IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 439

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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In today’s competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents go out to work. While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parents’ absence. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In this fast paced economic era, numbers of married womans decided to work along with their husbands to reach family's finanancial stability. Some believe that this approach could benefit children of these families, whilst others state that this generation might experienced various drawbacks such as lack of parental support, emotional support and lonliness. In this essay i will shed some lights about the positive and negative impacts of the given notion.

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Nowadays, instead of locally sourced produce, many supermarkets sell a variety of imported foods from all around the world. Does this advantage outweigh the disadvantage?

These days increasing the very strong local items. All supermarkets sell many products and foods from all around the world. it becomes a country with more cons. In this essay, I will discuss it.

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Today, many people use the internet and smartphones to transfer money to friends, family, and businesses. Is this a positive or negative development?

Transactions of money among people and businesses has been a daily occurrence since many millenia. Although in the past transfering was a tangible activity involving notes and coins, with the advancements in internet and mobile technologies, the physical aspect of fund transfering has now mostly transitioned into electronic means. In my opinion, I believe that this transformation is a favourable evolution due to several key benefits.

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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe that they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

There have been competing views on whether skilled workers should work in the country that trained them. In my opinion, they should be grant a freedom of movement in order to achieve their career fulfillment.

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Some people think that secondary school children should study international news as one of the school subject. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge

Exercise can be useful or cause some mistakes in health. Various people exist in the world, so everyone can not do every exercise, and some exercises can harm the division of people; in my opinion, I agree about this topic, and I will discuss my results.

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In many countries governments are investing in new technology to deal with the public. Why is this happening? Do you think it is an appropriate use of government money?

Nowadays, technology is an indispensable thing in residents lives because of its convenience, that is why many countries from all around the world are prioritizing in developing technology in order to deal with the public. This writer will explain why it is happening and why investing in high-techs like manufacturers and builders is a worthwhile use of government money.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels off sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

High amount of sugar which leads to many diseases is being manufactured in lots of food and beverages and I agree that increasing the prices of them can prevent individuals from consuming more sugar because sugar makes people overweight and the high prices are the best way to decrease sales.

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In many countries governments are investing in new technology to deal with the public. Why this is happening? Do you think this is an appropriate use of government money?

New technology is invested by governments in many countries to tackle with the society. Due to the increasing demand for efficient and accessible public services this will happen in the future. Probably this may be a useful invest in government money.

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In many countries governments are investing in new technology to deal with the public. Why is this happening ? Do you think this is an appropriate use of governments money.

In this day and age, high-tech devices are being invested by the governments to cope with the public. This writer believes that this method will cause negative effects on the dwellers and it will be the foundation to stimulate the reactionary.

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Some people believe that children should be banned from using their phones during the school day. Others believe that children should be allowed to use their phones. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, We are living in the era of technology and one of the most technological trend is the cell phone. While some people people argue that childten should be prohibited from using their phones during school days, others advocated that phones should be in available for children . From my point of view , I totally agree that students should not be allowed to use their mobiles in the school days.

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Competition for university study is becoming increasingly strong. Why are university become more competitive? Is this positive or negative development

Nowadays, the increasing of the competition between the universities is the serious issue. This writer will discuss the reason that make the competition is globalization and I believe that the consequences will be wholly positive that show the talent of student.

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Some people think most crimes are the result of circumstances like poverty and other social problems. Others believe that they are caused by people who are bad in nature. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The global economic downturn has led to an uptick in crime rates across many nations. While some attribute this rise to poverty and societal issues, others, including myself, contend that criminal behavior stems from individual moral failings.

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Some people think that a country’s progress is completely dependent on its economic success, while others believe that other factors are also important. What are the different factors contributing to the progress of a country? Do you believe that only one factor is important compared to others?

It has been argued by some individuals that the development of countries is solely relied on financial success. I think, other factors such as education and health can contribute. Moreover, those factors also have an equal degree of significance as another factor.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree ot disagree with this statement?

Some say that In the coming years traditionally produced, on paper media would be withdrawed by digital solutions, and that the modern form of getting information would not require any payments from users. I entirely support the statement that printed words are not likely to survive in the upcoming era. However, I do not believe that journalists would survive if the access to their work will be for free.

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in some countries, the difference inage between parents and children is generally greater than it was in the past. do you think advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

It is pivotal true that many parts of the world have an increasing generation gap among the guradians and their kids as compared to the past. Although this statement has some praiseworthy points, the disadvantages are overwhelming and prevail over the merits.

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Some people think that criminals should be given longer term imprisonment, so as to reduce the crime rate. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A handful of individuals believe that the crime rate could be reduced by putting criminals behind bars for a longer duration. I strongly disagree with the statement while punishing offenders is important, it is not the only way to improve violations.

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New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. Do you think the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

With the evolution of new technologies in the play arena, the current generation of children prefers to indulge themselves in the latest gaming devices and spend a majority of their spare time gazing at a variety of screens that eventually keep them entertained. I, however, find this rising trend fairly dysfunctional and believe its demerits outweigh the merits to a fair extent.

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Some people believe that successful sports teams are always those with the strongest or fittest players. Others think that success depends more on the team’s mental strength. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

One of the highly controversial issue today relates to whether success of sports team depend on strongest players or on team's mental strength. In this essay, I am going to examine this question from both points of view and then giving my opinion on the matter.

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In some countries people’s weight has significantly increased while their levels of health have decreased. What do you think may be the causes of this problem and what solutions can you suggest solving them?

Nowadays in some countries people have become more obese while in contrast their health have significantly decreased. This is due to the fact that fast food and unhealthy eating habits have become common among individuals. It can be dealt with in different ways like promoting and educating people on following a healthy diet.

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Some schools start teaching a foreign language in primary school years. Do the advantages of teaching foreign languages to young children outweigh its disadvantages?

Foreign language training in a kid's early school time is a crucial step developed by some educational institutions. It has a plethora of benefits and a few drawbacks which will be discussed further in this essay. From my perspective, its advantages are overcoming the negative outcomes of this trend.

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