IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 55

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Fewer people are reading books these days. Therefore we should close all libraries and use the funds for something more urgent like healthcare. Do you agree or disagree,

It has been claimed that the number of people reading books has decreased significantly these days. The resources, thus, would be better utilized for other issues, such as healthcare. I strongly object to this idea as I believe that libraries are vital as much as healthcare centres are.

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Some people think that the main purposes of school is to turn children into good citizens and workers, rather to benefit them as individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that the main purpose of schools is to prepare students to become responsible citizens and efficient employees, rather than focusing on student's personal growth. In my point of view, i believe that the primary purpose is to develop students as individuals, helping them grow in knowledge and physically, instead to using them to serve social roles.

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It is a good idea for people to continue working in their old age if it is possible for them to do so. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, older generations are sustaining their health, mentally and physically which allow them to perform daily tasks smoothly, Recent years have seen a significant debate that elderly people shall continue working, I fully agree with this opinion as it will maintain their mental health, Moreover it will be a continued source of income to satisfy their purchasing needs.

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Some people believe that children should start formal schooling at a very young age, while others argue that they should wait until they are at least seven years old. Explore both perspectives and share your own opinion. Support your response with reasons and any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

There are too many minds of the right behavior of the children. It is quite huge topic that could be connected with any permissions to your child, a health care, a circle of communication and others. The most popular and important problem is education. So, in which age children shoul begin their formal education. Some people believe it is important to start formal education at a very early age, whereas others think otherwise.

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Young people are often influenced by their peers? Do the advantages of peers outweigh the disadvantages?

Adolescents are frequently impacted by their peers. This statement has both benefits and drawbacks which will be discussed further in the following paragraphs .

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Young people are often infuenced by their peers.Do the advantages of peer pressure outweigh the disadvantages?

It is argued that the main influencer in youngsters' lives is peer pressure.While the disadvantages of peer pressure are often highlightened,there are also situations where the advantages can outweigh these drawbacks.

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Some feel that tourism endangers culture while others feel it is beneficial. DIscuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Owning to an increasing of tourism industry, some argue that it could lead to negative effects in culture. However, others believe that it is advantage. In this essay, both of these views will be discussed and supported by convincing opinions.

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Some people think young people should be required to have full time education until they are at least 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree? You should write at least 250 words

Nowadays indviduals said that students must have full time studying untile they reach 18 years. I believe that students must consume most of their time on education because they need to enter a university and during this time they are not required to a huge load.

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In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this .

It is often argued that some nations encourage their teenagers to have a vaccation trip for 12 months, there is also an argument that opposes it. This essay will discuss both the benefits and the drawbacks.

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#62. Task2: The number of people interested in cosmetic surgery is increasing in order to improve their physical apperance. Why do people do operations to change the way they look? Do you think it is positive or negative development?

There is onging debate over whether cosmetic surgery should be encourged for people seeking for better physicial apprence. Some believe that a fabulous look will build-up people's confidence and is valuable in job hunting and match making. While others argue that natural aging is more meaningful and peole should aviod generating fake faces that related to high-tech surgery. In my view, cosmetic surgery has advantages in improving people's physical apperance and gaining confidence, it also has drawbacks such as high cost and risks in its complications.

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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Children also have various preferences, about what they are interested to or not. Thus, their surroundings should be considerate and put respect to their choices because it also can affect how other people perceive them. From my perspective, I believe both in giving choices freely or becoming strict to it, is necessary. However, I side with giving a decisive situation to children to decide iwhat would affect them.

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Some of the people ay that it would be better if the majorities of the employees worked from home instead of travelling to work place everyday. Do you think advantages outweigh disadvantages.

Some people assume that workers should work from home, rather than going to the workplaces everyday. In my view, the positive aspects surpass remarkably downsides, because humans are capable of allocating more time to themselves and traffic jams decrease incredibly.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic Some people think that schools should choose students according to their academic abilities, while others think it is better to have students of different abilities studying together. Discuss both views and state your own opinion?

Some are of the opinion that schools should select students with the same level of mindset and receptivity, but on the other hand, some think that pupils of different levels should participate in the same class.Before i state this opinion , i would like to put forth both viewpoints.

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Differences between countries become less evident each year. Nowadays all over the world, people share the same fashions, advertising, brands, eating habits, TV channels. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

These days, homgenization has been developed tremonsously, which is hard to recognise the differences between nations. This leads people follow the same trends, brands, and even eating habits. There are some merits and demerits regarding this issue and it'll be discussed that the advantages of this issue override its negatives.

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Some say that the standard of behavior among children has worsened and that this is their parents’ fault; others say that schools are to blame. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

People argue over the responsibility of children's bad action between schools and parents. This essay is going to discuss both views on parents and schools.

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Some people believe that it is important to give gifts and presents to friends and family to show that we care about them.Others think that there are better ways to show that we care about them.discuss both views and give your opinion.

Family and friends are the most valuable gift from god and we have to retain that gift until we die. If we want to retain them in our whole life there are two ways that we have to consider one is giving gifts and present to them to show that we care about them and another way is that there some other ways to show our care. first of all lets discuss about giving gift to them. giving gift to some one who is valuable person in our life will help us that we care about them and their value so then they can believe that we love them and they will show their care too. and there are somany articles and reasearch says that most of the people like collecting gift from others in their special occation. that will make them happy and it will return to us in various way.

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Some people think that the main purposes of school is to turn children into good citizens and workers, rather to benefit them as individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Education and educational institutes are pivotal role in lives of children. Such they ensure children get quality of studies to support their future. However, people are debating over purpose of education, whether these schools are helping pupil to be good working residents of the country or support to mold them to be a better personality of themselves. Hereby, I believe that eduaction is actually in form to shape students to be the better countrymen. I will discuss reasons for my agreement with following discussion.

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In many countries, children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some nations let a child having a paid job for getting job-related experiences, while others argue that it is a strongly unsatisfactory approach. Although giving children a work could mean that they can enrich their knowledge and skills as early as possible, giving them full time learning at school is more essential for preventing them from unecessery stress.

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Tourism is encouraged in many countries. Does tourism bring more advantages or disadvantages to a country?

Tourism is booming in many countries. Some believe that it brings great benefits to society as it boosts the economy and creates job opportunities. While some others argue that the tourist industry may potentially harm the environment as it generates much more carbon footprint than the earth cannot handle in long-term. While I believe tourism brings both opportunities and challenges in contemporary society.

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Nowadaya both men and women spend a lot of money on beauty care. this was not so in past. what may be the root cause of this behaviour? discuss the reasons and possible results.

In recent years, an increasing number of male and female have allocated considerable mony to beauty services. The main cause of this phenomenon is infulence of social media, also there are other reasons for it like frequent changes in beauty trends . Some results of these behaviours are damaging body due to the missuse and consistantly changing their appearance.

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