IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 49

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people feel that cities should allow for spaces for graffiti while others feel it should be banned. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion. lisa

In recent years, graffities are popular among people in the world. Some feel that cities should provide the spaces for them however others think that this kind of art should not be allowed. In my opinion, graffiti is a interesting art that could be enjoyed by people who live and visit the city. Somehow, it could make the cities be more beautiful and attract tourists.

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Some people say that there is too much harmful content on the internet. They say the only way to make the internet safe is for the government to censor the content of websites. To what extent do you think the government should control what information is available on the internet?

Some people think that too much harmful content is present on the internet today, and they feel like the only way around this problem is for the government to censor the content of websites. I believe, that indeed, the government should censor to some extent the content that is available out there, in order to make the online presence of us more safe.

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Many people who care for the elderly do not have enough time to look after them. What are the problems related to this? What are some possible solutions?

A lot of individuals taking care of their elderly family find that they do not have adequate time to protect them efficiently. This essay pintpoints the main setbacks that many may face and mentions some potential ways.

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Some people believe that universities are producing more graduates than is needed, and that less emphasis should be placed on university education. Others are of a different opinion. Discuss both views and include your own opinion.

While some argues that universities graduate more students than necessary and less importance should be given to higher education. Some holds the view against to this. This essay will explore both views and I will discuss each perspective and give my opinion.

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people spend most of there time at work in their adult life, so work satiffaction seems to be important. on what factor it depend. to what extent expectation of work satifscation is justified.

People spend most of their time during adolescence at workplace so the level of satisfaction from their jobs is of significant importance to maintain mental and physical health. This essay will discuss that how factors like salary and working hours affect job satisfaction. Moreover, level of satisfaction from work certainly depends on an in individuals type of work.

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Due to evelopment and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countires, many small, local business are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Recently, the effects of expansion of supermarkets have become the heated debate. Some people assert that big shops make local economy discouraging, while others argue otherwise. Personally, I believe that the both arguments should be given equal weight. In the following essay, the evidence supporting this contention will be discussed alongside relevant examples.

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The internet is a good source of information and opened up opportunities for people all over the world. Is all information reliable online? What could be done to control information online?

The internet access is a great way for searching certain information and offer chance for people all over the world. Through numerous sites, there are a lot of unsafe resources which contain unconfirmed information. Thus, it has a negative effect on study or worldwide news. Detecting and controlling unreliable information can be via browsers. These points of view will be discussed in the fourth coming paragraphs.

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Art is considered an important part of a society as well as an expression of its culture. Do you think it is important for children to be taught art? Do you think children should be encouraged to focus on art rather than other subjects?

One of the main parts of society is art, which illustrates its culture. In my opinion, Art should be educated in schools, universities or in kindergartens, although it does not to be the primary subject. From this prospectives, it is worth discussing in the fourth coming paragraphs.

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Some people believe that environmental issues should be the first priority of humanity in the 21st century. To what extent do you agree with the view expressed?

Several individuals trust that environmental problems should be considerd the first about humanity of 21st century. I significantly disagree about the given opinion because of 2 reasons.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school . Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

It is recommended to start learning a foreign language in primery school,Instead of it is also can learn at secondary school. However, based on my own assumptions, I firmly believe that the benefits of learning a foreign language early outweigh its disadvantages.

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Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, lots of people are tought to see all the stages of their lives as a rival with other people. While, Other are brought up to see it as a system that functions well when all parts work with each other. But which quality is better for each person to gain? In this essay i will discuss both views and give my own opinion.

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21. Rising university fees and scarce employment prospects for graduates ave led some people to say that univercities should not teach arts subjects like philosophy and history, and only offer practical degree courses that maximum use chances of employment agree or disagree?

Rising university fees and scare employment perspectives for students are concerned by some people that art subjects like philosophy and history should be over. Universities should only offer practical degree that can increase a chance of employment. I partially agree with this statement. The reasons and examples will be dicussed below.

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Some think the best way to motivate and encourage people to work hard is to pay them based on how much they produce and sell. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In terms of hardwork, there is a need for a motivating factor to encourage workers to do more. However, I do not agree with those who feel paying individuals according to how much they produce and sell is the proper hardwork incentive. This is because I think it allows business workers to fear set backs and produces money driven employees.

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Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now “one big traffic jam.” How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?

Nowadays, through the last three decades, the percentage of humans who have cars has risen sharply in many places around the world. So, in this essay, we will discuss the cause of increasing car ownership and what the government will do to reduce the traffic problem.

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Traditional medicine, such as acupuncture and herbal remedies, is very popular in some countries. Those who practise traditional medicine claim it is better than modern medicine in maintaining and improving health. Do you agree or disagree with this viewpoint?

In this current time, a large number of people in certain countries indulge in conventional medicine such as acupuncture and herbal drinks and they claim that healthwise it is significantly better. I do not agree with this sentiment as I feel they lack devices to monitor the advancement of diseases and there are limited scientific backing for this opinion.

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Wealthy countries should accept more refugees and provide them with basic assistance, such as food and housing. What extent do you agree or disagree?

The global refugee crisis has placed millions of people in critical need of facilitate due to war and natural disasters. I strongly agree that wealthy nations should accept more refugees and provide them with essential assistance, as they have the resources to do. Moreover, evacuees can have a positive impact on rich countries by contributing skills.

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Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination, while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance. Discuss both vews and give your own opinion.

There is no denying the fact that achieving success requires several factors. While it is held belief that hard work and determination lead to certian success, there is also an argument that money and appearance play a significant role also.

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Today,people are using the things and throwing or replacing it with latest models or latest fashion. Do the disadvantages of throwaway society outweigh any possible economic advantage ?

There are different perceptions about keeping stuffs. Some people think chasing fashion makes life more intersting, and replacing things also be seen as a good way to represent personalities. However, in my opinion, have a habit to keep things in a good way and buy them for long-term use is more appreciatable. In this essay, I will introduce 3 reasons.

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Some believe that because everyone needs a place to live, governments should provide houses for those who are too poor to afford their own. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Opinions differ regarding whether or not individuals who cannot afford houses are given by governments' policies because a housing is crucial for people to live. While critics insist that people have a responsibility to buy a house, I personally strongly disagree with this assertion since problem that individuals cannot afford it is governments' responsibilty.

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In today's world,there has always been a debate.Whether parents or schools should be responsible for educating children how to become excellent members of society.The views of both sides are reasonable .Moreover it is very important to consider the advantages of each other's views. On the other hand,many people believe that parents play a crucial role in shaping children's values and behaviors .Parents are the first teachers in their children's lives .They have the opportuniy to instill morality and ethics form an early age.For example,through daly interacton ,parents can teach their children the importance of honesty,kindness and respect.Family gatherings and traditions also provide an environment for children to learn social norms and community importance.In addition,parents can set a good example of behavior ,and children will often imitate them.When they saa their parents h...

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