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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people think that outdoor activities are more beneficial for children’s development than playing computer games. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Issues related to the developement in children are frequently discussed these days. It is argued that playing computer games are less beneficial for kids's improvement than outdoor activities. I partially agree with this assertion and this essay will provide futher exlpanations and examples to support my viewpoint.

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As computers translate quickly and accurately, learning foreign languages is a waste of time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

According to some, online translation is swift and popular with its accuracy and they consider that learning a new language is a waste of time. While some individuals speculate the first perspective In my opinion, people should learn foreign language by themselves. In this essay, I will elaborate the aspects of computer translation and learning it by myself in the following paragraphs.

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Topic 8: Students should be taught academic knowledge so that they can pass exams, and skills such as cooking or dressing should not be taught. To what extent do you agree/disagree?

There are a number of arguments to support the idea that students should learn academic knowledge to pass exams rather than taking practical skills such as cooking or dressing. I partially agree with the idea.

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Topic: Today, fashion is becoming more and more important in choosing clothes. What are the reasons? Do you think the trend is positive or negative?

These days, with an increasing number of clothing brands, it has become common to rely on fashion while selecting clothes. The main reason for this trend is that people are driven by the idea to follow the fashion trends promoted by the marketing. I truly believe that relying on these trends only prevents individuals from being unique, and this essay will explore the reasons for my viewpoint.

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Countries with long working days are more successful economically, but there are some negative social consequences. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some countries have longer working days while some have shorter. Their GDP levels differ as well. Is there really is a relation between the duration of working days and economic success? To a large degree I agree that there is. However, there are some negative outcomes followed.

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Today more and more tourist or visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the advantages and disadvantages for tourist who visit such places?

It is believed that in the modern era the number of tourist who are induljed with harsh environments such as desert and south pole are significantly increasing. There are some advanteges and drawbacks for this development which are going to be discussed in the following paragraphs.

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In today’s world, private companies rather than the government pay for and conduct most scientific research. Do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages

There are two controversial perspectives heating a debate over the fact in this day and age that most scientific research is financed and carried out by private firms instead of the governor. In my opinion, the benefits of this can overshadow its cons

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

There is no doubt that a parental figure play a significant role in the life of a child. It is a paramount duty of parents and teachers to teach the youngsters about the difference between good and bad behaviour. Some people believe that any form of punishment is a part of learning, while many vehemently oppose this idea. I disagree with this belief to some extent that a punishment such as physical abuse is the only solution to make them learn the distinction between right and wrong. This essay will expounds on both sides of the arguments and will also discuss the repercussions of punishment.

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n some countries, most people prefer to rent their homes rather than buying them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a home?

There are those who have a positive attitude towards renting a home instead of owing a house in some countries. This essay will explore the benefits and drawbacks of renting a home, and I will express my position that buying houses advantages more for a longer life period, in terms of obtaining individuals'asset and personalising a home by indivdials' preferences.

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Some people believe that the government should spend more money to creat more art such as paintings and statues, in cities to make them a better place to live. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is conceived by some that devoting more budget to ornament cities with more artistic presentation can lead to living a better life. This essay firmly agrees with this notion due to several advantages of art, namely enhancing social skills and bringing income.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities.Others, however, say that this would have little affect on public health and other measure are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In this contemporary epoch, it has become a grave matter of concern whether sports activities should be surged or other measures should be adopted to ameliorate public health. In this essay, I will cast light on both perspectives before delivering my own opinion.

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Some countries invest in specialized training centers for top athletes rather than in public sports facilities. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

I guess that investing mostly in specialized training centres for top athletes is a negative development. That makes sport less popular and less accessible for other groups of individuals. In this essay, I'm going to explain my point of view.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

People find it difficult to spend their lives in a nation that they have to speak a foreign language and this not only can lead to having major issues in daily life, but also arrises some impracticalities in every-day life and I totally agree with this point of view because the key to express ourselves is done by appearing as an individual and language being a blocker indeed sabotages the thoughts of other people.

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As mass communication and transport continue to grow, societies are becoming more and more alike leading to a phenomenon known as globalisation. Some people fear that globalisation will inevitably lead to the total loss of cultural identity. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, when our society is in the stage of rapid transformation ,a tendency to increase in the amount of factors which lead to globalisation can be observed. It is agreed, that this issue can lead to the total loss of cultural identity,as cities and variety of nationalities grow significantly and rural areas appears to be less common. This essay,firstly,will discuss why mass communication and transport rise continuesly, followed by an analysis of consequences which can contribute to the negative development for culture.

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Nowadays online shopping is rapidly replacing physical shopping in stores. What are the positives and negatives of this development, in your opinion? Give some relevant examples.

Undeniable, online shopping has become highly popular amoung people these days. Despite the drawbacks, buying through the internet may have some adventages that can result in saveing time and wide variety options. This essay will discuss both pros and cons about electronic purchases after a logical conclusion.

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As computers translate quickly and accurately, learn foreign languages is waste of time. To what extend agree or disagree?

Some people think that as computers translate quickly and accurately, that is why, learn foreign languages is waste of time. Now I am going to discuss this essay.

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Dieting can change a person's life for the better or ruin one's health completely. What is your opinion?

It is true that changing eating habits in order to lose weight might consequance in one’s favor. However, unreasonable diets can have detrimental effects on people. Although I believe using a plan on food consumption provided by a specialist might improve our condition , I regard exercising as a more prominent factor.

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In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

It is true that nowadays legions of schools around the globe have faced serious issues with regards to students attitude. This essay will explaine two potential reasons and how they can be solved.

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Developments in science and technology have caused environmental problems.Some people think that a simpler way of life will protect the environment,whileothers believe that science and technology can solve environmental problems.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In the current century, science and technology are developing rapidly and there are new inventions and discoveries almost every year. Some people say that these developments are against the environment, while others believe that science improvement is actually beneficial for it. I am mostly inclined to agree with the former opinion, as in my point of view, the downfalls of technology outweights its benefits.

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What are the pros and cons of using public transport?

Nowadays, using a public transport is becoming increasingly popular. For many people, the usage it is so effective than utilizing a private vehicle. However, there are advantages and disadvantages related to it. In this essay, I will discuss some of the reasons why public transports are so popular and some of their drawbacks.

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