IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 405

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Do children behave better when they are physically punished or rewarded?

Raising a child to be a good citizen is a big responsibility. Some people believe that physically enforcing kids will help them to become a better person in the future rather than nurturing them in a positive way. I strongly advocate in growing little hands with full of love, respect, support, and compassion as punishing them at such a young age will impact their brain very badly. Therefore, positive environment is a fundamental right for every little kid rather than threatening surroundings.

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The gap between rich and poor is growing. What problems does this create? What can be done to tackle this.

In this modern era, there are many social spaces between the wealthy and the poor people in our society. This essay will discuss about the causes and solution of this situation.

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Some people believe that studying abroad is important because it expands a person's knowledge and understanding of the world. Others feel that it is better to study at home because that is the best way to prepare for a career in the student's own country. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Studying abroad and opting for domestic education both offer distinctive advantages, igniting debates regarding their merits among a large number of people. While some support the idea of studying in one’s home country for career prospects, other argue for a foreign degree and a better understanding of the world. In this essay, I will explore both perspectives. Although I generally agree that studying abroad is often considered to be a great way to broaden the horizons of students from all over the world, I don’t feel like it should be a must for all students.

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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Few humans are in the favour of expending their lives performing the exact activities and ignore to do different activities. However, the others think that change in life aways comes with benefical improvements. In my perspective, a person will get bored with doing the same activity and can be stuck in his life by avoiding change. Everyone should know that how changes brings positive impact and happiness in our lives.

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Advertising has become an unavoidable part of everyone's lives. Some people say that advertising is positive part of our lives while others say it is a negative one. Discuss both views include your opinion.

It is considered by some that broadcasting has become a downside parts of their lives, while there are others who think that it is an upside section of their lives. A lot can be inferred from the way of their thinking. This interpretation might give us about their personalities. Although I agree that it is important to display products or services, I cannot ignore the negative sides.

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In many developing countries, there is a problem with declining quality of air and water from both industry and construction.What measures could be taken to prevent this.

It is important to consider that a great number of advanced countries are facing with poor quality of air and water which arise from industry and building sector. This essay will explane some steps that could be taken to avoid such problem.

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For school children, their teachers have more influence on their intelligence and social development than their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

For millions of children, school become the first step of their education. Some people might think that nowadays teachers have a bigger influence on students' intelligence and social skills than their parents. I'm totally disagree with this extent and going to explain why in this essay.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: For school children, their teachers have more influence on their intelligence and social development than their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

For a millions of children school become a first step of their education. Some people might think that nowadays teacher have a bigger influence on students intelligence and social skills than their parent. I'm tottaly disagree with this extend and going to explain why in this essay.

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Many argue that globalization has significantly contributed to economic growth and cultural exchange, while others believe it has led to increased inequality and the erosion of local traditions. What is your opinion on the impact of globalization? Do you think it is a force for positive change or does it pose more challenges than benefits? Support your viewpoint with relevant examples and experiences."

There is a prevalent belief among many that globalization has significantly benefited the economy and facilitated cultural appreciation, while others argue that its negative impacts outweigh the positives. This essay contends that globalization is a progressive force, contributing to a more interconnected and comfortable world.

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families have more people in the past because they have more children. Do you think there are more advantages than disadvantages to being in a large family in the past

The number of children in families has been decreasing in the recent years. Although this pattern results in a sense of lonelines, especially if a person does not have any siblings, I believe that advantages of this phenomenon outweigh the drawbacks, as it provides to kids better alternatives in their education, along with building deeper relationships with their parents.

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Write about the following topic. The internet has vastly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

The internet become the fastest mode to share information. I think it is a better chance in the massive technology era, and this essay will explain supporting data for this statement.

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More and more people today expect to get what they want instantly (goods, services, news), without having wait. Why is this? Do you think expectation is a positive or negative development?

according this era, many individuals achieve their needs such as goods, services, and news in instant ways. In my point of view, it depends on the situation and condition. Sometimes it is a good choice to get a big chance when the deadline distracts you, however, it is a worse habit which can affect your personality.

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Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobsfor personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Today it is common belief that there are some requierments to mention about private information when applying for job whilst some think that it is not neccessary. I firmly believe that it is totally appropriate for employers to be aware of social characteristics of their employees. Both views will be discussed in this essay.

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Some people think living in big cities is bad for people's health. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Big city life dramatically affects our health, mainly due to the air pollution and different lifestyles compared to rural areas. Based on my experience of living in 3 different cities I support that idea.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, we see plenty of advertising in channels such as billboards, televisions, radios, and particularly, online media and can’t inevitable to see some people spend a short time seeing and can’t not aware subject that marketers communicate. In my opinion, influencers play a significant part in persuading consumers to purchase things.

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1-In the recent years, television has contributed the most to changing people’s quality of life. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

I have 2 different opinions about the contributions that Television made on nowdays society.

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Teenagers are now facing educational, social, and commercial pressures. What are the causes of these pressures? Is it ever beneficial for teenagers to develop under such pressure?

People have different views about whether extreme sports should be prohibited. In my opinion, people should be free to choose the activities they prefer as long as they are aware of the risks associated.

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Some people prefer working in a group while others work alone. Discuss both sides.

In this modern era, individuals are willing to work in a team while others are looking for solo jobs. This essay will discuss both points of view and examples.

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Government should spend more money on medical research and less on researching the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The government's allocation of funds towards medical research should take precedence over environmental research, according to the prompt. However, it's crucial to recognize the intertwined nature of environmental and medical concerns, especially in the context of epidemics. Thus, I respectfully disagree with the notion that medical research should receive greater emphasis to the exclusion of environmental research.

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Today, many people are suffering from health problems because of fast food the Government should tax higher fast food what is your opinion about this?

In this era, various fast foods have been introduced to the world as the technologies are advancing over the centuries.However, I totally disagree with the idea that the government should tax higher fast food and I will discuss more on why I believe that.

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