IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 345

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Nowadays, more and more older people who need employment compete with the younger people for the same jobs. What problems this causes ? What are solutions?

Nowadays, many people suppose that employment competition with young generations in the same jobs is necessary for older people. In this essay, I will outline some reasons for this phenomenon and propose solutions to address it.

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The best way to reduce poverty in developing countries is by providing at least six years of free education for each child, so that all children can read, write and use numbers.To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people believe that the best form to decrese poverty in poor countries is by education. Being more specific, government should offer at least six years of free education for everybody. As a result, children would be able to read, write, and do calculations. I partially agree because I think that only six years are not enought to change lives. There are several measures that need to be done to put an end on poverty.

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Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good while others think there disadvantages to this. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

A handful of companies have been sponsoring sports teams as an avenue of promoting their products, while there are some who think that it is a good idea, there are also others who do not agree with that. Personally, I felt that it is an innovative way of promoting a product however the choice of the team needs to be considered as well. In this essay, using football teams as an example, I will delve into both sides of this advertising coin and give explanations for my opinion.

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Some people think that art lessons, such as painting and drawing lessons, should be compulsory in secondary schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Integrating art subjects must be mandatory in the school curriculum which is considered by some flux of people and I largely agree with this statement because these lessons lessen pupils'stress as well as can unearth hidden talents which bring them towards career development.

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Discipline is an ever- increasing problem in modern schools. Some people think that discipline should be the responsibility of teachers, while others think that this is the role of parents. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

One of the main topics that has been widely studied is discipline, which is a crucial behave inculcated thoughout time. Hence, many people argue that it is a vital function that should be taught by parents, many others state that the main figures involved in this are teachers. I am discussing both positions because I openly believe that not only relatives but also professors are preponderant by imparting this.

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In many countries, a small number of people earn extremly high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that goverments should not allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Most countries give their civilians an average salary, but some civilians receive a lot of money. They believe that it is very optional for the country, but others believe that government must set an average amount salary for everybody in the country.

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some people think that student in single-sex schools perform better academically. Others, however, believes that mixed schools provide children with better social skills for adults life. Discuss both of these views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, the debate over whatever youngsters in single-sex schools indicate more academically desirable consequences or students in mixed schools are equipped with better social skills for their future has become the center of discussion. This essay will shed light on both points of views and reveal my personal perspective.

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More and more young people are using drugs and alcohol these days. What are the causes of this problem? What are some possible solutions?

Consumption of alcohol and substance abuse is a growing concern for our society. It is now a frequent sight in big cities where young people are drunk or under the influence of drugs. Not only it has caused problems related to health of individuals, it also has rendered many economically weak and dependent.

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Many people from rural areas (are) moving to the cities. What problems can this cause? what can be solutions?

Nowadays, people from villiges approach moving to big cities. However, this trend results in several problems. In this assay, some of the issues and their solutions will be represented.

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Topic: Many children and students are taught to push themselves to be better than others rather than work together for everyones’s benefits. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In modern times, It is probably true that competion is inevitable progress in the education. Competion gives the best outcomes, but sometimes shows the worst results. In this essay, i will examine this trend brings about both benefits and drawbacks.

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Children spend too much time watching TV and playing computer games. however it does not help in improving their mental abilities. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people say that children spend a lot of time watching and playing computer games, however it does not help in improving their mental abilities. This writer disagrees with this statement because of the strong determination due to the games and teenagers’ s gallantry.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, it is common to hear about some different views of advertising as some people suppose that advertisements play an important role in pushing us to purchase while the other tend to think that advertising is so common to discover from time to time that it can sometimes be useless.

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Some people think that having a set retirement age (e.g. 65 years) for everybody, regardless of occupation is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive a pension at an earlier age. Do you agree or disagree? Which type of workers do you think should benefit from early retirement?

Pension is one of the most crucial benefits of after-work advantages. In many countries, the age of retirement is pre-defined by the authorities and law makers. A certain segment of individuals argues that a certain category of workers should be retired at their earliest phase of life. I raise my hand to the folks who support this notion and I will elaborate on my stance in the ensuing paragraphs supported by logical reasoning and relevant examples.

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Governments should spend money on railways than roads. To what to extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Beyond doubt, there have been many discussions revolving around the issue of whether states should spend more money on railroads than on highways or not. From my perspective, I highly support the idea that they ought to pay out more money on roads than on railroads. In the next paragraphs, I delve into the main reasons in their detail.

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Governments should spend money on railways than roads. To what to extend do you agree or disagree with this statement

Beyond doubt, there have been many discussions revolving around the issue of whether states spend more money on railroads than on highways or not. From my perspective, I highly support the idea that they should spend more money on railways than roads. In the next paragraphs, I delve into the main reasons in their detail.

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Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football. But others think taking part in individual sports is better, like swimming. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is argued whether team sports or individual sports bring more benefit for participants. From my point of view, I believe that both have their own specialities to join in which I will discuss for more details in this essay.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Nowadays, lots of students study at universities. Several students are willing to study their minor. However, others argue that spending their time to self-study and learning for qualifications is rather than studying minor subjects. From my perspective, learning minor and spending the time to gain the qualifications are significant.

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Scientists believe that computers will become more intelligent than human beings. Some people find it is positive while others think it is a negative development. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Scientists believing that computers may become more smarter than human. While some say that computers may put humans out work, I still say that this is a good thing because they make less mistakes in doing particular things than humans.

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Food travels thousands of miles from producer to consumer; some people believe that eating exclusively local food produced by farmers would be healthier for the environment and the economy.' To what extent do you agree or disagree?

I do not agree or disagree with this subject as there can be advantages and disadvantages to the local and foreign farmers. As there is a big topic of how the food is been transported from other countries as this has multifaceted, and there are various perspectives to consider. I hope to delve into some key points for you:

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Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on society?

There is a current trend of less students choosing science related majors in universities worldwide. The causes of this trend might come from the nature of the subjects that is more stressful, also there is less pressure from the parent regarding to study in arts and humanities. The effect would be students with excellent academic performance would be diversified into different fields of work, with their own interest.

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