IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 342

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Demand for gas and oil is increasing and so finding new sources in remote and untouched area is a necessity. Advantages outweigh disadvantages?

Requirements for fossil fuels are increasing and so finding new sources in undiscovered areas is essential. I think this activity has numerous disadvantages because it will eliminate natural habitats and the environment so is better to find other solutions.

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Many countries spend a lot of money in art. Some people think investment in art is necessary, but others say money is better spent on improving health and education. Discuss both arguments and give your opinion

Many states spend a huge amount of money in the art sector. While others argue that it is not necessary, instead of that the money should be better to spend health and education. This essay will delve into both sides with my personal viewpoint.

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People sleeps less than before in many countries. Why do people sleep less? What effects does it have on individuals and on society?

Nowadays, decreasing quality time for energy recharging and relaxing on modern people is an alarming situation around the world. This essay will demonstrate about what are the reasons for the sleeping issues and how it directly affects individuals health as well as society.

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Some people think that schools should give prizes for academic successes. Others argue that it is more important for schools to give prizes for other achievements (for example, for sports, music and behaviour). Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The majority of people think commite of schools should give a gifts to student who gain successes in academic subject. While the others, suggest the prizes should be prepare for student who reach special achievement in non-subject. Both paradigma have an own reasons, in the forthcoming paragraphs will discuss about the issue and i will explain why I agree with the latter.

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In some countries, only few young people go to classical music concerts or or play classical music. Why? Should young people be encouraged to attend and learn more?

In modern days, a small number of children to go classical music concerts or play classical music. That phenomenon is relating the new generation's children behaviour and routine. In this essay, I will find that answer's question and dram conclusion.

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In some countries university students live at home with their family while they study, whereas in other countries students attend university in another city. Do you think the benefits of living away from home during university outweigh the disadvantages?

Many people believe that student's living placement is necessary to communicate and growing of person. While there are some another aspects of this statement that students should live with their parents at home, I agree with the view that without it we will become more sociable.

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some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects.others believe it is more importantto give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is a trend for some pupils to go an extra mile to read about additional subjects apart from their major books.Other folks think that it is better to focus on one specialty at a time in order to achieve higher grades.Both schools of thought have their own pros and cons which will be discused in the subsequent paragraphs.I personally prefer studying one qualification at a time rather than diverging attention.

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Spending on advanced computer systems by authorities is very beneficial for development but many oppose this trend. do you agree or disagree.

Majority of people think the government should waste their revenue on advanced technology, but some people have different view. I agree with the first because more modern technology of countries, it would bring them to the top of the world.

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Global warming is one of the biggest threats humans face in the 21st Century, and sea levels continue to rise at alarming rates. What problems are associated with this, and what are some possible solutions?

Nowadays it is the most concerning phenomenon that the effects of global warming and the rising sea levels.This essay first state that the probable problem is loss of lands and the flooding homes and give the prime solution that build barrier and reduce pollution.

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Shops should not be allowed to sell any food or drinks that have been scientifically proven to be bad for people’s health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Contemporary society is known as the era of well-being. From this aspect, questions about whether shops should not be allowed to sell any food or drinks that have been scientifically proven to be detrimental to an individual’s health are raised. In my opinion, selling any eating products should be regulated to some extent.

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Many elderly people are no long looked after by their families but are put in care homes or nursing homes. What are the advantages and the disadvantages of this trend?

One of the most feared topics to think of is aging because it cannot be taken over, for that reason, many elder people end in nursing homes. Within these care homes, some elderly individuals benefit from expert care and medical services, while others confront emotional challenges and detachment from families. This duality forms a central theme for the discussion.

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Some people think that in modern society individuals are becoming more dependent on each other. Others believe people have become more independent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In the modern era, it is so easy for youngster to become dependent on other peoples . But others believe that there are large amount of youngers still earn money by themselves. I think that, despite there are some people dependent on their parents, today's youth still independent and I will clarify it in the below paragraphs.

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Some people think that books should be stopped in school and that videos, films and computers should be used instead. To what extent do you agree?

There has been quite an obvious discussion around the topic of digital education material in school. While some people believe that we shold use e-books in the classes instead of hard copy one. I would argue that there is some points that we should take in account. I will explain my reason in the following paragraphs.

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In many countries today, if people want to find work, they have to move away from their families and friends.Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Finding work is a hotly debated topic that divides opinion. Some people think that the best way to seek a job is moving away from their hometown and friends.I think that, despite some drawbacks it brings, it stills does more good than harm.

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Some school children buy healthy food from the school cafeteria. However, some buy unhealthy food. What are the reasons for both these situations? Should schools be allowed to sell unhealthy food?

Food is the most essential thing to make a healthy body. Many School children prefer to buy healthy food from the school cafeteria but others prefer unhealthy food. In this essay, I will discuss both views and why school cafeterias need to stop being allowed to sell unhealthy food.

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Many governments have laws that ban the sale and use of hard drugs such as heroin and cocaine, yet they allow people to buy drugs such as tobacco and alcohol. Laws that prohibit the sale and use of hard drugs should be applied to all drugs, including tobacco and alcohol. What is your opinion?

In many countries around the world, drugs such as cocaine and heroin are prohibited while alcohol and cigarettes sale is allowed. Many consider tobacco and alcoholic drinks drugs as well, defending that laws should be banning these items too, being applied to all drugs. In my view, despite I believe alcohol and tobacco cause damages to its consumers, it should not be banned, but still limited, because its still part of many societies' culture.

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Some people say that governments should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems to help people prevent illness and disease. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Indeed, It is irrefutable that due to advancements in all spheres of life and overpopulation, the major issues faced by the folks are excessive pollution and housing problems which leads to spread of various diseases. So, many individuals argue that the authorities should focus on reducing these troubles. I also think that the government should focus on the measures to tackle with these problems.

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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

The way we all communicate has changed dramatically since the introduction of the informational technologies. Now it is possible to do things that were unimaginable before or only spoken about in the context of science fiction. It goes without saying that such extreme advancements in this realm have lead to significant shifts in the way people talk to each other. Objectively, it is still way to early to draw final conclusions on how this all impacted humanity, but it is crystal clear that some consequences of this new informational era are obvious.

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The way children spend their free time has been changed by technology. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

The way children spend their free time has been changed by technology.

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Would you rather visit the moon or the sun? What would you do there?

Nowadays, It is apparent that traveling to the moon would be easier than the sun, since the distance is shorter and the temperature could be colder. Moreover, many of spaceships had been sending to observed the moon, also there were people that stepped out on the moon.

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