IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 438

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Many graduates want to start their first job in a big corporation. Many others prefer to work for a small company first. What are the different advantages in each decision?

There is a constant debate between graduates about their next steps in the work industry, and most of the time they have to choose between a big corporation or a small company. But what is the best option and what should they consider before choosing?

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Topic -"Prevention is better than a cure". Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures.

Efforts to determine the value of prevention over cure often revolve around the costs of scientific research for disease treatment. Despite advocates emphasizing tax avoidance due to high analytics technology development expenses, the fight against COVID-19 underscores the vital role of research investment in global prosperity. While treating the pandemic incurs significant costs, rapid vaccine and antiviral drug development proves crucial in halting the virus and saving lives. Balancing preventive measures and therapeutic funding is essential for effectively addressing unforeseen health crises.

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Most countries want to improve standard of living through economic development,however, others think social value is lost as a result. Do you think the advantages of economic development outweigh the disadvantages?

There is an increasing tendency to focus on the standard of living among many countries through economic development. Some people believe that, social value is neglected while achieving economic development. I firmly believe that, if social values are ignored, the advantages of economic improvement outweigh the disadvantages.

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NOWADAYS PEOPLE ARE IMMIGRATING TO DEVELOPED WORLD. DISCUSS ITS REASONS AND STATE ITS CONSEQUENCES

Numerous countries are facing a complicated challenge where capable well-rounded individuals are leaving their own country to a more economically stabilized country. Hence, those countries are experiencing labour shortages in various different sectors. There are a plethora of reasons responsible for such a trend and dire consequences are following closely to this trend.

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The Internet should be made free for everyone. Do you argree or disagree

In today’s civilization, the Internet has become an essential part of our lives, but undeniably it is still costly for some people to have access to it. This is particularly true for people with lower income range. I strongly believe that the Internet should be free for everyone. Although free Internet might bring harm to more people by allowing exposure to negative contents, free Internet leads to equality of access world knowledge and improved economy. This essay further elaborates to provide explanation and support my point of view.

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It is commonly believed that nowadays main factors that affect a child's development are media, pop culture and friends. A different point of view is that family plays the most significant role. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Write at least 250 words.

Certain people consider media, pop culture and friends to be the most important aspects that influence children’s growing up, while others believe that nearest people play a vital role. In my view, family’s attention overcomes the impact of outside factors.

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Most of the people send text messages rather than calling. Explain the reasons for it. Do you think sending text message is an advantage or disadvantage?

Through development of technology, we have found two main ways to communicate long distance, phone calls and text messages. Both help us in reaching another person miles away. Although, sending text messages may rather serve a disadvantage in comparison to calling. Text messages may give people the wrong impression as we can interpret it in different ways.

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Some people think that studying online is more effective than studying on campus. What are the advantages and disadvantages of online study?

While a faction of people holds the notion that virtual study is more effective than campus study, others argue that online education is not beneficial for learners. This essay will delve into the both view points with relevent illustrations.

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The rise of social media has affected personal relationships and society as a wole. Do the advantages of using social media for communication outweigh the disadvantage.

In today digital age, the improvement of social media has a big impact on personal relationships. This author believes that the benefits of global connectivity and education outweigh the drawback of fake news.

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In most countries people prefer to rent rather than buying them? Write advantage and disadvantages of renting home?

It is argued that in some countries society tends to lease houses instead of owning them. This, could give benefits and some detrimental effects. Therefore, in this essay, I would like to elucidate both views and give some relevant evidence.

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Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now “one big traffic jam”. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from owning cars?

For the past three decades, road congestions have been growing because of the escalation of car ownership. However, I think, the term of "one big traffic jam" is too exaggerated to be applied for the whole world, yet it is true that several governments are in charge to tackle certain traffic.

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Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The maps illustrate information about the change of Happy Valley Shopping Center, over a 30-year period from 1982 to 2012.

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In some countries, younger people are neglecting their rights to vote. WHAT problems does this cause and what are some possible solutions? v.1

Denoted as a democracy assurance in a national regime, elections held by several nations have unsolved problems, at least until nowadays, juveniles have less to no willingness to choose their representative, so public interest cannot be accommodated well. This phenomenon likely occurs because the representative is unable to show their vision and has skills beneath the expectation. Moreover, it is possible to solve this problems by providing better campaign materials and extension methods.

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Rich countries often give money to poorer countries,but it does not solve poverty .Therefore develop countires should give other types of help to poor countries rather than financial aid .To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

It is well known that almost all rich nations help poor nations. However, some people think that it might not solve the property problems of poor nations by donating money, they suggest that developed countries should provide other types of help to the poor ones. From my point of view, I am not that opposed to donating money, but it should be better by providing other types of help.

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Many manufactured food and drinks contain high level of sugars which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Many products these days use sugar as one of their ingredients specially in the food and drink industry. People demand that processed goods with high doses of sugar, the reason of many health problems, should be more pricey so people will be hesitant and consume less sugar. I strongly disagree with this view, because it will be unfair for the home industry that uses sugar as their main ingredients and even the low sugar products.

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Students should focus on learning in the classroom rather than show their status by wearing fashionable clothes. Thebefore, all students have to wear school uniforms. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, many people think that students should not give much importance to social media platforms, they should give much of their concentration to education in schools and universities. This young generation focuses much on their personality rather then studies such as good dressing, nice living standard, and branded cars.

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Some university students are in favor of studying different subjects rather than focusing on one main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Nowadays, university students are at the frontier of knowledge. A large number of graduates are in favor of studying various subjects at one time, while some of them assert that it should be better to adept only in one subject. While I believe that there will be more demand for highly expert individuals in the near future because of rapid pace of technology, I am firmly in agreement with those who wants to study different subjects simultaneously, because this approach provide comprehensive prospect toward science.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problem are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or an negative development?

Currently, there are rising number of people with health issues choosing alternative medicines and treatments instead of consulting to doctors. This trend could become an unprecedented situation as alternatives medications have not gone through proper medical trials.

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Students should focus on learning in the classroom rather than show their status by wearing fashionable clothes. Thebefore, all students have to wear school uniforms. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is true that pupils should emphasize learning in the classroom rather than show state by dressing in trendy garments. All pupils should wear school uniforms. I completely agree with the idea that students should concentrate on learning for education rather than simply wearing fashionable clothes.

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As in many cases, a huge part of governments’ monetary resources are dedicated to education, some argue that scholars must be taught in a way to be useful exclusively for society, regardless of their own aims. However, others including me believe that one of the main goals of education is gaining personal goals.

As in many cases, a huge part of governments’ monetary reources are dedicated to education, some argue that scholars must be taught in a way to be useful exclusively for society, regardless of their own aims. However, others including me believe that one of the main goals of eduaction is gaining personal goals.

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