IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 439

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There are those believe that shopping nowadays is more convenient due to more advanced technology, while there are some not agreeing arguments for several reasons.

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Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cellphone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening.

In the last few years, automation has developed rapidly. It is good for us, on the contrary on the other hand, technology has many disadvantages. Hackers can now keep watch on people, such as stalking smartphones and computers. Most of the people are unaware and do not believe this. This essay discusses the merits and drawbacks of this machinery development.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Staying abroad and communicating using foreign language would become vital obstacles for social and practical aspects. This essay completely agrees with the statement because social and practical problems are influenced by the place where we are staying and the language we use.

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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Over the last few years, some people have thought that change is good for their lives, and always do some things that are very annoying, people cannot develop themselves and do not grow their careers. Therefore maybe people prefer to spend their lives doing the changes.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasis that their products are new in some way Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Although there are always basic standards to measure how good a product is, businesses nowadays heavily stress the more innovative aspects of their products. While this phenomenon can be explained by a fear of competition from similar products, I strongly believe that this poses serious threats for our society.

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Some people think that secondary or highschool student should be taught how to use money management as it is an important lifeskill. Do you agree or disagree with the statement?

It is argued that some individuals believe that the young students should know how to manage money during highschool , as it is a imperative lifeskill. This essay agree with the statement because it will teach students how to save money for their personal use and become a responsible child of their parent.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Enhancement in humanity’s lives should be the prior aim of science. The writer agrees with the mentioned opinion due to both direct and indirect contribution of scientist.

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Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to university education that government should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have . To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a controversial perspective heating a debate whether the authority should waive tuition free for the students regardless of financial condition . I partly side with this notion due to some understandable reason.

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Children should always follow their parents’ advice. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In contemporary times, there is a growing debate surrounding the extent to which children should adhere to their parents' advice. While some advocate for unwavering obedience, others argue for the importance of granting children the freedom to express their opinions. In my view, a balanced approach is necessary, where children follow their parents' advice while also being encouraged to engage in discussions.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

In current digital era people tend to be freelance rather than working at a corporate. This phenomena occurs because becoming freelancer give us time flexibility and a opportunity to have more than one job. This essay will discuss the phenomena and the disadvantages of being self-employed.

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Some people like to work in teams. Others prefer to work alone. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Working in teams is preferred by some people, while others like to do their work individually. Though working in a group can provide some benefits, it is not as eficient as doing assignments independently. I prefer working individually most of the times rather than working in a group of colleagues.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory jon or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and gives your opinion.

While some people argue that it is important to accept unfortunate situations, such as having not enough money or a dissapointing job, others believe that is better to do something to improve the existing life outcome. Although I can see the point why accepting a bad situation can benefit people, I believe that doing something to improve your situation is the best thing to do.

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Most artists earn low salaries and should therefore receive funding from the government in order for them to continue with their work.

Historically, art has been widely recognized owing to its favorable impact among socities and its advancements have had an exponential grown. Nevertheless, it is well-known that in many countries artists have not received fair stipends. For this reason, they should received financial aid from not only non-profit organizations but also the goverment. I partially agree with this because instead of obtaining subsidy, the goverment should guarantee better wages in this profession.

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Some people think that uniforms in schools are unnecessary and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is now a debatable issue nowadays for uniforms to be a necessity in schools. There are people who view it as unnecessary to wear uniforms in schools and they think that students must not wear uniforms at all. I disagree with this idea of banning uniforms in schools to a larger extent.

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The importance of community service has been increased through time owing to a group of vulnerable populations that requires support, nowadays many nonprofit organizations have been founded. For this reason, the system of education has shown how relevant learning community services since adolescence are in schools. However, community service as a mandatory labor during high-schools could represent some drawbacks and benefits.

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According to observations, some animal species have become extinct- or endangered in recent decades. What are reasons behind this tendency? What effects it may have on ecosystems in general?

Experts claim that animal species have been on the verge of extinction or disappeared. This essay will highlight the contributing factors and dire ramifications of this trend.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

People have different views about encountering bad circumstances in life. While accepting difficult situations seems necessary to be able to continue living , I believe that one should try to change the situations towards a path of growth.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

It is true that an increasing number of people are more prone to find out the history behind the

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Some people believe that governments should invest more in public transportation systems to reduce traffic congestion and pollution. Others argue that the focus should be on improving roads and highways. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In contemporary society, there is an ongoing debate whether the investment of the public transportations should be valuable to lower hazardous pollution or other think that improves in roads and highways are as much as important. In this essay, I will discuss both views from my personal perspectives.

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Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, technological progress has been drastically improved. Every day at least there are new upgraded technologies such as computers. As a device that have a function to manipulates information and data, computers become the most ingenuity device of the last hundred years. In fact, I agree with those who feel that computers are the most creative creation for the last hundred years.

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