyberbulling and online identity theaft are more common.

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Consumers are faced with an increasing number of advertising by competing companies. To what extent do you think consumers are affected ? What measurements can be taken to tackle the problem?

Nowadays, too many advertisements have a negalive effect on consumers making the right choice. No matter how much the demand for the product is high, but introducing it to the public through advertising does not always lead to good results.

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Some people think that foreign films and programmes have a negative impact on local culture. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people express their opinion that international cinemas and TV shows bring out an adverse effect on the local culture. I vehemently diagree with this opinion because I believe that they promote creative inspiration and social and political awareness.

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Consumers are faced with an increasing number of advertising by competing companies. To what extent do you think consumers are affected? What measurements can be taken to tackle the problem?

People are witnessing a lot of advertisements by organizations with a competitive atmosphere.Because of the increasing of different types of advertisements, consumers may be inattentive. The solution to this trend is that some advertisements should be limited.

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In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?

Many people nowadays live longer than before and many societies argue that it would be burden in some points. However, there are communities that assume this could be benefit them especially among scientist because they could have more specialist. I wholeheartedly agree that the advantages of having eldery outweigth the disadvantages.

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Some people think that schools should reward students who show the best academic results, while others believe that it is more important to reward students who show improvement. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people think that school should award students who have the best academic achievement while others argue that rewarding students who show improvement is more important.Although the students who have the best scholarship will receive the award due to their ability to earn something that they can do better than others,I believe that the pupils who present themselves as a improvement person should deserve the award too because it points out that they have the effort

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some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods.while others aruge that customers should avoid buying goods with alot of packaging.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

nowadays , the lifestyle of many people can play a crucial role in consuming different types of goods in their lives. some people think that many companies and markets have a great responsibility to decrease the rate of packaging of goods while others believe that customers ought to avoid shopping for foods with a little packaging. In my opinion, I consider that factories and markets can help to reduce the rate of packaging by introducing goods with low cost.

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in the future nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

There is a notion that hard copy of books and newspaper will not be available in the future, due to the fact that people will be able to read these documents in internet for free. There is some basis for this belief, however, I think it will not be the case entirely. Because people will pay for something if they want to read it on their own volition, on top of that, the algorithm to protect piracy is becoming stronger.

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The continued rise in the world’s population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present. What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?

The human population has been growing globally. It is argued that this phenomenon is the most challenging issue of the current era. There are a number of causes leading to this problem. This essay discusses the underlying reasons and my own point of views sating why I agree with this statement.

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Some people believe that sport is an essential part of school life for children, while others feel it should be purely optional. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is undeniable that sport is very important for human life. Some hold the view that sport is main part of education system, whereas others believe that children should choose sports according to their own preferences. This essay will discuss both views and state my own position.

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Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is probably better to have the place where you work or live clean, some would say. A proper environment may be a source for creativity or even for keeping you organised. I have to agree with this point of view and this essay will provide the right arguments.

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