IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 377

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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In some countries there are more young people choosing to enrol in work-based training instead of attending university. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, it is possible to note that there is a movement among young people in choosing the short path to their professional development. In other words, they are enrolling in work-based training instead of going to the university. This essay believes that the drawbacks of this choice outweigh the advantages in personal and global aspects as well.

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Learning at university would be more effective if men and women were educated separetely. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that higher education institutions should separate their students by gender, in order to enhance their learning process. I strongly disagree with such measure, since it could widen the gender gap in education. In addition, I believe that every student should be taught equally, regardless of their gender.

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Hình minh họa cho thấy sô cô la được sản xuất như thế nào.

Nội dung trong đồ họa thông tin là thông tin liên quan đến phương pháp sản xuất sô cô la từ ca cao. Nói chung, đây là một quá trình khá phức tạp, bắt đầu từ việc chuẩn bị hạt ca cao và cuối cùng là sô cô la lỏng, sẵn sàng để phân phối. Giai đoạn đầu tập trung vào việc chuẩn bị hạt ca cao để sản xuất sô cô la. Quy trình bắt đầu với cây ca cao ở Nam Mỹ, Châu Phi và Indonesia, nơi có môi trường thích hợp nhất để phát triển. Sau khi vỏ quả đỏ chín, chúng được thu hoạch và tách riêng từ hạt cacao trắng. Công đoạn tiếp theo là hạt cacao trắng được lên men và rải ở nơi khác để phơi khô dưới ánh nắng mặt trời. Bước này hoàn thành khi hạt chuyển sang màu nâu, sau đó chúng được phân thành bao tải lớn và vận chuyển bằng tàu hỏa hoặc xe tải. Chuẩn bị sô cô la lỏng để tiêu thụ là trọng tâm của bước sau trong trình tự. Sau khi hạt ca cao đến nhà máy, nó được đặt trên khay và rang bằng lửa. Bước tiếp theo là hạt cacao rang được thả vào máy nghiền để loại bỏ vỏ cũng như làm cho hạt cacao có kích th...

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed,rather than work for a company or organisations. Why might this be the case? What could be disadvantages of being self-employed?

In this twenty-first century, an increasing number of individuals prefer to do their own jobs instead of working under certain entities such as firms and corporations and the main reasons of this are the stress-free environment and the flexibilty of working hours.

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Some people argue the government should support the funds for arts, while others argue that the money should be used for public health and education. Discuss both those views and give your opinion.

According to some, money should be allocated to support artists by government, others say that the money ought to be spent for health and educational aspects. In my view, although investing on art can promote culture, I believe that it should be utilized to support educations and increase people’s health because educated society might support artists.

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living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as parctical problems. to what extent do you agree or dis agree with this statement

there is no a doubt that there are many people having huge issue when they traying to communicate with others in the city by any foreign language. while some people had super exciting when they dealing with any person in second language, however, this essay will focus on some points for both opinions and at the end i will express my expectations obviously.

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Some people think that cities are the best place others prefer to live in country. Compare the advantages and disadvantages of living in the city to living in the countryside.

It is always debatable issue whether live in city or village. Some people say that metropolitan places are the best for living while others consider that countryside is far better to live. This trend has advantage as well as disadvantages. This essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.

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Some people think that the best way to succeed is to get a university education, while others disagree and say that it is no longer true nowadays. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

There are opposite views that in order to be successful, higher education is not necessary. While it is true in some cases, I still think that studying in university benefits more in terms of being reassured to acquire proper-paid jobs.

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Some people think that job satisfaction is more important than job security. Others think that people cannot expect to enjoy a job and having a permanent job is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion

The satisfaction of occupation is more crucial than occupation security for several individuals, while others argue that permanent work is more essential because people cannot look forward to enjoying the job. In my opinion, I believe that job satisfaction is important because it makes the employee more productive and have good performance of their task, while permanent job is substantial for financial stability. There are two contrasting views will discuss in this essay.

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New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

There is an ongoing debate surrounding whether the changes in the way children spending their spare times due to modern technologies are beneficial or not. This writer holds a notion that the drawbacks of being addicted to computer games is outweighed by the benefits of the diversity of hobbies and the easy access to modern entertainments.

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An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What can be done to deal with this situation?

Nations with excellent life conditions receive more and more highly-educated migrants from countries with low economic conditions, and this movement not only causes low welfare in origin locations, but also makes targeted places overpopulated. In order to solve this issue certain improvements need to be made in both type of countries.

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Opinion With internet improvements, people can leave views or opinions on certain goods or services that they have purchased. Is it a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, with the new developments, individuals can leave their comments or opinions on certain products or services that they have bought. There might be some drawbacks of this phenomenon, however, This essay firmly believes that this could benefit people, because of the feedbacks that are essential in the diffusion of companies' reputation, and the truth about quality which can save many customers from being deceived.

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Opinion School Children should choose the subjects they study from a young age and stop doing subjects they find uninteresting." How much do you agree with this opinion and why? Give reasons and examples to support your answer.

Nowadays, many believe that children should select subjects they study from a young age, and cease to learn subjects they consider uninterisiting. This essay entirely agrees with this statement, because of the intention that drives them to learn what they want, and a deep dedication of time which is needed to master a certain skill.

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Despite huge improvements in healthcare, the overall standard of physical health in many developed countries is now falling. What are the reasons for this and how can the problem be tackled?

Although the health sectors are improving, the physical health of many people especially in developing nations is still declining. This essay will discuss how sedentary lifestyle and unhealthy eating habits can affect health of individuals and how can exercise help solve this.

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Buying things in internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries is becoming more popular. Do advantage of this outweigh disadvantage.

Technology plays a crucial role in human lives in modern era. As a result, these days people tend to purchase things from online shopping and it is quite popular across the globe. This trend has more benefits than drawbacks and this essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.

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Some people believe that children should obey rules and listen to their parents and teachers; Some others believe that less control will help children deal with their adult life. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Whether childern must adhere to their supervisers' obligations or not is an issue of public debate and concern. Although parents and teachers aim for planning the best life for their loving ones, it is of the most importance to consider their freedom to not invaided. In the following essay, I will argue why youngesters should be free to decide for themselve, despite the unevideble role of nuclear family and authorities.

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Many university students want to learn about different subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others feel it is important to give all their time and attention to studying for their qualification.

What students should study in university that has been a long debate among people. Many people believe that students should devote themselves on gathering knowledge apart from major subject, while others believe that student should concentrate on major subjects to become qualified. In my opinion, i mostly support that it is important to study as much as possible by keeping perfect major subject knowledge.

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Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

It is true that in our contemporary era, celebrities receive too much attention from media. For this reason, some people argue that this phenomena has detrimental impact on children , while others believe that It can be beneficial in many cases . In this essay , I will explicate both stances before presenting my consensus on the latter view.

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Some people prefer full-time jobs because they offer stability. Other people prefer casual jobs because of the freedom they offer. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Something that everyone will agree about that we need to work to earn money and to meet our financial commitments. While some people prefer a casual or part-time job, I believe the full-time job is better than casual.

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Every year more and more students choose to study online rather than attend classes on campus. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Higher university students are now opting to recieve education through virtual lessons rather than take said lessons on traditional classrooms. This could be caused by the accesibility of virtual classes, as well as the popular use of digital platforms. Consequently, the solutions to this issues includes making attendance to the campus obligatory, as well as to adapt classrooms to a much modern setting.

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