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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Nowadays, many people used to take a year off between finishing school and going to university. For many people, this situation looks like a normal practice. However, there are both pros and cons of deciding to do this. In this essay, I will discuss some of the reasons why it is becoming popular to have the year off.

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Some people think that manufacturers and shopping malls should sell fewer packaged products while others argue that people have the responsibility to buy products with less packaging. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

It is contentious that commercial markets and manufacturing facifilities should cut back on the products with packaging, whilst some presume that each customer should be responsible for buying less that sort of products dut to urgently environmental issues such soil erosion and water contamination. This author partly holds a belief that this contributes mainly to shopping facilities which are the key production of goods as well as their pivotal roles in atracting people to buy less packaged ones.

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In many countries, children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In some nations, children are working for paid work. Many people think this has no right, while some others argue this kind of work can give the children a meaningful work experience. Although working as children could help them to get a job in the future, I believe that it should be a crime regarding child labour.

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he tendency of news reporters in the media to focus more on problems and emergencies than on positive developments is harmful to the individuals and the society as a whole. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

It is claimed that media are more likely to concentrate on reporting news that contain emergency and negative information but not the positive ones about modernization is dangerous for the society and people. This writer argue that individual should know about negative news in order to raise awareness but will not lead to any harmful consequences because of the media’s notification.

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To succeed in a business, one needs to know math, rather than soft skills and luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Many people nowadays have a tendency to open a company and run their own business, especially when they are born in a well-off family, having a quite considerable amount of money and be swayed or even defrauded by other people. However, some people do not know what abilities they need to pick up to do well in trading . From my standpoint, both mathematics, softskill and good fortune are necessary factors that we ought to anticipate before setting up a business.

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Some think“vertical City”is the best where people live and work in tall buildings.Others think“Horizontal City”is better where there is few tall buildings.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some individuals believe that dwellers ought to prioritize living and working in vertical city, while other people think horizontal city where have few buildings supersedes the vertical one. From my vantage point, although vertical city have some benefits for dwellers, I consider that horizontal city is more comfortable for individuals habiting and working.

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Some people think it is better for one single legal system throughout the world. Other say countries should have their own law. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some individuals argue for a unified legal system, while others believe it is better to have specific rules for each country. Although people have adapted to different rights in each state, having a single legal system worldwide also has its benefits.

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Robots and artificial intelligence are being developed to replace human in the workplace. Why is this happening? Do you think this will have a positive or negative impact on society?

There is a belief that artificial intelligence and robotic machines are gradually taking human roles in the workplace due to their impressing productivity. According to numerous advantages, this writer believes that this development positively enhances our lives.

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Some people say that to benefit the development of a child, the mother and father should take parenting classes. To what extent you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays people pay more attention to the development of children. They always concern about the school education, but family education is as important as school education, so some people advice parents to take courses for learning how to treat their children. I agree with this idea since behaviors of parents can have a big influence on young generations.

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Advertisements are increasingly pervasive in people's lives. Explain what problems this trend may cause, and suggest some possible solutions.

In this digital era, the number of advertisement that caught our attention on a daily basis has become more overwhelming in recent years. This essay will discuss the cause to this issue and come up with several solutions.

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Some young people are leaving the country side to lives in cities and towns,leaving only old people in the country side. What problems are caused by this issue. What can be done to solve this issue

Movement from rural to urban areas has been witnessed lately especially by the youths and only the aged are left back in the village. As a result, the towns are having overcrowding and increased cases of insecurity. The government should think of adding industries to carb the cases of employment and also loan the youngstars with funds that will enable them to employ themselves in the village to reduce the migration to the cities.

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Some people think that manufacturers and shopping malls should sell fewer packaged products while others argue that pople have the responsibilty to buy products with less packaging. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many individuals believe that packaged products should be sold less by manufacturers and shopping malls, in contrast, other people dispute that it is necessary for people's responsibilities when buying products with less packaging. In my opinion, I entirely agree with the belief that we should buy products which have less packaging for several reasons and also discuss both advantages and disadvantages.

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Some people think that manufacturers and shopping malls should sell fewer packaged products while others argue that pople have the responsibilty to buy products with less packaging. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many individuals believe hat packaged products should be sold fewer by the manufacturers and shopping malls, in contrast, other people dispute that it is necessary for people's responsibilities when buying products with less packaging. In my opinion, I entirely agree with the belief that we should buy products which are less packaging for several reasons and also discuss both advantages and disadvantages.

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It is widely believed that children of different levels of intelligence should be taught together, while others think that more intelligent children should be taught separately. Discuss and present your opinion.

teaching is an important service that should be available for all children. especially, at a very young age. Some people think of different teaching and communication ways for those in their early education years. Responsible teachers think they should separate the kids according to how good they do in the class. This could seem a good idea but it has lots of drawbacks.

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The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the causes and solution of this disturbing trend.

In recent years, the number of unfit children in Western countries has been reported to rise unexpectedly in the last one decade. Therefore, in this essay, I will discuss some causes of why this happen and the solution to prevent it.

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It is a common aspiration among many young people to run their own business, rather than work for an employer.

Nowadays, the world changes significantly due to technology affecting people’s characteristics and perspectives. One of the biggest change is young people prefer to manage their own business rather than to be an employee, resulting from environment in the present time. However, this phenomenon cause disadvantages in terms of pressure and risk

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Nowadays childrens watches a lot of TV and play video games. however, some people think that these activities are not good for a child mental health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People hold distinctive opinions regarding a debate which is linked to mental health of a child. Some people argue that watching TV and playing video games are not useful for children's health, others claim that these activities are beneficial for offsprings's intellectual health. In my opinion, although there are plausible arguments to support this perspective, there are also reasons to disagree with it.

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Some people believe that non-academic subjects at school should be removed from the syllabus so that children can concentrate wholly on academic subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

According to some people, art and music classes should be replaced by more utilitarian subjects like science and computer classes. While I understand the importance of equipping children with skills that are immediately applicable in their lives, I firmly believe that music education holds significant value and should not be discarded.

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Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on children. Do you agree or disagree?

In today’s modern world, computers are an essential part of everyday life. Around the globe, the computer age is encouraging children to use computers from a very young age. For all-round development, it is necessary for every child to participate in various well-balanced activities. But in my opinion, children who use the computer daily are actually developing critical skills and preparing for future success. Children who use computers grow personally, academically and professionally.

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Parents often buy their children many toys. What are the advantages and disadvantages of children having a large number of toys?

In the contemporary era, kids get toys to play often provided by their parents in large number. This could result in some upsides and downsides which will be discussed further in this essay.

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