IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 342

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people feel that the government should regulate the level of violent influence on TV and at the cinema. Others feel that violent films should not be regulated. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Since years ago, cinema industry has drastic effect on various aspects of life sphere. People are exposed to diverse genres of movies, such as action, martial art, and thriller. It is debated that the violence of movies should be curbed with governmental decisions, and some advocate for non-limited degree of violence in movies.

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Challenge 3 : In today’s digital age, anyone with a smartphone can capture and share photographs. This accessibility to photography diminishes the value of professional photographers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no denying the fact that smartphones have a significant role in this days especially in photography. While it is a commonly held belief that the worth of executive photographers will reduce by the new evolution of digital smartphones, there is also an argument that opposes it, In my opinion, I consider that is something irrelevant and experts will not be impacted by the new technology.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

In modern times, individuals prefer to have their own company and work for themselves rather than join an organisation. I believe this thing is due to the fact that working for yourself is much more easier and have some cons for individuals which no one can deny, however, there are some pros which need to be discuss like a lack of salary and no insurance.

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Young people are often influenced in their behaviors by others in the same age group. Some argue that peer pressure is important while others feel it has distinct disadvantages. Do the disadvantages of peer pressure outweigh the advantages?

Youngsters now have a noticable effect on their behaviors by the people with the same age or at the same level, it is called peer pressure. Some believe that peer influence plays a significant role in teenagers life while others argue that it can have a bad influence. I believe that peer pressure can cause a positive impact sush as competitiveness and aspiration, while it can also lead to bad habits such as smoking sigarrets.

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In many cities, problems related to overpopulation are becoming more common. Some governments are now encouraging businesses and individuals to move out of cities to rural areas. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

The increase in the number of people living in cities has become a significant issue. Some governments are trying to motivate society in order to immigrate to the countryside. The merits of this motivation is far more than its drawbacks.

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Some people think young people should be required to have full time education until they are at least 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The proccess of learning is the parent's responsibility, so many views are arising aroung the right of allowing children to not learn, some believe that children must learn during their first 18 years, while others reject that. In this report I will go through each side and present their claims, then I will say me position among this argument.

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In some countries, people these days spend little time with their children. What are the causes of this? Whome does this affect more, parents or children?

It is considered that in many countries parents not spend enough time with their offsprings and this problem can lead to many mental issues especially on children. In my point of view, all family members will be affected however 0-6 aged groups can be more impacts on this problem.

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In many countries today, if people want to find work, they have to move away from their friends and their families. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

In these days, finding a profeesion requires transforming to another country. In this report I will go through the two aspects of this change, then alow me to share my position.

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

Upcoming days all transport systems will be free from drivers and individuals can travel like a passenger. I think there are more benefits than drawbacks.

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Many doctors say that people in the modern world do not exercise enough. What are the courses for this? What are the solutions to this problem?

People in the modern world do not exercise enough for various social, economical, and environmental factors. Various parties may need to collaborate in order to change this harmful lifestyle.

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Some people think that getting old is a negative thing, whereas others think it is much easier for people to live in modern society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Growing up is a natural mechanism inside all animals. People cannot avoid from getting old. While there are some voices claiming that became the elderly are easier to live in modern world, I tend to believe that having a young body are easier to live in the modern society.

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New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumers. To what extent do you agree or this agree with this opinion.

Nowadays it is observed that extension of new technologies business is constantly increasing over current years, and it is arguable that lives of customers has influenced and undergone some changes because of technology and its business. It seems to me that by this much of excessive interests in new technologies, people’s lives have changed enormously. I will explain about changes that caused by technology with some examples in this essay.

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Today children are surrounded by electronic devices such as personal computers, tablet computers, and smart phones, and they learn to use them at a very early age. What are advantages and disadvantages of this situation?

In the modern era, technology plays a decisive role from the early stages of people's lives. This issue have some benefits and drawbacks which I'm going to explain more about in the rest of this essay.

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Successful sports professinals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In many countries, it is believed that expert sportmen incone is much higher than other significant professions. Whilst a group of people would argue that it is unfair, others are not. I personally that it is inequality to allocate a great deal of money to sportmen.

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New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. Do you think the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

In the future, space tourism will be probably popular. Today, there are a lot of companies give opportunity to become a space tourist such as Space X, Virgin Galactic and others. In my opinion, it is positive development but with clarification. People should not lose focus for some actual problems.

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Some people think that one should plan detailed activities for their leisure time, while others disagree with this view. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

In today’s era, people care more and more for their leisure time. It is argued that some people believe that people should have a specific detail planned for leisure time but others believe that leisure time is enjoyed freely without plans. In my opinion, i think it is depends on ones needs, which i will elaborate in the following essay.

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Banking and funding and their role in our life. Methods of paying. Discuss why it is important to open a bank account. Do you think it is safe to keep all your money in a bank? Which payment method do you prefer?

In today's contemporary era, banking and funding is play a crucial role in our daily life. It is important to open a bank account due to safety and other numerous reasons that, this essay will discuss about them among my preferable payment method.

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In future all cars, buses, and trucks will driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicales outweight the disadvantages?

Recent years, people has discussed that there would be no driver in the transportation in the future, that means, the transportations will be auto-opreated. In my opinion, although there are some advantages of running vehicles without drivers, I believe that drivers have played an vital roles in operarting vechicles. Hence, i think the drawbacks of driverless vehicales outweight the benefits.

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Many people believe that high levels of violence in films today are causing serious social problems. What are these problems and how could they be reduced?

A vast majority of individuals assume that the high rates of violence in scenes these days are posing threatening social issues. It is because of several problems including the television broadcast officers do not censor the criminal act and allow any levels of age to watch the film. These challenges should be tackled immediately in order to prevent further severe issues among societies.

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Businesses should do anything they can to make a profit. Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.

In the mordern world, Profit is an important ingredient to run company . Some people says that entrepreneurs must do anything to make money. I partly agrees with this assertion and this essay will acknowledge the validity of this statement and elaborates on my reason .

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