IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 398

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Director wants to shoot a film in your city Suggest a place Why is it fascinating What time is it best to shoot

I am writing this letter to recommend you one beautiful spot in my city that in my perspective will be a good fit for your movie. First of all, I want to thank you for selecting my hometown to be shown in your movie, this will prove beneficial for my city’s tourism and economy. The place I want to highlight is the XXX Park at the top of Auora Hill in the heart of the city.

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Some people think that people should choose their job based on income in order to provide security for their family. Do you think money is an important factor when choosing a job? What other factors should be considered?

In the modern era, due to increase in prices of every essential thing need to surive a majorit of individuals insist that, folks must take a job which provide a good and stable salary to provide security to their family members. It is true that money is a very essential factor in choosing a job and I agree with this view. Hence, my stance is further elaborated in the upcoming paragraphs as well as several other things must be taken into consideration when applying for a Job.

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Some people think that libraries are a waste of resources and money so computers should replace them. However, others do not agree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

Certain individuals believe that computers should substitute libraries because investment in libraries is draining resources. However, others suggest the opposite and also want the libraries to be preserved. From my perspective, the libraries are a great sources of knowledge and computers cannot make them redundant.

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Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives?

As it is enunciated by a proportion, it is essential to make scientific discoveries by using fauna while, others contradictory viewpoint, it is illegal and it has a plethora of drawbacks on animals. Albeit there is a dichotomy of view on this concern ,these two apprehensions have various merits and demerits .In my view of point, some scientific investigations ought to be done by using fauna. I will provide interesting justifications and exemplify essential elements to justify my perspective.

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In some cultures, children are told they can achieve anything if they work hard. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

In many cultures, a common refrain that people tell their children is “you can do anything if you work hard enough”. This message gives optimism to the children and gives a complex picture, but this may sound optimistic but also sounds unrealistic and they could result in disappointment.

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Some cities create housing areas by providing taller buildings. Others create housing by building houses on a wider area of land. What solution is better?

A vast majority of cities are constucting residental zones by constructing high-rise buildings, while others creating housing by houses which is located on a wider area of land. Skyscrapers better, as they provided services which can help individuals to save their time and money, while individual place of residence requires a good amount of attention.

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Nowadays, more people move away from their friends and families for work. Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In the historical period we are living in, many people are moving to another city or country that can give him/her a working opportunity. Regarding this topic, there are different opinions in favour and contrast. However, in my opinion, advantages outweigh drawbakcs.

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Some children start school at 7 while others start school at 4. Does starting school at a young age have more advantages than disadvantages?

Nowadays, starting school at a young age being popular in some parents' decision. However, the others think that children should start their first school at older age like 7. I agree with the parents who decide to let their childer turn into school since younger age because it gaves them more advantages. In this essay, I will discuss about the benefits of this situation which outweigh the drawbacks.

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Lack of fresh water is becoming a global issue of increasing importance. what problems does this shortage case? what measures could be taken to overcome these problems?

In a modern society, problem of shortage aqua pura is becoming more significant and importance of this is increasing. The main cause of lack of pure water is pollution of resources which was giving drinking water to population, and the best solution for this problem is to help people to understand the significance of water by providing video clips about this catastrophe.

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In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?

In many places, people are in dire need of new homes, however the only place to built them is available in countryside. While few persons think it is not a great idea to construct new houses in the countryside. I think this is true because if people move to countryside there will be no land left for farming and as well as for the domestic animals. And it also leads towards environmental problems. I discuss my opinion in the following paragraphs.

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Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that the solution to crime reduction is to sentence them for longer periods of time. On the other hand, many argue that other methods can be used for a decrease in illegal actions. My belief stands with the latter because the former opinion is useless and prisoners can be taught to serve in other fields and professions.

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The increasing demand for oil and gas has made it necessary to look for these energy sources in remote and untouched natural places. Do you think the advantages of locating oil and gas in these areas outweigh the disadvantages of damaging these places?

Currently, the online access to highly demanding, scarce, natural materials gets more popular because of the growing demand. In my opinion, placing energy sources in intangible areas brings more benefits than drawbacks.

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development

People movement from rural areas to cities are becoming popular in many countries across the globe. In my opinion, this is a positive development because urbanization will reduce the number of jobless people and the fact that those people tend to help their family in terms of financial matter.

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Some people think that in order to prevent illness and disease, governments should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems. To what extent do you agree to disagree with this statement?

In the contemporary era, certain individuals argue that addressing environmental contamination and residential accommodation should be prioritized by authorities to prevent diseases. From my perspective, I strongly agree with this standpoint, further believing that education should be included. This following essay will support my viewpoint.

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Some people say in order to prevent illness and disease, governments should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems. To what extent do you or disagree and agree?

Some people argue that governments must reduce air pollution and housing problems to prevent illness and disease. From my perspective, I agree totally with that ideas and will give the reason to tackle the problems.

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A REPORT INDICATED THAT MANY CHILDREN BETWEEN 7 AND 11 SPEND TOO MUCH TIME WATCHING TELEVISION AND / OR PLAY VIDEO GAMES. HOW DOES THE PROBLEM AFFECT THE CHILDREN? WHAT MEASURES CAN BE TAKEN TO CONTROL IT?

Now-a-days, younger generations are addicted to the mobile phones. A survey mentioned that several kids from the age 7 to 11 invest more time on watching TV and/or video games. It causes several issues for their children but it is easy to solve. In this essay, I will discuss the problem along with solution for children addiction.

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Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer. What, in your opinion, should be the nwin function of a university?

Nowadays, university policies can be divided into two different aspects. One aspect focuses on supporting students' needs, while the other emphasizes the importance of acquiring work skills. Other people believe study knowledge is best of main way. This essay is going to discuss both point and my opinion.

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Nowadays many people prefer to shop in supermarkets rather than small shops or local markets? Is this positive or negative for development? Discuss and give your opinion.

Due to increased modernization, there are so many supermarkets building present in the market in addition to small shops. Nowadays, people are more diverting towards big malls, such that the local marketers are highly affected. This essay will discuss not only the positive impacts and the negative impacts of this development, but also comprises of my own perspective.

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In many countries crime rates among teenagers are higher than among other groups.What are the causes for this problem and what can be done to solve this?

In the modern era, crime rates is increasing and most of youth involed in it rather than other age groups. The main thing is that juveniles do not aware from this wrong activities. There are various reason of enchaning it which I will explain in the upcoming paragraphs with solutions.

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Some people prefer to relax by doing physical activities, while others choose mental activities such as crossword puzzles or chess. Discuss the both views and include your own opinion.

In today's world, people are exposed to a variety of challenges in their lives. To handle this load of mental burden, people have to come up with solutions to relax. where as some people would prefer doing mental activities to get away from stress, others may like physical activities better. This essay discusses both points of view and states my personal opinion as well.

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