IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 402

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Can money bring happiness to people? Should people rather focus on moral values instead?

The concept of happiness breaks into countless interpretations, making it impossible to quantify. People generally fall into two groups regarding the relationship between money and happiness, sparking endless debates. In my perspective, money serves as a tool to achieve the peak of happiness. If you aim to maintain good health to cherish moments with your family and experience joy, money will become indispensable for securing that health.

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Human activities have negative effects on the plant and animal species. Some people think it is too late to do anything about this problem. Others believe that effective measures can be taken to improve this question. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many believe people have created bad impact to many species in plant and animal and it is too late to tackle this problem. On the other hand, others think there are solutions to solve this. This essay will discuss further these two views.

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Many think that secondary and high school students should learn money management as it is an important life skill. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is an opinion that starting from the middle school pupils should study fundamental financy. I strongly agree with this statement, hence money management it is important part of adulthood, and understanding of proper use of income would be beneficial for individuals.

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These days, in many counties fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools. What are the reasons for this, and how could the problem be solved?

It is believed that there is a shortage of secondary school teachers in numerous nations as the less number of candidates are interested to become tutors in these schools. A number of factors are responsible for the aforementioned phenomenon. This essay would intend to discuss the same along with effective measures to tackle it in the subsequent paragraphs.

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Some people believe teenagers should focus on all subjects equally, whereas other people think that they should concentrate on only those subjects that they find interesting and they are best at. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The debate over whether teenagers ought to allocate equal attention to all academic subjects or solely focus on those they find intriguing and excel in is a contentious one. This essay will explore both perspectives, ultimately endorsing the latter viewpoint, which emphasizes specialized focus based on individual interests and strengths.

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The most important aim of sience should be to improve people's live. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ?

Nowadays. with the development of technology, the sience also enhance to serve the society and play a huge role in this system. So, I wholeheartedly concur with this issue.

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Since most information about culture and history can be found online, museums are no longer needed. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays due to the development of modern technologies almost everyone can see exhibition online, therefore museums are longer useful for the society. I strongly disagree with this statement, hence new technologies extend access to the knowledge, however does not take the job of museums, hence they can provide totaly different level of emergening in history.

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The news media have become more influential in people’s lives, some people think it’s a negative development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The role of the news media plays a vital role in shaping people's perceptions of the world. It is also undeniably true that the more persuasive the news content, the more easily people can be influenced. However, some people perceive such phenomena as negative developments. I strongly disagree with this view because the influence of the news not only raises one's awareness but also increases one's critical thinking skills.

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Some people think computers and the Internet are more important in child’s education. Others believe that schools and teachers are essential for children to learn. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In developing epochs, modern technologies are becoming popular. Some humans believe that social media and computers are crucial in children's studies. However, others view pupils are able to study positive impact in schools and with teachers. This essay discusses how both are essential for effective learning.

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With the advancement in healthcare and technology, people now have a longer lifespan. Some argue that the retirement age which is normally 60 to 65 years of age should be adjusted to 70 years or even higher. To what extent do you agree with this opinion? Give reason and example to state your stance

It is undoubtedly true that the emergence of technology has a significant bearing on almost every aspect of people's lives, including health. With this in mind, while the majority of seniors usually retire at the age of 60 to 65 years old, some people contend that there should be an adjustment to the retirement age requirement of up to 70 years. Although health constraints are no longer a concern due to technological advancement, I strongly disagree with this view because it could be seen as human exploitation and there will be massive shifts in the workforce regulations.

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Weddings are more expensive in many countries nowadays when compared to the past. What is the reason behind this? Is this a positive or a negative development?

Marriages used to be an ordinary event in the past. However, it has become expensive in modern times. In the following paragraph, I will discuss the causes behind this trend, as well as the positive impacts of it.

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Some people prefer to carefully plan activities in their free time others think it’s a waste of time. Discuss both views and give your answer?

For some people planing is a key aspect in every event, while for others it seems like unnecessary and time consuming activity. Plan is a step by step strict algorithm, and people can easily follow it to accomplish a task. However, on the other hand, people think that it is mostly unreal to create a plan that will work out with high probability. In my opinion, plan can help to concentrate and control situation.

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Some people believe that the government should fund art and culture, while others think that it should only fund sciences. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that government funding should be consider not to be used to support art and culture while other's opinions say that gives support for cultural activities has a positive impact on the population and culture. I believe that supporting art and culture through government funding would help the nation to protect our art and culture.

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Some governments provide financial assistance for retired, unemployed and disabled citizens. In other countries, families provide support for these people. Discuss both systems and give your opinion about which one you think is better

It is well knonw that in some countries, Their communities has special needs such as those who are retired, without a job, or mentally and physically disabled are receiving financial assistance from their government. However, in some other countries, this group of people are living without any subsidy and are forced to rely on their families. This essay will discuss both these political systems and provide reasons for why the system that provides financial assistance is better for the individuals as well as the society.

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Do you think it is better for students to work before their university studies? Why? Use reasons and specific examples to support your choice.

It is debatable whether individuals should work before entering university. I believe

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As the internet becomes more popular, newspapers are becoming a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people argue that reading newspapers is a thing of the past and reading news on the internet is becoming more common these days. I completely agree with this opinion. In this essay, I will explain why I believe that newspaper is do not popular and the Internet is main form for most people.

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some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as unsatisfactory job or shortage of money.others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.disscus both views and give your own opinion.

Several individuals think that it is better not to deny an interesting work environment or having less money, while other people say that we live just one time, so we should try and do our best in any area in our life. I firmly agree with the second point view. Because as we all know, no pain, no gain, it is better to work hard.

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Nowadays, many people change jobs quite regularly, rather than working in the company for their entire careers. Why do you think this is happening? How can companies keep their workers?

Most individuals prefer to change their workplaces rather than stay in just only one company throughout their occupation life in these times. This essay will discuss the main causes of this situation including constant salary and lack of promotion. This essay will also suggest solutions to these problems including to provide rewards and higher salaries.

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

It is obvious that in the coming years, all buses, cars and trucks will be without drivers as technology and artificial intelligence have been gradually devoloping day by day. Passengers will travel by these vehicles every day. While these transports seem extremely useful and full of advantages, however some drawbacks are also available.

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Some people want governments to spend money looking for life on other planets. Others, however, think this is a waste of public money when there are so many problems on earth. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A school of thought holds that the authorities should invest more money in space research into another habitable planet. However, I am firmly convinced that that amount of money should be used to deal with current issues on earth. In this following essay, I will discuss both sides as well as outline my own opinion.

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