IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 54

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people think that quality of life is less closely related to money than to the amount of free time they have. What is more important for good quality of life ? What other factors do you think are important?

Some individuals believe that the quality of life is not about cash but it is more related to the period of free time they have . In my way of thinking the most essetial factor to a good life is having stong bond with your family . Furthermore , there are other things that can make your life happier instead of having a huge wealth and in this essay i will talk about them .

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Practice 2: Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Some people argue that the proper way to inhance puplic health is through increasing the amount of gyms. However, other think that other measures are considered. Although the more sports facilities are increased, the more people wil be encuradged to subscribe in gyms, I believe that going to gym is not enough to improve the health and people should include thier diet and healthy food as a satisfing way to develop thier health.

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Young people have been gradually far away from reading stories since they have access to a huge range of stories online in the form of video games or movies. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

Some argues that young people now is not quite often to read stories comparing with earlier because of the vast access they have in another kind of stories from the online sources in form of movies or video games. In this essay, I disagree with this statement and would elaborate more on several arguments.

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Everyone should adopt a vegetarian diet because eating meat can cause serious health problems. Do you agree or disagree

In society, people often argue that eating chicken or any other kind of flesh can lead to major life threating diseases, so each person should follow a plant-based diet. I agree with the notion and believe that it would help in maintaining a good and healthy lifestyle. The following paragraph discusses both arguments.

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All criminals should have access to education and rehabilitation programs while in prison. To what extent do you agree or disagree on this IELTS topic?

All lawbreakers most had the opportunity to learn and complete their study or provided with psychological treatment if needed. I totally agree, as it could give them the chance to survive after finishing their sentence. Also, rehabilitating some of them, curing their mental problems, and teaching them how to be a part of society.

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As a result of electronic inventions, people do less physical activity and this is having a negative effect on their health To what extend do you agree or disagree?

At the current time, we are having a rabidly improvment in the technology which cause a lot of people do not having physical activity and this leads to bad effect on their health. In my perspective, I concur with this sentence and that because of many resons.

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Some people think that public health of a country can be improved if the government make laws regarding nutritious food but others think that it is the matter of personal choice and personal responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

A good health is the most imperative thing for human being to live a heathy and happy life. Some individuals believe that government should involve in regard to chose the food and others opine that it depends on every individual as it is a matter of personal choice and taste. I strongly agree with the first statement and this essay will shed light my views with examples in upcoming paragraphs.

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Many people feel that students should learn from online materials while others feel that it is better to use printed materials. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There are different outlooks in terms of student learning methods of which better between online and printed materials. This essay will depict advantages as well as disadvantages of both views relatively, before suggests the best way to study in the school.

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Some people believe that entertainment such as film star pop musicians or sports star are paid to much money Do you agree or disagree? Which other type of jobs should be highly paid.?

It is often argued by some that entertainment such as movie celebrities,singers or sports famous personality are highly paid.Although some might disagree with the notion; however, I completely agree. Not only because of their huge fans base. but also because of their fame. This essay will enunciate how these factors justify my opinion.

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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

Some people believed that the rising price of gasoline will supress traffic and pollution issue. My contention is, the rising price of gasoline does not effectively address the problem at hand since the daily mobility was part of basic needs for civilians, so the car demand and self-riding/driving culture would remain persist. Instead of alleviating traffict and pollution issue, lift up the gas price might cause inflation for daily commodity. The middle-class, the segment that economically parts of automobile market, will remain relied on their personal vehichle.

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Robot and AI are being developed to replace humans in the workplace. Why is this happening? Do you think this will have a positive or negative impact on society?

Computer technologies are growing so fast that now they are going to be used to do the human jobs in work. In my opinion this trend has a deep social reason behind it, and have different impact depending having on short-sight or long -sight prespective on it.

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Schools should focus on academic success and passing examinations. Skills such as cookery, dressmaking and woodwork should not be taught at school as it is better to learn these from family and friends. To that extent do you agree or disagree.

I do not agree that should should focus on academic success and passing examinations.

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Some people believe that a county becomes more interesting and develops faster when its population includes a mixture of different nationalities and cultures. Do you agree or disagree ?

I agree that a country becomes more interesting and develops faster when its population includes a mixture of different nationalities and cultures. There are several reasons why this is beneficial.

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many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Dose this situation have more advantages or more disadvantage.

In today’s society, involving in ever-shifting life issues whether because of ambition or expenses, have left little time for individuals to entertain themselves with what they are interested in. From my prospective devoting most of wealthy moment of life on careers could come across many problems despite some extensive accomplishment that might happen to some people.

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People in many countries are spending less time with their family. Reasons and effect of this. Huy Tran

In the contemporary era, the relationship between family members in some countries is becoming increasingly distant. In this paragraph, I will present the reasons and consequences of spending less time with family in some nation.

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Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. Do you think it is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In this contemporary era,shopping has become an indispensable part of everyones life.Big shopping centres are popular in numerous areas.However,it is replacing some local shops.I beleive that there are myraid benefits in large shopping complex instead of enough small stores.In this essay I will elaborate on my views for favouring the positive impact on commerical centres and thus,lead to a logical conclusion.

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Some cities have few controls over design and construction on housing and office building. People think that they are free to choose the design they like. Do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages

A downright variance of view has been observed among the masses regarding building their accommodation.A sizeable segment of the contemporary era,contends public should unbound by state rules and regulations while contesting their homes,meanwhile,opponents,adhere to the notion that the government should control the public while constructing their residents.The overcoming paragraphs overlooks both perspectives and I will give my opinion in conclusion.

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It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this is best both for the individual and for society. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people argue that for the beneficial of society and individual, everyone should get married before there 30 but other oppose. I somehow disagree with the notion, and I think that we should leave this decision on their personal choice. In the upcoming paragraph I will discuss both arguments.

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in some cultures,children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. what are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

In some countries, hard-working is considered to be very important in terms of reaching your dreams. some may say it even shows the value of people's achievements. But is it good thing to keep pushing children in this way or the negative points are more? In this essay, i will disccus both views and try to get a conclusion.

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Some people think that all university should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future such as those related to science and technology

Numerous subjects can be learnt in universities so that the students can choose particular subjects depending on their preferences, while others think that science and technology fields will guarantee their futures more. In my opinion, I believe allowing students to opt for their studies can make them more succesful in positive ways rather than impose themselves to subjects that they are not interested in.

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