IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 50

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Multicultural societies, where people of different groups live together, bring more benefits than drawbacks to a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is an argument that if people from different backgrounds live together, it will bring more advantages to a country than disadvantages. I totally agree with this statement, and I will present my points in this essay.

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Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individual and societies.To what extent do you agree?

A handful of people ponder that social media platforms especially Facebook brought a plethora of pessimistic effects to people and the community. I am not in consummate accord with this notion, however, I will highlight both sides in forthcoming paragraphs. The predominant justification to support my viewpoint is that Facebook has helped people to interact with different countries and learn about each other cultures. To be more precise, In this cutting-edge era, with the hand of Facebook people can make friendships or relations outside of their territories and can learn different values and learnings. Another factor is that Facebook aids folks to earn money by doing e-commerce business . For example, people can now easily sell anything on Facebook marketplace place such as, their home furniture, handicrafts and many more. As a result, Facebook has brought reap benefits to society. ...

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Today, newspapers and televisions are giving detailed descriptions on crimes. Some people believe such a practice will cause bad consequences and thus media should be restricted. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Public concern regarding the criminal information presented on several platforms becomes a hot topic since some individuals argue that it provides negative effects and requires to be banned. To response this issue, I agree with the aforementioned statement since it contributes drawbacks for the audiences related to the physical and mental health.

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Throughout history, people have dreamed of living in a perfect society but nobody has agreed on what an ideal society would look like. What do you think is the most important element needed to make a society perfect? How can the ideal society be achieved?

During the history of mankind people have always argued about what is an ideal society and dreamed of it. This essay will discuss which element is essential for such society and how humanity may achieve it.

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More and more people are relying on their private cars as a major means of transportation. Describe some of the problems over resilience on cars can cause and suggest atleast one possible solution.

In the fast-paced life, majority of folks are choosing to use their own vehicle instead of public transport in order to save their time. There are several compelling reasons for this situation; however, there are few measures to solve this issues.

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Learning English at school is often scene as more important than learning local language. If these are not taught many are at the risk of dying out

Language is a medium to communicate to each other. However, there areguments that English language should be given priority at school whereas, some other opine that local language should be taught. In this essay both views will be discussed before introducing my opinion why English learning is more valuable.

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In many countries paying for things using mobile phones (cell phone ) apps is becoming incresingly common . Does this development have more advantages or disavantages ?

There is debate in many nations for the payment method by consumption smart phone applications are extremely popular today. While commonly held belief that apps provide the easiest way for paying. There is also argument these devices may cause some problems. This essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of mobile applications and i will express my opinion.

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Whereas some think that celebrities should not get involved in politics, others claim they can play an important role in changing society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is a debate between society that renowed people has to be part of political decisions, however, others do not agree with this opinion. However, while some people believe that famous individuals have an important role to alter our world, I agree with those who think that they should not be the part of any decisions.

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Fossil fuels is the main energy sources in many countries. The use of alternative sources of energy is encouraged. Is it a positive or negative development?

In some nations, natural resources play a vital role, while other countries are try to alter fossil fuel to eco-friendly. In my opinion, this could be seen as a significant positive improvement in expenditure and environmental problems. In this essay, I will present my opinion and give specific examples

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Some people think about the best way to improve road safety is to make vehicles driver take a test every year. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Nowadays, road accident are increasing at a high pace. Sometimes they occur due to natural causes, but more often due to carelessness of the driver or the lack of driving skills. This raise some opinions between people, like some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to make vehicle driver Take a test every year. I will elaborate on it further in my upcoming paragraphs and give my personal opinion on it.

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Fossil fuel is the main source of energy. In some countries, the use of alternative sources of energy is encouraged. Is this a positive or negative development?

In the modern era, the world’s energy demand is increasing every year. Fossil fuel is very popular in many country and it's becoming exhausted. Therefore, scientists are looking for renewable energy sources and some cities have adopted them. In my view, greener substitute is a positive trend.

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in spite of the advantages made in agriculture,many people around the world still go hungry. why id this the case? what can be done about this problem?

Nowadays, lots of people are suffering from not recieving enough food worldwide. However, it seems that the agricultrual advancements did not help to reduce this number. In this essay i will look at reasons and propose solutions.

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Many parents today organise extra classes for their children after school and at the weekends. Do you feel that this is a worthwhile thing to do? Or do you feel children have enough education at school? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

Currently, enrolling children to the additional lessons becoming as a routine. However, it shows, a significant issue in education of school. From my perspective, organising improving classes for children required by parents. Different paces of student understanding and high qualified teachers shortages could be exact reasons. This essay will discuss these arguments and includes a personal opinion.

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Recently, the people in many countries can live and work anywhere they choose with improved communication technology and transport. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages

Undeniably, more and more people make their efforts to find different places to live or work all around the world, which is more benefits than corresponding drawbacks.

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Some people believe that capital punishment are effective in term of curving crimes and should be given priority during choosing punishment. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people argues capital sentences is an effective way to reduce crimes, thus it is needed to be prioritise in judging criminal cases. To some extent, I do agree in enacting capital punishment to certain crimes that has severe negative impact to our society and this essay will discuss the arguments.

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People who read for pleasure in their free time have a better imagination than those who prefer to watch television. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A fraction of people read for pleasure in their free time. In contrast, many people prefer to watch television. The first kind of society have a better imagination than the second type. I agree with this statement. Books have a lot of benefits for readers. At the same time, the TV has positives and negatives. In this essay, we will discuss this topic.

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It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this best both for individual and for society. Do you agree or disagree?

There is a statement that suggests marriage before 30 benefitial as for a person and society as well. I disagree with this, because I am convinced that some individuals are just starting to understand themselves. Additionally, some of them don't feel responsible enough for such commitement.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative development.

In recent years, increased number of people with health diseases are trying alternative medicine and treatments instead of modern medicine and visiting their doctors in hospital. This situation causes a problem which is untrusting doctors and modern medicine coming with technology. This essay will show the positive and negative ways.

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Some believe that young people should be required to attend full-time education until they are at least 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Certain individuals think that youngsters should be required to attend full-time education until they 18 years old. From my perspective, I mostly agree with this view.

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People say that it is a waste of time for highschool students to learn literature such as novels and poems. Do you agree or disagree?

The importance of scholars learning creative writing such as novels and poems during their academic careers which was always debatable has become more controversial with many people claiming that reading and learning publish writing is essential for the overall growth of the young generation. while others reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked controversy with potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, literature and other academic syllabi are equally essential for student's development. In This essay, I partially welcomed this statement and further elaborated the positive and negative impact of this trend thus leading to a logical conclusion.

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