IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 375

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some think that governments should tax unhealthy food to encourage people to eat healthier. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In modern era, many are of the opinion that a gevernment should inpose heavier tax on unhealthy food such as instant food in order to foster people's eating habits to be more healthy. Although there are some people who are in agreement with this viewpoint, I largely believe that there will be an alternative to stay healthy in people's lives by encouraging people to have more regular exercise to be healthy.

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In many developing countries, there is an increasing movement of workers from rural areas into cities. Why do you think this happen? What problems can this cause.

In most of the underdeveloped nations. We see an increasing trend of labor from the countryside to the urban centers. In my view, there are two main causes of it. One of the primary causes is industrial development in main urban centers generating employment opportunities. The other cause is cities have better educational institutes and health care centers.

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Do you think Businesses should hire employees for entire lives .do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that any companies would like loyal employees to work in their company to feel more secure and able to trust their skills to manage the company. In my perspective ,I disagree with the statement above in spite of two factor such as limited acess to new tehnologies and idea for both employee and the company. In the next paragraph , I will discuss the reason of this in detail.

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Promotions to higher level should be from within company and not to a new person from outside. Do you agree or disagree?

It has been asserted by some that the right to receive a promotion should be exclusively reserved for internal employees of the company rather than hiring any candidate from outside. I agree with this suggestion despite the recruitment of outside workers may have its own possible benefits.

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Some parents believe that their children their children should do extra curricular activities after shcool. Others say in this was, children are under pressure. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Although some are of the opinion that students ought to participate in extracurricular activity after school hours ,others believe that such activities can lead to additional pressure .In my opinion, I consider that extracurricular activities make students feel stressed.

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A lot of money is spent nowadays searching for oil. As the world's oil resources will eventually run out, it would be more logical to spend some of this money on developing new sources of power, such as wind and solar. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the current days, more and more investments are done to find fossil fuels, such as petrol. As the sources of oil are becoming each time fewer, some people argue that it would be more logical to apply more money to developing new sources of power, like energy from the sun and from the wind. I totally agree with this statement because the reserves of oil are finite, besides these new technologies tend to be more sustainable and eco-friendly than energy from petrol.

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some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training . others belive they should be free to work in another coutnry if they wish . Discuess boh these views and give your opinion.

It is argued whether professionals should stay in the countries that provided them with training, while others advocate for the freedom of pursuing different career paths, even if it means leaving their home country. In this essay I will aim to discuss both perspectives on this matter, as well as to pose why I think it would be better for graduates to pursue their goals outside their home-countries.

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Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and this money could be better spent elsewhere.

The high authorities spend huge amounts of capital on the arts rather than spending money on rising issues such as poverty, global crises and increasing crime rates. In my opinion, government should give more importance to the current issues and invest capital in developing the nation.

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Children's upbringing is a major challenge for human beings. Although many people believe that parents should teach manners to their juveniles, others consider that schools are responsible for developing these traits. In my perspective, schools are great source of fostering interpersonal skills rather than parents.

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In many countries, people decide to have children at a later age than in the past. Why? Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In recent years, people tend to bear a baby later than in the past in several nations. While late childbearing may bring about some benefits, I believe this trend would do more harm than good.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The Government must be concerned about how the citizen survives their lives. Citizen’s lives are influenced by many aspects. It needs science to make the innovation or something new to help their lives. I totally agree with the argument, that the goals of science should make a better change for citizens’ lives and will be discussed in this essay.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Experts predict that in the future printed newspapers and books won’t be in use anymore as they will be replaced by digital e-books. I agree with this statement, as technology takes over our planet by leaps and bounds. This essay aims to give arguments and provide examples.

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in the recent years, the number of crimes comitted by young people in major cities throughout the world is increasing. Discuss this issue. Give reasones and suggest some solutions.

The increasing number of crimes that are committed by young people in big cities throughout the world has becoming a big issue especially for society. The main reasons of this issue are the free access to social media and internet without parental advisory or guidance and also the young people are prone to stress from comparing themselves with others then it leads to cyber bullying or bullying at school. This passage will discuss the issue on the next paragraph.

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When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Many people recognise the size of the salary is the most crucial consideration for them to choose a job. Personally, I disagree with the idea that money is the leading factor when deciding on a career, because I believe that other factors are equally important.

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Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argued that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both point of view and give your own opinion.

As we believe that any crimes have any triggered to do their actions. Within that, people argue if individuals get involve in any kind or crimes will get the same punishments, whether it based from their circumstances or motivation. But, in my opinion, it has to be treated with different punishments, which is motivation for committing needs to punish more rather than based on the circumstances of an individual.

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New technologies have changed the way children do in their free time. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

Whether we like it or not, in the past few decades, the advent of modern gadgets have transformed all aspects of offspring's leisure pursuits in their break time. The writer states that inspite of bad impacts on physical health, the merits of having diverse enterprises for their entertainment and the enhancement of communication outweigh the drawback.

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Some people believe that the best way to encourage children that have a healthy diet at school and some people believe that parents should teach them to have a healthy diet. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Whether the school or parents play an imperative role in forming children's awareness related to quality diet is emerged as a controversial topic of interest . The writer of this eassy claims that due to the period of time student spending with their family , it would be much easier for them to gain an understanding about a healthy diet .

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Nowadays in many countries chemicals are used to preserve food. Do the advantages of this use outweigh the disadvantages ?

A wide range of chemicals' usage in preserving food has lead to some arguements in many countries. This writer argues that the benefits of longing products' lifespan and reducing preserving cost can outweigh the drawback of altering the ingredients.

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Some says that music, art and drama are important as other school subjects, especially at the primary level. Do you agree or disagree?

To begin, I agree that music, art, and drama are as important as other school subjects, especially at the primary level. Here are a few reasons

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New technologies have changed the way children spend theri free time. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

The way how children spend their leisure time has been changed by the gadgets. The writer argues that although technologies can help children develop their mental health, the drawbacks of causing sedentary lifestyle as well as impacting social interaction ability outweigh the advantage.

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