IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 404

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more importtant to give all their time and attention to studying for a qulification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, many people in over the world special a lot of time using social media to keep in touch with other people and get news events. In this writer will talk about the advantages that outweigh the disadvantages.

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some people think that individuals today are more dependent on each other. Others believe people have become more independent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some believe that society has become more interconnected, leading to increased reliance on each other. Others argue that technological advancements and modern lifestyles have fostered greater independence.

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Some people think that individuals today are more dependent on each other. Others believe people have become more independent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Recent readers indicate that modern communities more rely on others. Meanwhile, others believe that the residents live independently nowadays. This writer completely agrees with the statement that complex life makes people become more separated from each other and will discuss both standpoints in the following essay.

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Students should pay the full cost for their own study, because university education benefits individuals rather than society? To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people believe that students ought to spend money tuition fees, because university education can bring advantages to individuals rather than society. I totally agree with this statement and the reasons why will be outlined in this essay.

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Some people think that teenagers should make their own decisions, while others think that they are not mature enough and parents should make decisions for them. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Whether parents or teenagers should be responsible for making decisions bears some consideration. This essay agrees that it is more beneficial for young people to make their own life choices due to succeeding in life and taking responsibility for their actions rather than allowing parents to control important decisions.

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some people think that individuals today are more dependent on each other. Others believe people have become more independent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Whether people becoming more independent or dependent on other individuals is a highly subjective discussion point. However, from prior experience, it is more clear to know that people are becoming more dependent due to living condition, despite those who believe that people are more autonomous to become mature.

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Topic: In some countries, an increasing number of children are overweight or obese as a result of eating too much fast food. Banning fast food from school canteens is the best way to fight this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It has always been a controversial issue whether lots of pupils are fat as they are keen on eating unhealthy food in some countries, thus fast food court should be banned at schools to tackle this problem. In my opinion, however we are not allow to prevent students’ rights, these kinds of methods have to done at schools.

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Several people assert that the main cause of crime is an economically disadvantaged background. However, others say that crime is caused by a person's nature. Discuss both ideas and give your own opinion.

There has been a divergence about a belief in the staple reason of crime since several years ago. Some people believe that the most significant reason of crime is related to a person’s financial condition. However, there is also an opinion that the staple cause of it is influenced by person’s nature. Extensive research has not been able to conclud a definite answer about the cause of crime.

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Some educational experts say that children have to do homework. However others say that homework does more harm than good. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Several educational experts believe the importance of homework for children. However, there are also some people who argue that homework is not beneficial for them at all. This argument has been ongoing in modern society after we started to consider more efficient ways to teach students. To consider this divergence, it is required to realize how homework effects on children’s life.

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Nowadays, there are a large number of coffee shops and fast-food vendors on high streets and in town centres. Why are there so many of these outlets? What effect is this having on the society?

In this modern era, the popularity of unhealthy food is skyrocketing per day. There are numerous hawkers selling fast-food as well as a lot number of coffee shops in every corner of city including high streets and central part of town. Therefore, the reason behind the increased number of these outlets and its effect on the community are listed below in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high level of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Today, we can see that there is an increasing number in disease all around the world. Many people said that this is happening because of there are plenty of provisions and beverages with high sugar level are being sold in the market and one solution that can fix this problem is to sell it with higher price. In my opinion, I personally agree that this is the best way to prevent more health problems coming due to the high level of sugar that people consume on their food.

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In many countries there has been an increase in social problems involving teenagers in recent years. Many people believe that this is due to modern lifestyles because parents spend more and more time at work and have less time to supervise their children. To what extent do you believe this is true?

In modern society, it is clear that there are large number of crimes caused by teenagers. Some people assert that it causes by lack of supervising children by them parents due to they have to spend them time more at a workplacement according to the cost of living, it has skyrocketed. However, the others believe that there are another reasons that create social problems.

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Crime rate in most countries is often higher in urban areas than rural areas. What are the causes and solutions?

Crime has been increasing in cities where is overcrowded. This is mainly because of large number of people and unemployment in developed areas. There are a number of solutions which should be implement to deal with rising crime in urban areas.

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Most people prefer ready to eat food outside of their home rather than homemade food nowadays. Do you think this has more advantages or disadvantages?

In this modern world, a large number of people going to look for food outside of their flat rather than consume homemade food. Based on my perspective, these argument the disadventages outweigh than the adventages, in this essay I am going to shown several adventages and disadventages from these argue.

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There is a lot of pressure on young people today to succeed academically. As a result, some people believe that non-academic subjects, such as physical education and cookery, should be removed from the school syllabus so that children can concentrate on academic work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

young individuals nowadays face significant academic pressure to excel.

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20.Some people think that the government should ban dangerous sports, but others think that people should have freedom to do whatever sport activities they choose. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The popularity of extreme sports is booming dramatically day by day. Regarding that, a mass of the population opines that this kind of sports should be prohibited by authorities. However, some folks believe that it is individual's right to participate in their desire sports. I am inclined towards people's autonomy to choose their favourite game. I In the present essay, I will discuss both the sides before giving a constructive feedback.

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The issue of gay marriage remains controversial. Some people think that this trend has adverse effects on the society while others believe that it is seen as a natural trend and right for people to choose this type of marriage. Should gay marriage be legal? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

People seem to have contradictory views regarding whether gay marriage has become reasonable. I believe that the latter point of view is more convincing and applicable in most contexts. I fully support such a measure to do. In my viewpoint, this can bring about many positive outcomes.

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Some people think young people should be required to have full time education until they are at least 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this essay I'll be sharing my opinion on a certain topic which is about people thinking that young individuals should have full time education until they are at least 18 years old. Well, I think that finishing and focusing on your education is the most important task or goal to be achieved before turning 18, but this doesn't mean that people or young individuals below 18 should only be focusing on their education because for someone to have somewhat of a good future ahead I think that accuiring such skills is as important if not more important than education, because in this new generation most people have the same amount of educational level and what seperates the successful man from normal people is his uniqueness and unusual knowledge and what I mean by that is learning to do another things or skills apart from education. For example, practicing certain sports and maybe having the potential of going professional in these sports such as football, basketball, or whatever someone...

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Computers are replacing humans. Do you agree or disagree?

There is no denying the fact that technology are increasing daily. Some people deem that computers are taking the lead from humans. While, there is also an argument that opposes it. This essay will discuss my point of view and express some reasons. From my perspective, computers are only a helping method for humans. Which, is immposible to say that it is replacing us.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Good education is what makes us qualified for the job that we are interested in but getting education dosen't mean only going to good university. Some students prefer improve their skills, learn how to work with information in addition to their main subjects, but some of them thinks that the main thing is getting good grades. In this essay we will discuss both these opinions and show their advantages and drawbacks.

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